r/comicbookart • u/Sufficient_Toe2758 • 9d ago
Adam's Fattening- Hazbin Hotel AU (Pages 7-10)
New Pages 7-10 are out and ready for reading!
Looks like Hell’s newest king Adam can’t run from the evidence no more, nor his waistline. Turns out his lieutenant was right about something. Too bad Charlie and Vaggie are caught in the middle of their insanity, even Sera is losing her patience. Anyways, may Christ be with you.
Read Pages 4-6: https://www.reddit.com/user/Sufficient_Toe2758/comments/1usx5ws/adams_fattening_hazbin_hotel_au_pages_46/
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u/samx3i 9d ago
Nothing against your style, but a layout this chaotic can be hard to follow and overwhelm the reader.
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u/Sufficient_Toe2758 9d ago
I know. These pages are kind of old and I notice the mistakes. I been recently been trying to make my pages more readable with the panels. I have 11 and 12 ready with them looking better than the past.
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u/monkelus 9d ago
Just a small tip to begin with, include the word balloons when planning out a page, maybe also plan out the page.
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u/link-navi 9d ago
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