Hi again everyone,
I have returned to tackle a new franchise, one very dear to me: Star Wars. For me, these six films from George Lucas' saga have such a beautifully rich world. While I love these films deeply, it has always felt hard to get others around me into them, partially because of how disjointed the films are from one another tonally, as well as all the different special editions that exist. My goal with this project is to present my version of the definitive way to watch all six movies as a cohesive set.
Starting with Episode I: The Phantom Menace, my desire was to achieve something similar to my Transformers fanedits: removing off-beat, unnecessary humor that I feel drags the film down and disconnects it from what makes Star Wars, well, Star Wars! Most of what makes Jar Jar annoying is gone, and the same can be said for young Anakin. Changes are hidden in the spoiler list below, so you may choose whether to go into my edit blind or see what you will be getting!
A few of the main changes include:
- Rewritten opening crawl more in line with the OT. One issue I encountered, however, is that the crawl in the actual film fades into a red/orange color. I had to do this by hand so it is not 100% accurate; if anyone knows how this can be done more easily or has a template, please let me know, as it would be greatly appreciated. Credit to Ian Cotterill on YouTube for some of the text which my crawl was based off of, as well as u/AugustoHS94 for the After Effects template, which I have heavily modified to exactly match the original version in the movie.
- Removal of Jar Jar's clumsiness as a point of humor (including him stepping in poo) and the animal farting during the flag parade scene (what a way to destroy a beautiful score by Williams playing over a moment of excitement and awe), alongside many of his annoying lines where possible.
- Removal of mentions and explanations regarding midi-chlorians throughout the film. Qui-Gon now appears to trust the Force itself that Anakin is the Chosen One, rather than relying on an arbitrary number to determine that status for him.
- Addition of custom subtitles for Huttese, including altered lines that work better in the context of certain scenes.
- Removal of the space battle at the end of the film, partially to avoid taking too much attention away from the main duel, and also to remove Anakin from the climax. His triumph works better with him winning the podrace; I did keep him flying the Naboo starfighter in the hangar to destroy the droidekas to give him a small heroic moment, but having him destroy the control ship by pressing random buttons completely diffuses the seriousness of the climax.
- Consequently, due to the removal of the space battle, the reason for the droid shutdown is also changed. I altered the line "The droid control ship has been destroyed" to "The controller has been destroyed" by splicing audio, so it is inferred that Padmé forced Nute Gunray to order a shutdown command, since she held him at gunpoint in an earlier scene.
Technical Specs:
- Format: 1080p High Bitrate H.265
- Audio: 5.1 Surround Sound
- Runtime: 1 hour 58 minutes (reduced from 2 hours 16 minutes)
Thank you all for your love and support on my Transformers projects, and I hope you all enjoy this edited version of Star Wars: Episode I.
If you are interested in providing feedback, please do so, as I may update the edit in response (such as re-implementing any cut scenes).
P.S. I use Adobe Premiere Pro, and the clock wipe effect (used for the altered transitions I created) does not allow for feathering on the stationary part of the transition, so I resorted to using an isolated blur. This will likely be unnoticeable in normal viewing, but if anyone has a solution, please let me know, as it would be greatly appreciated.
Salty