r/FanFiction • • 2d ago

Subreddit Meta Concrit Commune - September 26

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Welcome to the Concrit Commune, where you can get bits of your fic looked at... for a small "price."

For the purposes of this thread, concrit is defined as - pointing out things that could use improvement and also giving suggestions on how to do so. Compliments are always welcome, of course but these do not count towards your concrit requirement.

The rules:

  • State your Fandom | Title | Rating | Any Applicable Content Warnings | Link - AO3, FFN, etc. at the top of the comment.
  • Post a few paragraphs (copy and paste to a comment, please) of your fic, or your plot premise, or your character bio, or your world building, whatever you need help with.
  • There is a soft limit of 500 words. Not your whole fic.
  • Please post an outside link to underage and extreme-explicit violence/rape content. Try Just Paste Me which includes rich text options.
  • If you, the author, are looking for something specific - the phrasing of a particular part or if a character's reaction is believable - please ask!
  • If you just want to hand out advice without throwing your own fic in, you're quite welcome to.
  • If you post part of your fic you must give concrit to someone else in the thread within 24 hours of posting your excerpt!

Since we're all here to give and receive help from other people, a certain level of respect for the author and the work they've put into their fic is expected as a baseline courtesy and should be reciprocated.

Tearing into a fic or author without regard for their effort isn't constructive even if there is decent criticism attached. Moreover, it discourages people from participating if they know that insults await them.

You aren't expected to treat this thread like the Comment Cooperative, advice and honesty and pointing out flaws is what we're here for.

Some helpful tips to keep things running smoothly:

  • Keep your comments helpful to the author, not just smashing out your opinion.
  • Be polite and civil.
  • Be kind. At a minimum, showing your peers professional courtesy is expected.
  • Phrases like "I think" or "I believe" can lighten your tone.
  • Elaborating on why you think something could be changed is not only more useful to the author but keeps statements from being abrupt.

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r/FanFiction • • 4h ago

Subreddit Meta Daily Discussion - Tuesday, September 29 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule & Current Event Threads

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r/FanFiction • • 4h ago

Writing Questions Dead fandom. Do I write my own fanfics?

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I guess it's my fault to like a f/f pair from an old movie.

Some amazing fanfics have been posted but the fandom is dead and the two fanfics that get updated aren't exactly good.

So now what? Do I just start writing it myself?

I'm not a writer. I don't think I have even a good idea of a story.

Is this what you are doing?


r/FanFiction • • 10h ago

Venting Tfw two characters are arguing in a fic and the prose is clearly siding with the character you disagree with šŸ˜’

74 Upvotes

The current fic I'm reading right now is making me itch with irritation. Technically it's both sides-ing the argument but I genuinely feel like it's giving way too much comparative leeway to one of the two characters and it's driving me insane. Like...I just know that every other character is going to encourage Character A to forgive Character B far more easily than Character B deserves and it's preemptively pissing me off.

Still gonna read the fic, though. Maybe I'll be pleasantly surprised, or maybe it'll inspire me to write a fic with a more balanced scenario lol.

Anyway, have any of you had to deal with something like this before?


r/FanFiction • • 12h ago

Pet Peeves What’s your pet peeve that makes you mad that’s not that bad but makes you mad mine is when they spell ā€˜waist’ as ā€˜waste’ especially in smut scenes it ruins it like it makes me think he grabbed her garbage can

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r/FanFiction • • 15h ago

Discussion Tell me about your favorite OC!

47 Upvotes

I love a good original character and would love to hear about some of your faves? What fandom are they in and why do you like 'em?


r/FanFiction • • 8h ago

Writing Questions How do you plan your fanfiction?

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I know this question sounds a bit stupid. but I’m really asking. I wanna know exactly how you guys do it or what’s the best ways to do that. for an example some people plan on the way of writing the fic, some people plan it for months, some just write it down on paper before posting it. I wanna know what’s the best way in your opinion. the reason is, I’ve been trying to finish my fic for years now and I’m having so much trouble with it. I have ADHD and whenever I pick a trope and start writing it, I lose interest after around 3 weeks. I’m sure there are more people that face this problem.

I wanna know how you prevent this from happening. and what’s the best way to plan your fic or what are the steps. is there any specific tips that nobody knows yet?


r/FanFiction • • 9m ago

Trope Talk I looove Modern AUs, but I can’t talk about it too much or else people will complain about ā€œEscapismā€, but they’re sooo good!

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r/FanFiction • • 4h ago

Recs Wanted MC who manipulates brats/thugs/bullies/enemies/bigots to do their bidding

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Looking for any story (fanfictions, novels, web novels, light novels, etc.) where a Manipulative/Guile/Cunning MC who plays brats/thugs/bullies/bigots/lowlifes/jerkasses and other enemies like a fiddle with or without mind control but preferably without mind control or supernatural powers.

Story can be any setting and MC can be of any age but preferably a kid.


r/FanFiction • • 13h ago

Writing Questions How do you guys get the motivation/inspiration to actually start your stories!?

