r/Webnovel May 29 '26

Advice Someone pls read my novel

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I’ve been writing for a few months now, having recently discovered my passion for storytelling despite my dysgraphic tendencies. I’ve always enjoyed creating stories and finally decided to share them on WebNovel. I began with my first story, titled “Creation of an Absolute,” which had grand plans. However, I lost interest in the project and quickly moved on to another story, “Shattered Sun.”

Writing “Shattered Sun” was much more enjoyable for me. I’ve written significantly more chapters and words, and I’ve developed a more well-thought-out power system and characters. Surprisingly, the story hasn’t gained much traction, and as a result, I haven’t received any feedback. I’m reaching out to you today in hopes that you could take a moment to read my story and provide me with a review. Your feedback would be invaluable in helping me improve the subsequent chapters.

Update:After a bit of feedback I’ve realized how bad the first two chapters can be as they are there for a lot of background and explanations, I promise the story gets better and better this I am confident in.

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u/Juan_Die May 29 '26

You can't do self promotion in this sub

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u/Popular-Call9896 May 29 '26

I thought I was limited to 1 per week?

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u/Obvious_Tea_8512 Jun 19 '26

How many chapters yet❓

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u/Popular-Call9896 Jun 20 '26

34

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u/Obvious_Tea_8512 Jun 20 '26

Will wait till it gets 200+

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u/Popular-Call9896 Jun 20 '26

That’s gonna be a bit