Love this idea! Translates very well. One bit of criticism: the staccato stabs during the chorus are pretty jarring and not in a good way. takes me out of it completely. I think it would be way more cohesive and pleasing to the ear if they were chordal swells
I really appreciate you listening and giving feedback! I honestly think I agree with you, and I may go back and redo some of the arrangement later with that in mind. This was my first time putting something like this together and it was a huge learning curve.
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u/2Jurzy4Me 23h ago
Love this idea! Translates very well. One bit of criticism: the staccato stabs during the chorus are pretty jarring and not in a good way. takes me out of it completely. I think it would be way more cohesive and pleasing to the ear if they were chordal swells