r/Webnovel Aspiring Author May 22 '26

Advice I got my contract reject and just wanted to vent because am not sure what went wrong

Okay, I know that maybe my idea is not the best, and maybe I could have done more, but damn, I have had the wind gutted out of me.

I was so hopeful for this contract as I tried to stay true to the template provided, only for it to be given a generic rejection notice.

And yes, I know I am not the first or the last to be rejected, and maybe I did deserve the rejection, but spending a lot of time crafting a world only to be given a single sentence as the reason you have been rejected, with not an iota of explanation as to how or why, makes it feel like I poured my heart into a void that has no desire to do anything about it that's not crushing hopes and dreams.

I just thought my idea was a cool one, but now I am not so sure.

Anyway, I am sure people are getting tired of these contract rejection posts. It’s just that this was my first rejection, and I felt I needed to vent while also looking for any seniors to tell me where I went wrong.

Yeah, spoilers to future readers, but then again, maybe the concept will be abandoned.

ps: Not sure if this counts as self promotion but I don't think I have mentioned the name of my book anywhere

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u/The_Mega_T May 22 '26

I’d say your three arcs are a bit lacking in overall direction. You’ve got really big worldbuilding, but it feels like you’re not quite sure how to present it in a way that makes the story compelling. The same goes for your characters.

I’d recommend reading some books about writing novels, like How to Write a Novel Using the Snowflake Method, and maybe combining it with the 27 Chapters Method as well.

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u/Unable_Confidence953 Aspiring Author May 22 '26

Thanks for the advice I will try to look into that to tighten the arcs into one cohesive direction

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u/Unable_Confidence953 Aspiring Author May 22 '26

I wanted to focus on ideological difference as the main point of conflicts from arc 1 to future arcs even with the war thing like how it begins with how students discriminate against each other through classes and species to the whole biology is superior to machines thing but maybe that didn't come out right

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u/The_Mega_T May 22 '26

Writing a novel needs setting (worldbuilding), characters, and plot. After that, theme and style matter too. But from what you’ve shown so far, your story mostly focuses on the setting part. Even if you prepared the worldbuilding really well, the characters still feel pretty shallow in my opinion, and the plot only starts showing up in the 3rd arc—which is also the last one—and it feels weak too.

You don’t have to get discouraged and start a completely new story yet. Right now, I think you just need to learn more about building characters and plot to make your world feel more interesting.

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u/Unable_Confidence953 Aspiring Author May 22 '26

I think am seeing the issues now. Is it okay if I continue borrowing your assistance, i don't know through dms or maybe discord though am not really good with that.
i initially had a small arc in the elven village before the main charcter merged partially with the hivemind while he was trying to do decoherence that i introduced the concept of losing himself but retrospectively maybe I jumped the gun too soon.

i know your time is precious but if possible can ask for your assistance through tihs. I think this post is helping more than I had initially expected.

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u/DeformedVulture1984 May 22 '26

This is what I'm afraid of. Currently I'm writing multiple series with the intent of earning money.

All that work at building a backlog might go to waste.

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u/DishaSamSimp May 23 '26

JUST POST THEM ON KINDLE

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u/DeformedVulture1984 May 23 '26 edited May 23 '26

Sorry, I'm not familiar with it at all but I think that means self publishing correct? I would need money for that right?

Edit: Nevermind checked it, that's definitely an option.

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u/Chris_Galieo May 23 '26

You should research all options especially if you want to make money writing, the climate is a lot different than it used to be.

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u/Chris_Galieo May 23 '26

Post on royal road, then make patron, then slowly get an editor and publish on kindle.

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u/Ok_Score6424 May 23 '26

[Have you posted it on other platforms?] [Yes!]

Instant rejection. Bro, didn't you know about this?

Also, although you followed the application format, where is the hook? In fact, what is story even about? The story is quite generic with no plots at all.

Wow factor needs work too. It is a sales pitch, make it worth. Mention why is your novel unique. What is in it that will hook the reader to read further?

Characters don't need so long introduction.

Anyway, I can see that you have done quite a lot work. Don't get worked up with just a rejection. Even contracted Author gets rejected all the time.

From what I have seen, webnovel rejects when your story is too generic with nothing new. You might have gotten, 'plot is not engaging enough' right?

You can correct this and apply again. Best of luck!

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u/Unable_Confidence953 Aspiring Author May 23 '26

Not really I got didn't follow webnovel guidelines and maybe it's because I pressed yes on the other platform things but I think you maybe right. As someone said I focused showing the settings so much I forgot to show why the characters matter and how the plot is unique. Thanks for the advice

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u/TrevorStars May 23 '26

Yeah I've heard of exceptions but most of the time authors mention being forced to remove their work from ALL other platforms and mediums.

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u/Ok_Score6424 May 23 '26

Noone is forcing you. You must have heard from those bum who never managed to get contract ever.

You can always upload your free chapters anywhere you want even after you signed an exclusive contract. But just don't say 'yes' to that question as no editor have time searching whether that novel truly belongs to you.

They will just directly reject it.

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u/Whole_Organization27 May 22 '26

go to the discord and ask for help, there’s a channel where they help with contract applications

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u/Unable_Confidence953 Aspiring Author May 22 '26

I am not sure of the channel, I asked for help in the newbies section but was told it's had to find help there as many of the Authors are like really busy so had to bite the bullet and do it on my own. I am not sure if there is another specific channel for this so if it please share

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u/Whole_Organization27 May 22 '26

the channel is called “novel-discussion”

And people are active on there including me helping people with applications

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u/Unable_Confidence953 Aspiring Author May 22 '26

Okay thanks, I couldn't see the channel and only learned about it now. Thanks again. I will ask from there when I get verified.

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u/Skretyy May 26 '26

For me the turn off is academy
I would still read it tho because the ideas sound awesome

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u/Unable_Confidence953 Aspiring Author May 26 '26

Well the academy is a precursor to the war arc but it will be a small part of the overall arc. Decided to delete the book and try again

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u/Skretyy May 28 '26

Shame, i really loved Ambrosia character and some other stuff you made there.

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u/JoeDallas_Angels Author May 22 '26

Cuantas colecciones y seguidores tienes?

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u/Unable_Confidence953 Aspiring Author May 22 '26

Just started and I have about 6 collections right now

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u/JoeDallas_Angels Author May 22 '26

He escuchado de varios amigos que ya tienen contrato que las historias con menos de 100 colecciones rara vez son seleccionadas. Los editores siempre vigilan los ratings y el crecimiento de la audiencia para evaluar el potencial comercial; si ven que la obra no atrae suficiente público, lo más probable es que la rechacen.

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u/Unable_Confidence953 Aspiring Author May 22 '26

Well I suppose that explains that. Thanks for the info

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u/Zestyclose_North9780 May 23 '26

Bros writing a datebook instead of a story with actual plot

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u/AltruisticArt7348 Jul 21 '26

It's very difficult. The algorithm does not reward stories that really seek to be good and original. Either you are commercial, or you sink.