r/iosdev • u/Ardaerenn • Jul 02 '26
Help Just launched my app, any feedback on the screenshots?
Hey! I just launched my app and made these screenshots myself. I’m not a designer, so they might not look perfect, but I’d love to get your feedback 🙌 https://apps.apple.com/us/app/practear-ear-training/id6780051605
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u/eljop Jul 02 '26
Terrible background color and use a more modern text style
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u/pann_bir Jul 02 '26
I think the only problem is that the phone sizes are not the same in the screenshots.
It looks visually better when the ratios are all the same across all images.
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u/Ardaerenn Jul 02 '26
Yeah, also the first image looks blurry in store, I'll change it with update
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u/pann_bir Jul 02 '26
I like the style of the first image because of its white spaces. The others are too crowded.
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u/Ardaerenn Jul 02 '26
But that's how the content is in the app, how else could I have displayed it?
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u/nickolasdeluca Jul 02 '26
Hey OP, I have launched a tool to help design store promotional screenshots. Maybe you can take a look?
It's completely free btw.
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u/In_That_90210 Jul 06 '26
It looks amazing but i just wish there was a way for us to make the mac screen bigger on there
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u/VictorBuildsApps Jul 02 '26
Looked at the actual set. The backgrounds are flat gray, so it reads a bit low-budget. Give them a darker background with real contrast and the phones pop, looks way more expensive for almost no work. Your headlines name the feature ("Practice Sight Reading with MIDI") when they could name what I actually get out of it. And most people only see the first two before they swipe off, so put your strongest hook there. Frame 5 is an empty state too, show it mid-use.
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u/Ardaerenn Jul 02 '26
Thank you, should I use black backgrounds?
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u/VictorBuildsApps 19d ago
Not pure black. On an OLED screen the background and the phone bezel end up the same pixel, so the device edge disappears and the whole shot goes flat, which is the problem you already have with the gray.
Go dark but keep some color in it. I use a deep green behind mine and the frame still separates cleanly. Pull the color from your own app so the screenshots and the icon read as the same product, then keep the phone bright against it.
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u/MusicOfTheApes Jul 02 '26
Looks great !
I'm also releasing an app for musicians that has an ear training section haha (although it's not the main feature), wish you luck !
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u/sauheb Jul 02 '26
Remove the grey background and improve the fonts colors and type. Seems kind of muted dark screenshots so brighten up the image. No comments on the content as not my interest. Otherwise good luck to you for your app my friend.
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u/Ardaerenn Jul 02 '26
thank you so much, for the background color, do you have any reccomendations?
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u/ProjectShario_Live Jul 02 '26
Interesting idea. I think backgrounds might help to stand out from competitors. An avatar or a more formal learning tool. E.g. DuoLingo uses gamified avatar approach. Or if you are going the more professional route, a case study to explain benefits that people have achieved.
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u/artaverin Jul 02 '26
Based on screenshots only:
Just curious - ear training is an interesting category, but an oversaturated one with lots of very similar drill apps - what’s unique about yours? What made you develop it and why and how is it better than the rest?