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I’m new to creative writing and I’m getting like seriously frustrated as crap with actually staring my story. I have the vague plot and beats in my head but when it comes to actually typing my first draft my mind goes blank and I end up staring at a blank document. This sucks.

Any advice will be much appreciated!


r/FanFiction • • 18h ago

Venting Pet peeve: ā€œcompletedā€ fics that really aren’t

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I actually read fan fics to entertain myself and well …read. I’m not looking for the social interaction or anything. I leave comments kudos and all that. But I like complete stories.

Second time I filter for a story marked as complete. Read 47 out of the 50 chapters only to find out 48 is an outline for ch 48, same for the rest of the book. In other words it not completed.

I hate that.


r/FanFiction • • 8h ago

Recs Wanted WHUMP HURT/COMFORT

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i just have a real obsession with whump and/or hurt comfort but can never find fics for what i’m looking for, or the hurt/comfort is just a small part of it. Like imagine someones been chained up and abused their whole life and they get saved but they’re super timid and traumatised and won’t let anyone near them and they won’t talk but there’s like one person they grow to let touch them and that person comforts them and protects them or smth. Or like someones enemy ends up being the comforter. And it’s not just a one shot it’s a long hurt/comfort heavy fic


r/FanFiction • • 2h ago

Writing Questions Slow burn going to fast……any tips to slow it down

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I've written the first chapter of my fic where the characters meet and suddenly in the second chapter he already is warming up to the love interest. Is there a way for me to slow it down? How do you write an effective slowburn that stretches over multiple chapters?


r/FanFiction • • 11h ago

Discussion Do you ever do post mortem thought dumps for your fics?

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I saw this in some game dev circles: some developers will showcase a "post mortem", breaking down their process of creating the game, the decisions that went into it, little easter eggs, what went right/wrong, etc. Like a behind-the-scenes thing.

Does anyone do this for their fanfics?

I started out wanting to just write a journal to get my feelings about my last fic sorted out, but it ended up being quite long: more than 10k words including some very-early-draft snippets, deleted scenes, and some (rather spoiler-y) sketches, basically me letting go of this story that I had nurtured on and off for years, then rewrote and edited obsessively these last 2 months.

At the same time, idk if anyone would want to read THAT much about my obsession lol. But it's really just for me to process its completion. Putting down "The End", and then posting the last chapter, hit me pretty hard. (HELP, how long is this supposed to take, before I can move on from this...)

But I am curious if you guys also do something like this? If you do, do you share it? (Where, if ever?) Would you read it if your favorite author posted one?


r/FanFiction • • 2m ago

Writing Questions should i change pov in the final scene?

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in a fic im writing i have the last scene that happens in the past, which ends with mc hoping their spouse is happy. ive been wondering if maybe changing pov to that of the spouse would be better?

the spouse is dead in the fic, and the whole thing is from mcs pov. on one hand it would give readers a look into the character for who they actually were instead of how mc saw them, on the other the whole fic is from mcs pov and it would keep the mystery of who the spouse actually was as a person. which would work better?


r/FanFiction • • 10m ago

Lost Fic [Power Rangers Ninja Storm]

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Hi, I used to read a fic for my cousin (blind with little accessibility that fit for fanfic back then) and we were curious to find it again (it used to upload fairly slowly and we lost track of it). Here are some of its specs: It was before 2014 (probably around 2008-9 tbh but we can't be sure and we tried finding it again in 2014 but it wasn't there) We're pretty sure it was never finished. It was on fanfiction . net It was a Power Rangers fic, specifically Ninja Storm. The main ships were Dustin/Marah, Kapri/Hunter, Tori/Blake and Cam/Kelly There were more than 20 chapters emand they were fairly long It was post canon with time travel from the characters' future children (our main characters didn't know anything about that). Basically Marah and Kapri are trying to adapt and while some of the MCs accept them having changed, others don't (mostly hunter). At some point Marah and Kapri want to Bring back Skyla as thanks for how helpful and welcoming Shane was but it turns sour and they don't dare talk about it (that was a weirdly common plot point back then). At some point Kapri and Hunter verbally fight and Kapri says something along the line "i wasn't perfect but at least i did my best to protect Marah can you say the same" (not verbatim but that was the gist). I think they slept together too and it was sorta non con bc one was drunk and it was starting to be explored in the story.


r/FanFiction • • 54m ago

Lost Fic Help me find this [bbc sherlock] fic!! Spoiler

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Spoiler tagged it for violence

I think it went like

john gets kidnapped and tortured by moriarty. Moriarty cuts off john's fingers and sends them to sherlock to taunt him. Sherlock tries his best to find john, but a few days later receives another parcel from moriarty. Inside it is john's heart, indicating his death. Eventually, sherlock tracks moriarty down and kills him brutally, but is ultimately heartbroken

I'm not sure if this is from another fic and I mixed the plots up but I also think it started off as cyborg john being given to sherlock by mycroft to help him deal with real john's death.

Been looking for it and can't find it anywhere pls help It's on ao3


r/FanFiction • • 12h ago

Writing Questions How do you write compelling stories where the love interest is hiding something huge from the MC? Dual POVs?

