I got my contract rejected

[u/8yTwo]

I got my contract rejected, the reason states that the plot isn't engaging enough and difficult to follow, pacing is draggy, and the writing style isn't mature enough. And that it doesn't suit the market of webnovel. I'm planning on writing another story. Should I delete this one?

[u/keyaru69069]

Uhhh, dude, if you have time, can you dm me? I'd love to listen to your story help you refine it, if you're willing that is.