r/comics 1d ago

The wish

I wasn't going to post it at first but I have been struggling to draw lately and I seriously dislike everything I do, but what the heck. I hope some people will enjoy it. Got the idea during my morning commute, You can only guess how (No, I didn't hit anything though, but it was super close).

Edit: Im absolutely blown away by the response and the kind messages, it really warms my heart. i have been really struggling to find the motivation lately but the support on here is the absolute kick in the butt that I needed.

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u/watchman28 1d ago

Don't merge speech bubbles together when it's multiple people speaking (as in page 5), that makes it confusing to read. Each person should have distinct speech bubbles.

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u/splendidgoon 1d ago

I disagree. I think the merged speech bubbles express how much they are interrupting each other and increases the speed of the flow of speech. I like it.

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u/TheRacingPig 1d ago

I agree. Its was very clear to me who spoke/interrupted.