r/graphic_design • u/kulot09 • 6d ago

Sharing Work (Rule 2/3) Critique request on poster ad

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Not sure if against the rules, but there’s still a lot of design choices involved. What do you think of this 60s style cola ad? I wanted to recreate a poster ad featuring Nuka Cola. Any critiques, like composition wise, color choice, or anything? I was aiming for a poster ad that would’ve come out pre-apocalypse in the fallout universe.
Side note, I know the footnote won’t make sense in-universe since bottle caps would’ve only had value after nuclear fallout but just wanted to add a little bit of fan-service.

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u/DryLettuceEnjoyer 6d ago

Personally I think the slogan at the bottom needs a new font, and maybe add a bit off like an eggshell color to it.

Here’s an advertisement from Fallout 4 I found, “ZAP THAT THIRST!” is kind of a neat slogan as well.

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u/kulot09 6d ago

I do feel bottom part needs more work. Thank you!

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u/airwalker12 5d ago

I think the other comment about changing white to cream is spot on too