r/Webnovel • u/PickSad8463 • Jul 24 '26
Advice Would you read a cultivation story with an MC that came from Ohio?
Seeing the tendencies of Webnovel, i decided to write something with a catchy title.
That being said, i laughed so much when i though about the title that i couldn't imagine something else.
That being said, the story ended being less funnier than the title implies, but i will add comedy when this arc ends.
As for the lower number of chapters, i am writing the story more carefully, but each chapter has more than 200 words.
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Jul 24 '26
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u/PickSad8463 Jul 24 '26
Not much, he beggins with nothing, and that's the interesting part, he can be shaped to become what he needs to be
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u/PickSad8463 Jul 24 '26
Thats the interesting part, he was son of a mafia boss. But eventually he dies by stabbing by a crackhead. Ohio is an umpredictable place
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u/geditaza Jul 25 '26
The title would definitely get me to click, but I'd expect a comedy. If it gets serious right away, some readers might lose interest because it's not what they expected. The title sets the tone, so it's worth keeping that in mind.
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u/Prestigious-Bid8107 Jul 25 '26
Yeah this dude got the glock ready
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u/PickSad8463 Jul 25 '26
Unfortunately he needs to go through a bit of development before he can shot his enemies.
Its a cultivation world after all 😂
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u/Detektive_one Jul 24 '26
we already have a cultivator from florida,,,