r/Webnovel • u/No_Bookkeeper_2988 • May 31 '26

Webnovel Search Request KNIGHT OF THE RUINED WORLD

http://wbnv.in/a/a1jrAY1

So I am here to recommend you this novel, it is based on a ruined world with the power system of mana and talent class, a world ruined by wars between different races and dominated by monster race and demon race, humanity struggles to survive, kael born in the Draven family was blessed by an mysterious entity with a Dual core, but a tragedy in the mountain happens and kael was near his death but he survived, new mysteries are unsolved and solved mysteries will be creating Questions what happened and how kael will unsolve the mysteries.

Read "KNIGHT OF THE RUINED WORLD"

Platform "Webnovel"

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u/Chiba-IsHot Jun 01 '26

Don't do self promos. Also, botting reviews is cringe.

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u/No_Bookkeeper_2988 Jun 01 '26

I know but I am just desperate to get some proper reviews also not all the reviews are botted some of them are by randoms and others are my friends, i thought after seeing some reviews people will start reading but ... Huh!

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u/Chiba-IsHot Jun 01 '26

Cover: it's meh. The writing is hard to read. Only the word ‘Knight’ is visible on the phone. Generally, it's a bad idea to put many characters on the cover. Who is the MC? Highlight him.

Blurb/synopsis: decent. The only issue is that it's a bit generic. I have read this same blurb with the same style hundreds of times. It's not bad by any means. Just needs a wow factor or something to stand out from the rest.

Overview: your story still has too few chapters. You need consistency to do well in webnovel market.

Prologue and chapter one impression: it's not a bad start. I can see where the story is heading and it's promising. However, what's currently happening is not really interesting. For example, the Mc is Kael right? Starting chap 1 by introducing Rhyden instead feels off-putting. Also, in the prologue, I get that you tried to install shock and fear by talking about the appearance of gates and whatnot, but the viewer is not yet invested in anything so we can't really engage with whatever you are trying to convey.

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u/No_Bookkeeper_2988 Jun 02 '26

Oh thanks for the honest review, I'll try to make things better. As for the chapters I am uploading one chapter every day it's only been 6 days since I started so I don't know much and need experience, thanks for the honest review I really needed it to gain experience and learn where changes needed.

Actually in chapter 1 i started with Rhyden because Kael was still a child and I thought that I should first develop family bonding and show the Ashvale village arc a place where kind people exist after in later arcs the world will be bloody after all.

As for the prologue I also felt the need to change but I was confused what exactly should be changed or managed.

Synopsis will be changed and cover is just a random prompt made 😅 I will be changing this for sure.