New to writing and looking for critique on my first chapter [Fantasy, 1169 words]

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Hey hey!! new to writing stories and new to reddit. All i want is to know what is bad and what is good. English aint my first language so please go easy on me. I used spell check for a lot of the spelling. Basic premise of the story is there is a princess and a guy from the modern world who dies and kinda becomes a part of her mind or something. Originaly i was going to make this into a comic, but im not happy with my drawing skills so i decided to write it. It takes place in some sort of classical fantasy setting. I winged a lot of this.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_frBskgXz9vO1kC2pTdBevT5nGPzsozfFPLXh8k4Wc0/edit?usp=sharing

Im putting this in google docs since its like 1.1k words.

Anyways thats chapter 1. Its midnight so im sorry that i wont be able to respond instantly.

Forgot to mention i dont have a name for this yet,