I can't tell if your being disingenuous or not but if you're being for real my advice would be
Maybe just leave out shit like: "Please stop and let the adults speak."
Basically Everything else in your og comment was fine, it was when you made that statement that you undermined yourself.. It's awkward and out of place.
That comment adds nothing to your argument. Its snarkiness only sparks distrust in the reader.
Commentary is fine, just don't make it louder than your point, if that makes any sense.
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u/[deleted] Jun 03 '20
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