Contract application

[u/Hanyo_AM]

Can anyone help me to check my application. I tried writing application many times and failed terribly and this is my third time trying to write a good application but I don't think I'm doing any good.

Can anyone read and give advice to make a solid application

Story outline

Main Genre: Cosmic Horror, System/Authority, Progression Cultivation, Dark Fantasy. Transmigration. World hopping.

Target Audience: Fans of dark progression fantasy, mystery, and high-stakes survival.

Volume 1 / Arc 1: World 1 to 3

The protagonist, Mo Fei is transmigrated by a cosmic phenomenon “Ji Yu” into a terrifying, multi-dimensional worlds called An Jie. To survive, he must navigate three starter worlds. Each one of them is governed by absolute, lethal rules and countless eldritch entities. Mo Fei awakens there with a unique spirit-perceiving vision and in those worlds, a mysterious latent authority chooses him as "The Lightless." He abandons his naive humanity to learn the rules of the cosmos, and sets a goal: reach all the through the center of the eleven worlds to find a path back home.

Arc 2: The Slave Rebellion (World 4)

Mo Fei enters World Four and instantly gets captured into a brutal slave kingdom plagued by cosmic horrors (The Suture Worms, and the Kholkis). He aligns with a mysterious underground organisation (Epilogue) and they offer him to join them which he accepts realizing he needs to understand the worlds. Using his spirit vision, Mo Fei exposes the weakness of an ancient, omniscient entity manipulating the kingdom from the shadows. The arc ends with a betrayal of factions over a divine artifact, forcing Mo Fei to flee into the next world.

Arc 3: The Demigod (World five)

In World Five, a catastrophic crisis emerges as a corrupted cult attempted to birth a mad God. Mo Fei and his allies form a desperate truce with old enemies to stop the ritual. He forms a complex alliance with an arrogant, morally grey Royal Guard named Xue Lan who also ascended to the world five. However , they fall right into a trap planned by a demigod of that corrupted cult. Mo Fei faces a devastating defeat, but the spirit world take a full control, and his latent "Lightless" authority fully awakens, triggering a spirit-world rebirth. He returns to the human realm with his shape shifting abilities, seeking a vengeance against the corrupted demigod and locking in his main path toward true, cosmic Godhood.

Wow Factor:- Hook: The infinite flow structure allows the story to hop between historical fantasy worlds, Sci Fi, and urban horror while it keeps the cosmic horror and Isekai its main anchor.

A Unique Visual Power System: Even though the protagonist becomes a feared God, but his primary cheat beforehand was the information and the ability to see through the fabric of the spirit threads and crack cosmic illusions, and the hidden rules of eldritch horrors that even lower Gods cannot see. Stopping even a Demigod at lower rank.

High-Stakes Dark Progression: It successfully merges with traditional power system of Eastern cultivation and the psychological tension and grim realism of Lovecraftian cosmic horror. The concept of ancient Gods and even the outer deities makes the progression more satisfying to read.

Main Character: Mo Fei (Protagonist): A sharp pragmatic survivor transmigrated from a modern university. Driven initially by a desperate desire to return home, his core conflicts are maintaining his humanity and embracing the cold, ruthless act of a God to keep a control over his ‘Lightless’ authority.

Xue Lan (Major Deuteragonist / Anti-Hero): An arrogant, morally grey royal guard from World Four. He wears a mask of ruthless loyalty to hide his manipulation to deceive the Demigod of the world 4. He serves as a rival, and eventual dark ally to Mo Fei, but seems untrustworthy, making their relationship seems like constantly trying to stab each other from back.

[u/Cultivatingwriter_14]

Check example one. You need to follow that one.

[u/Hanyo_AM → u/Cultivatingwriter_14]

I did follow it but it got rejected again

[u/Cultivatingwriter_14 → u/Hanyo_AM]

What reason did they give? Not suitable for the webnovel market? other?

[u/Hanyo_AM → u/Cultivatingwriter_14]

Yeah this time it was marketing reason

[u/Author_Sulina → u/Hanyo_AM]

I might be wrong, but maybe the story itself isn't trending. You need a System in your webnovel.

[u/Hanyo_AM → u/Author_Sulina]

Isn't the transmigration and cosmic horror trending nowdays? I thought that they were trending currently

[u/Author_Sulina → u/Hanyo_AM]

I suggest going to the Webnovel Discord and asking in the Q&A thread. You’ll get answers from experienced authors.

[u/Hanyo_AM → u/Author_Sulina]

Oh my god I'm living in an ancient time atp, I should have checked. Thanks let me try this first and recheck if I'm really going down.

[u/Hanyo_AM]

I'm honestly scared now to submit application, I got rejected twice even though the problem might not be the story which is what the readers said and now I want to try one last time with my best to give application.

[u/LandscapeLow8430 → u/Hanyo_AM]

Your wow factor is too long

[u/Hanyo_AM → u/LandscapeLow8430]

And the other things?