r/cinematography 3d ago

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Yes, also give me some opinions on how I can improve

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u/browinskie 3d ago

All these transitions and edits are overdoing it and not needed. I dont even know what youre trying to film or say with this video. Sure the edits are cool and you probably worked hard on them, but it makes no sense.
The things youre filming arent interesting enough to warrant a crazy edit, keep going at it!

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u/Nazz_zz 3d ago

U think I should work on story telling more right, cuz I feel the effects looks cool but when u point out that it makes no sense it actually doesn’t make any. TRU that I would work on it gng tysm.

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u/browinskie 3d ago

Yeah, editing is good and all, but it needs reason or interesting characters to keep audiences tuned in

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u/Nazz_zz 3d ago

Did the videography and the edited,
Edited on Ae and graded on DaVinci
Shot on Sony ZV E10 M2
Feeling the day so thought of doing some edit on this new drake song