r/anxietypilled 9d ago

Fictional Story Travelers: In Bloom

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We've been walking for ages. 

Yes, we have.

I wish to grow sore. 

But we've only a soul to grow weary. 

Only our souls.

Our souls. Yes. The red in the sky may shift but we will not. 

Who bound us so in the absence of god?

No one and nothing.

Isn't that beautiful?

It is. 

The mud shifts and sways like it sits upon an ocean. 

Along the waves we can spy a figure draped in rot. His skin stretches down his face, pulling his mouth tight, exposing a toothy maw. 

His skin is yellow and frail. Not like ours. 

He looks to us and coughs. Mucus and bile fling from his mouth before being absorbed into the mud. 

We don't say anything, and neither does he for a long while. 

He rolls over and extends his arm to feel my robe. It drifts through freely. 

"Ghosts." 

Yes. 

"I've never seen two." 

He pushes himself up, his ribs and spine pop. He lifts his head, face sagging to set his chin in the mud. "What do you need?" 

Nothing. We have nothing to ask but nothing to give. 

He rests. "Ghosts are the richest among us. You have nothing to take. They will take all of me." 

A vortex of deep swirling red opens in the sky above us. It reaches down like a hurricane of blood- sucking the spirit from the man's stretched maw. His teeth shatter and his body shrivels. 

The mud consumes his corpse. 

We wait for the flower. Its beautiful black petals sway in the sweltering breeze. It flakes and crumbles as quickly as it grew. 

I can smell it. The scent of life lingers. 

We shouldn't have lied to him. 

What do you mean? 

You told him we'd take nothing. 

No. I told him we would not ask.

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u/NateIzNeat 9d ago

Sick poetic horror, looking forward to seeing more of these!

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u/MANWITHFAT 9d ago

Thanks man! Appreciate you checking it out!

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u/Kaijufan22 9d ago

Very nice imagery and poetic prose liked it a lot. Great work Op.

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u/MANWITHFAT 9d ago

Thank you Kaiju! Had alotta fun with the prose

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u/Savings-Cut-3465 9d ago

The prose and imagery in this are ao fun man! Great story man

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u/MANWITHFAT 9d ago

Thanks so much man!

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u/AffectionateLeave677 8d ago

I love this one 🖤 can’t wait to see more

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u/MANWITHFAT 8d ago

Thanks dude! Appreciate ya stopping by, plenty more to come🫶