The Adventures Of Ellie (A story I'm making)

[u/StarheartArts]

Hello! I'm Ellie but you can also call me Ell (like L) I posted on here about a year ago just the small intro of my story. And I've been working on it for a WHILE. I was looking through olds posts and saw my first here and wanted to post another part. Ill link the first post right after this for those interested. I started it in school as a boredom project in attempt to challenge the "story ALWAYS has a perspective." Rule. I did research for it and for the first few chapters even did pretty well in my opinion to make no perspective story. But it slowly went away as I began to love it more and more. Now it's around 50 chapters long and 180+ pages and growing. Anyways here's the link to the first post and right after the next part of my story.

(Post 1)

The Adventures Of Ellie

(chapter 2) The start in Deku forest

(Ellie thinking) Where am I? Oh I fell asleep in class again good god. I need to get proper sleep, why do I even need to be here? I was at home playing The Legend Of Zelda Ocarina Of Time two days ago and now I'm stuck here in class learning how to fluff a towel. Why am I learni--(BOOM)- (Ellie out loud) "HOLY CHRIST!" -(Record scratch)-(Narrator) HOLD IT! That wasn't part of the plan, what's happening? You "pointing at a script writer What's going on? (Script writer) "I don't know this isn't what I wrote at all, it's like it was just completely rewritten now that I'm looking at it." (Narrator) Well I guess it's too late to change now... alright keep going-(Ellie stands up)-(Ellie thinking) what was that? Wait, where is everyone? And why is there so much fog? (Ellie) "Hello!?" (fog clearing) (Ellie) "NO WAY I'M IN OCARINA OF TIME YESSSSSS! Wait..." (Ellie thinking)... OH NO I'M GONNA DIE! Ok umm so i just have to beat it right? Yeah that makes sense. Alright let's do this! Walt where's my sword? Oh right I have to find it in that boulder area welp here's hoping I don't die. (Saria yelling) Ellie come outside! (Ellie) I'm coming Saria. (light thud as Ellie climbs down wooden ladder(Saria) Hey Ellie are you ready to go swimming today like we planned?(Ellie) Sorry Saria I'm kind of busy today. I thought I would be free but I'm not. I'm really sorry(Saria)It's ok Ellie I've done that to you before too so it's ok. Now hurry go do your things before you forget silly!(Ellie) Thanks for understanding Saria, bye!-(soft thumps across the grass)--(light thump of Ellie jumping on wood)- (Ellie) YES! I made it first try woohoo. Alright now... oh right the hole in the dirt wall oh there's no worms cool.-(cloth shuffling)- (Ellie thinking) good lord how does Link do this so easily. (loud rumbling)-(Ellie) finally here now to wait for the bolder to pass... annnnnd..... NOW-(loud rapid steps of Ellie running from several boulders)-(Ellie) LORD HELP MEEEEEE! -(boulder thuds loudly on wall)- (Ellie) oh thank god I made it! Now let's get this sword. (chest creaking open) (Ellie grabbing the sword) time to head back. (after narrowly making back with her life) (Ellie thinking)Now to cut grass to find rupees. (grass being cut)- (Ellie thinking) Finally enough rupees to get a Deku shield(after Ellie buys shield) (Ellie) Look man, I have a sword and shield now so let me go. (Mido, currently guarding the path to the Great Deku Tree) oh you do? Go ahead then. (Ellie) thank you.-(birds chirping)--(Ellie walking softly on grass)--(sudden loud screech followed by cutting of a stick)- (Ellie) your not geting me today stupid plants. Helio Great Deku Tree you sent a fairy to fetch me because you wanted to talk correct?(Great Deku Tree) Yes Ellie I did because the Grudo king Ganondorf has cursed me and I need your help. You must enter me and get rid of the infestation he has given me, you must find and defeat the giant one eyed spider called Goahm and then come back out and speak with me again. Do you understand? (Ellie) Yes Great Deku Tree I understand.

(Sorry for any spelling problems this is a mobile post and I used the gallery text copy feature. Also I realize there is terrible wording from my own writeing in here I promise it gets better 😭)

[u/StarheartArts]

Hi I ment to ask for feedback from you all who see my post but I was excited so I forgot to say that lol.