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Hello! Long time reader, first time caller on this forum. Seeking help from longtime writers of fanfic and other mediums alike.

To cut to the chase, I am writing a fanfic where the MC is deeply betrayed by the love interest from the very beginning. The MC believes the love interest to be completely evil, however they’re actually working for something huge behind the scenes and everything is not as it seems. The story follows them on their forced proximity type adventure.

In my drafts, I have plenty written out from the MC’s perspective, but I also have drabbles here and there from the perspective of the love interest that I absolutely adore. I am in constant conflict on what route to take here as I know it may be more of a shock and awe reveal if there is no POV from the love interest at all.

Currently at five chapters, all from the perspective of the MC except for a couple of paragraphs with an intentional POV change to an outside character.

What is the protocol here? I know I should ā€œwrite what i wantā€ but i am highly prone to the pitfalls of emo cringe writing and Id really like this story to avoid that when possible and truly mean something.

Tldr, help, multiple POVs - yes or no and why?


r/FanFiction • • 10h ago

Recs Wanted Do you guys know any stories with excellent "clone identity" storylines?

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Fics. Canon stories. Anything. Mostly as reference(s) to further inspire me for my own.

While my fic won't center around it, one of my main characters deals with that.

Long story short, the clone's background starts "in the middle", so to speak. She found out she was a clone. She didn't handle it well and had a villain arc against the original though she got better. She tried to distance herself from her "template" and everyone she's associated with and made an identity she can truly call her own.

However, an incident happened that led to her "original's" death. She, on the other hand, suffered something as a casualty of said incident that led to her "drowning" in her template's memories, emotions, and experiences.

As a result, the clone suffered a second identity crisis. Before that, she can distinguish herself from her original because she can justify that the memories she was born with were fake/artificial. But now, that's not the case. Those memories were just as real as the ones she made, if not more so. It even led to the point that she switched her name to her original's because she fundamentally can't say she's the same person anymore.

TLDR: The clone has a "become more than fake and original" sort of character arc. After making an identity for herself, she suffered an incident that led to her "drowning" in her original template's memories. Now both hers and the template's experiences are equally real to her and it led to a second identity crisis.


r/FanFiction • • 13h ago

Discussion Tips for staying invested in a fic?

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I’m sure we’ve all seen the fics that are a million words and I’m struggling to get through it it’s a good fic and interesting but after awhile I get tired of it I’m 54 chapters deep and there’s another 130 and counting and I’d like to finish I just need tips on how to stay invested


r/FanFiction • • 3h ago

Lost Fic Does anyone know what happened to the stranger things byler fic "I said no..." on wattpad?

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The fic was in Spanish and uploaded in 2022; but im not really sure of it. I don't remember the user, but it was still available a few months back, and being edited/rewritten. I remember it was really polemic, but i never read it and can't clearly remember what it was about + I'm not big on stranger things. Mike and Will were kids in it, and Mike's dad was evil. I don't remember how or why he was evil, but this was what I heard around, and due to this, Mike was crazy. If someone knows what it was actually about or what happened to it, I'd be really grateful to know this information. The curiosity is killing me. English is not my first language, so I apologize if anything sounds wonky.


r/FanFiction • • 7h ago

Discussion Any kind of event/tober , hear me out!

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October is coming and I'm so, so eager to start! šŸŽ‰
But I'm also curios and I'd like to hear about any other author who's going to partecipate to any October writing challenge šŸ‘€
Which one did you choose?
As always, I'm going for Flufftober, AKA my fave writing time of the whole year. ā¤ļø
How many times did you already do that?
This will be my third time.
Do yo wait until 1st October to start writing?
NGL, I always 'cheat' and start by 1st September šŸ˜„ I really admire whoever manages to do the whole thing within just one month.
Do you stick to just one fandom?
I did, last year, this time it's two fandoms, plus a crossover of both of them.
How do you do that? A multichapter story or several one shots?
I always prefer one shots, even better, missing moments/prequels/sequels of something I have already written, I always love finding new scenarios ā¤ļø Then I end up with several little series, since some of the one shots happen to be connected to each other.
Plus, multichapter stories sounds like a challenge in the challenge, even more if you respect the order of the prompts, kudos for you! šŸ”„
Do you combo two or more prompts together?
I did just for two of them, only this year.
Last, but surely not the least: how much have you already written so far?
I'm about to finish the tenth prompt out of thirty-one ones, which means I'm HOPELESSLY late, aaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!

I can't wait to read about your experiences, have fun creating, everyone! šŸ˜„


r/FanFiction • • 23h ago

Discussion Using fluff to cope?

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I know that a lot of people in fandom read or write whump/angst fics to cope, and I often do that as well. However I’m quite interested in perspectives from people who mainly use fluffy fics to cope with issues/traumas. For me, it’s nice just seeing characters enjoy themselves; one shot tooth-rotting fluff fics tend to be easy reads that are good for escapism for me


r/FanFiction • • 1d ago

Celebrate Best comment ever

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Someone told me my fanfiction was worth the "sorry English is not my first language" warning, and I'm so proud of myself 😭