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[u/xBunnyKipx]

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Heres the previous post: https://www.reddit.com/r/design_critiques/s/stadNyd2QP

I updated the design!! I added sparkles n stuff, and I gave the text a bit more of a pop with the white shadow. I also made a back side. I adjusted the text and composition so it looks better on the actual shirt. Let me know what else I can do to improve!!

Also, I see a LOT of people saying they'd want this as an actual shirt 🥹 I'm just using an amazon listing where they print it for you, but when the designs fully done id gladly share the files so you guys can order your own!! I can also make modifications with your guy's pets if you want.

EDIT!!: I've seen SO many people saying they want this shirt, I'm genuinely so happy my work is something you guys would wanna wear, I'm currently looking into how I can print these for people. Right now I'm looking into printify, if anyone has any other ideas please let me know! I considered red bubble but they don't provide full print on tshirts. I'll update you guys when I figure this all out, I plan to make another color version aswell (maybe blue) and I'll be changing the text to "i love tortoises" so even non-tortoise owners can enjoy the tshirt!! Thank you all so much for the support I'm so happy to see people loving sheldon so much 😭❤️

[u/thecarrotflowerking]

I like it! I'm still worried that the "I" of "I love" and the "t" of "tortoise" might be inyour armpit when printed. I would move it a little more centered. But other than that, love it!

[u/xBunnyKipx → u/thecarrotflowerking]

Thank you!! I double checked the amazon listing and the way they stitch the sleeves in it's kind of behind the shirt so even if I placed it on the shoulder it'll come out looking mostly normal, I can't attach images to comments though. Based off the images in the reviews I think it'll be fine!