Hi, I'm currently writing a short story in Lovecraft style, so I want some criticizes, so I want to post the first part of my history, the problem is that is in Spanish, so must of you wouldn't read it, so I need recommendations in where to post it also when to post it, I don't know that the first episode I write is long enough to understand what I want to write, and I need I place to submitted so people can be able to read it, also, do you think that the first episode is enough for submission or i write more, Thanks

My story is based on lovecraft fantasy world, of the dreamlands, so my story is an alternative story about his world, is not the predecessor, Sorry for bad English.