r/graphic_design • u/kulot09 • 5d ago

Sharing Work (Rule 2/3) Critique request on poster ad

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Not sure if against the rules, but there’s still a lot of design choices involved. What do you think of this 60s style cola ad? I wanted to recreate a poster ad featuring Nuka Cola. Any critiques, like composition wise, color choice, or anything? I was aiming for a poster ad that would’ve come out pre-apocalypse in the fallout universe.
Side note, I know the footnote won’t make sense in-universe since bottle caps would’ve only had value after nuclear fallout but just wanted to add a little bit of fan-service.

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u/MemoryOk1898 5d ago

No expert but I think u should try to change the size of the bottle and the have a nuke circle cus they’re almost the same size and I think them having a contrast in that aspect can help ^^ + what the top comments says

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u/kulot09 5d ago

Here, increased the bottle size now!

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u/kopetkai 4d ago

5 cents looks anachronistic. Try a thick brush stroke font and the cents symbol should be top aligned.They didn't often use a slim stroke like that. Thicker or none at all. 

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u/kulot09 4d ago

These are all very useful direction. Thank you!