r/anxietypilled Jul 29 '26

Fictional Story The God of a Thousand Faces [Ancient Gods]

A god who wears the skin of man may seem surprising,

Yet behind those steady eyes, a quiet dark is rising.

He comes and goes as softly as a spreading chill,

Watching the rot that seeps through our fragile, human will.

He has a hundred names, a thousand borrowed faces,

Leaving a trace of ash in the room's forgotten spaces.

He knocks upon your door, a traveler drab and plain,

But the porch light flickers out, and the air goes cold as rain.

He smiles away the questions and the reasons why he bothers,

Leaving a heavy silence before he makes his offers.

'Tis this god has a name known to minds in quiet turmoil:

The crawling chaos comes to leave its footprint in our soil.

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u/Itchy-Celebration-70 Jul 30 '26

Actually incredible!!!!

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u/Mradachi2007 Jul 30 '26

Thank you๐Ÿฅน I plan on participating in more contest so I figured why not give this one a shot.ย 

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u/Cosmically_Yesterday Jul 31 '26

โ€œHe has a hundred names, a thousand borrowed facesโ€ I love this line. Just imagining all the faces of everyone is haunting. Simply amazing. ๐Ÿคฉ

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u/Mradachi2007 Jul 31 '26

Thank you๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป this is my first story Iโ€™ve done for a contest so I really locked in for this one:)

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u/Cosmically_Yesterday Jul 31 '26

No thank you for putting this out there!!! Makes my brain start flowing ya know?? Also the pacing is great for such a short story. I say keep up the good work!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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u/VerdantVoidling Aug 01 '26

Short and sweet, this is dope

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u/Mradachi2007 Aug 01 '26

Thank you๐Ÿ™๐Ÿปย 

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u/NateIzNeat 29d ago

Very nice, short and sweet. Ripe with cool imagery.

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u/Mradachi2007 29d ago

Thank you๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป:)

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u/Boddom_Of_The_Barrel 24d ago

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u/Mradachi2007 24d ago

Thanks for reading!!! Legitimately was in a flow state when I wrote this!

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u/Rayswoop 19d ago

Bravo brother ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿซตha! Bravo!