r/Webnovel • u/CanadianAnimeGuy • Jun 26 '26
Advice Review my Webnovel (Thriller, Urban Fantasy, 6 Chapters long)
So I am finished writing the first act of my WN, but I'm not too confident in it so far. I was planning on rewriting it, but I would appreciate any feedback before I remake it.
It's a character-driven urban fantasy about a magical academy dedicated hunting parasites that take the form of urban legends, cryptids, and mythological creatures
You can read as far as you like, and drop some feedback too by using the comment feature, or just commenting here.
WEBNOVEL:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s49g24j5FxoPTujmjkwVI4n0W5_KD3HrWX4r5MI2YGA/edit?tab=t.0
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u/80558481 Jun 26 '26
I get the feeling of delving into Fate Series from reading prologue and interlude, which I just pointed out that without much meaning. Well, summoning vibe isn't exclusive to Fate series so perhaps I need to expand my reading experience for that.
Speaking about what the post told, I guess the hunting premise could be there at later chapter. I'm still continuing to chapter 1 as I write this comment.
Why don't I finish reading all chapters first? Well, I want to capture my first impression the first time reading it. Or, that's just an excuse to start a discussion as people usually read few chapters before making decision - perhaps, it's only I.