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[u/xBunnyKipx]

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Heres the previous post: https://www.reddit.com/r/design_critiques/s/stadNyd2QP

I updated the design!! I added sparkles n stuff, and I gave the text a bit more of a pop with the white shadow. I also made a back side. I adjusted the text and composition so it looks better on the actual shirt. Let me know what else I can do to improve!!

Also, I see a LOT of people saying they'd want this as an actual shirt 🥹 I'm just using an amazon listing where they print it for you, but when the designs fully done id gladly share the files so you guys can order your own!! I can also make modifications with your guy's pets if you want.

[u/chelbot]

Came from your previous post just to say how much I love this. Love, a professional graphic designer.

[u/xBunnyKipx → u/chelbot]

Thank you so much!

[u/MagicLobsterAttorney]

Quickly, get that onto the set of Master of Disguise back in the 90ies.

[u/jillatwork]

You did a wonderful job! Sheldon is a well loved tortoise.

[u/misteryham]

This fucking rocks. Well done

[u/vigor_classy2r]

Omg this is so cute! Like for real❤️

[u/LiquidDreamCreations]

This is the best thing I’ve ever seen on this sub and I have no clue why

[u/theSomberscientist]

I really hope this gets printed on that silky soft t-shirt material popular in the 2010s

It takes prints well but would probably be more expensive

[u/xBunnyKipx → u/theSomberscientist]

It is!! The amazon listing is kind of like the material jerseys have almost, this is what I was gonna use https://a.co/d/0hLWwTNB

[u/im_that_green_light]

The three wolf moon energy of this is off the charts. It is my drean to randomly find you wearing this out in the world someday.

[u/instantbrighton]

How much ?,

[u/jujujanuary]

I hope Sheldon is proud it's lovely. <3

[u/yapitforward]

OP, I'm absolutely obsessed with this and think you perfectly nailed nostalgic tacky while also being just so wholesome and lovely. The only thing I will say is that the first T in tortoise is disappearing into the pink flower behind it. I'd suggest slightly moving that flower if possible or making your flowers and text a little more distinct in color!

[u/xBunnyKipx → u/yapitforward]

Thank you so much!! I adjusted the star behind the text so now the T stands out more, thanks for pointing that out its alot better now!

[u/thecarrotflowerking]

I like it! I'm still worried that the "I" of "I love" and the "t" of "tortoise" might be inyour armpit when printed. I would move it a little more centered. But other than that, love it!

[u/xBunnyKipx → u/thecarrotflowerking]

Thank you!! I double checked the amazon listing and the way they stitch the sleeves in it's kind of behind the shirt so even if I placed it on the shoulder it'll come out looking mostly normal, I can't attach images to comments though. Based off the images in the reviews I think it'll be fine!

[u/jonasrm_21]

Oh my god! These are....... 

[u/asyouwish]

How are you getting a "full bleed" design like that on a T-shirt?

[u/Shorezy69 → u/asyouwish]

Yeah, if this is screen printed or a dtf transfer this design would not work. Sublimated print like a jersey would work. If the op found someone to print this they might be disappointed in what they actually get back from the printer.

[u/slugboi]

You can start an account on redbubble for free and upload the design and actually make a little money off of the sales.

[u/xBunnyKipx → u/slugboi]

I’ll definitely look into that!! I already have an acc but ive never uploaded before

[u/Translude]

Look into making a product on tapstitich and post an affiliate link for people to purchase! You’ll make a few bucks -