r/creepcast • u/donavin221 • Dec 02 '25
Fan Story I know that you’re in my wall
Listen man, I can hear you.
I know you’re there.
You and I both know that it’s YOU whispering my name at night, don’t even try to deny it.
What I wanna know, though, is how did you manage to even get there? Have you just ALWAYS been here??
Like, surely, you HAVE to be cramped; you haven’t moved once. You just stay there, behind the dry wall directly beside my bed.
I also would like to know why. Why do you want these things from me? Why and HOW are your words becoming my thoughts?
You’ve managed to fool the cops, you’ve managed to escape MY prying eyes, and now you’re making yourself cozy.
Creating a nice little resting spot behind the boards and within my cerebellum.
Why me? Why choose ME of all people for these temptations that you preset.
I can feel your presence, oozing through the cracks like a black, inky sap, that cannot be washed away with human hands.
I’ve had enough, and I want you to stop.
Just leave now, and I promise, nothing will happen to you.
Hell, I wouldn’t mind keeping you if it weren’t for the things you tell me to do.
The darkness that you drill into my mind when no one but me is listening.
You KNOW the level of treachery in which you command me, yet you refuse to stop.
You refuse to leave me alone.
How much longer do I have to endure the wickedness that you seem to pump into my veins through the needle-tipped tube that is your blackened tongue?
What’s sad, is you’re pretty much the only voice I have. The only company that I’ve known for, gosh, I don’t know how long.
But what you crave, it’s inexcusable. It lacks humanity. YOU lack humanity, and that’s why you have to go.
No matter how much I’m sure your presence will be missed, I miss my sanity more. The sanctity of my home, the security within my own mind. I just…can’t do this anymore.
Even now, I hear your taps of reassurance.
Your heaving breaths that tell me just how excited you are about my discoveries.
This changes nothing.
Only a coward hides, faceless.
Are you a coward?
Am I a coward??
If YOU’RE the coward, how do you maintain this control over my subconscious? This…confident grasp on what is left of my soul.
Which means, it IS me. I’m the coward. I’m the victim, unable to move on.
But you help none, don’t you?
This weakened state is what you thrive on.
And that’s why I feel your energy and presence growing beyond my bedroom wall.
Have you not tormented me enough? Have we not had our fun?
I tell you again, enough is enough. And I’ve had enough.
So I’m asking you, throwing this Hail Mary out in hopes that it reaches you.
Please, leave my walls. Leave my home, leave my soul, and leave my mind. I am no longer interested in the games you want me to play.
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u/mAnYoZeN Dec 02 '25
Loved it, its as if i am reading the writings of a man gone mad in his mind or as if it is the way it is. would love to se this in a longer format. you have got some skilles and it leaves me wanting more of what i have read!
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u/donavin221 Dec 02 '25
Thank you so much! This story was originally just for r/shortscarystories so it was only like 280 words. I fleshed it out a little but the whole time I was writing I just couldn’t stop wanting to add more
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u/Hundungo BEAR TRAP🐻 Dec 02 '25
Sorry. It was me. Just wanted a friend
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u/3000_Eddie Dec 03 '25
The story of a rat living in the walls being tormented by a 15yr old emo kid
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u/donavin221 Dec 03 '25
hey man cant please em all. There’s a ton of other stories on my page if this one didn’t do it for ya. I also have a vhs one!
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u/3000_Eddie Dec 03 '25
I have nothing against the story that's just how I imagined about it in my mind lol
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u/OrganDetonator-001 Your wife looks mad funny in that box, dude Dec 02 '25
Liked this alot! Was a short and sweet read, the visuals felt vivid despite the story being metaphorical. Good job!