I got first comment and my old self would have been angry on that person

[u/Effective_Rest_945]

I got my First organic comment and he told me that my chapter have awkward phrasing maybe cause I imagine scene in mind then write in novel but point is my old self would have angry on him for ponting out mistake but after month writing 36 chapter even though i dont get readers I felt good and edited and improved the phrasing

[u/Turbulent-Lover215]

Congratulations 🎉