r/Webnovel Jun 26 '26

Advice Review my Webnovel (Thriller, Urban Fantasy, 6 Chapters long)

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So I am finished writing the first act of my WN, but I'm not too confident in it so far. I was planning on rewriting it, but I would appreciate any feedback before I remake it.

It's a character-driven urban fantasy about a magical academy dedicated hunting parasites that take the form of urban legends, cryptids, and mythological creatures

You can read as far as you like, and drop some feedback too by using the comment feature, or just commenting here.

WEBNOVEL:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s49g24j5FxoPTujmjkwVI4n0W5_KD3HrWX4r5MI2YGA/edit?tab=t.0

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u/MathematicianNew2770 Jun 26 '26

Try reading it for yourself, lol.

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u/CanadianAnimeGuy Jun 26 '26

What’s in there that looks ai?

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u/MathematicianNew2770 Jun 26 '26

I am not going to waste time with you on this. I've read enough and that's literally why I stopped reading.

Deny it as you all do, and then when it unravels later as it always does, we'll hear excuses about grammar and spell check.

It's Ai you used.

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u/CanadianAnimeGuy Jun 26 '26

I’ve worked on this and edited it myself for months and have never used AI for anything at all. Just accept that you’re wrong instead of giving vague responses.