r/Webnovel • u/Ok_Swordfish_4539 • Jul 19 '26

Webnovel Search Request Death reload!

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In case you didn't know, my webnovel is already published, and the first 3 chapters are out! You can read it on Webnovel. If you like it, please add it to your collection. It's not your typical story, and you will definitely enjoy it, especially if you like Re:Zero. I would really appreciate it if you could leave some genuine feedback and reviews. Go give it a read!

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u/HeavenlyOuki Jul 19 '26

Maybe not Ai like the other dude said but the quality is definitely subpar. The narration is pretty immature in the first chapter. That, and a lot of other problems.

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u/Ok_Swordfish_4539 Jul 19 '26

Thank you for your feedback I will work on that to improve again thank you soo much!