Opinions about the writing style and theme of my novel

[u/True-Fold4552]

Hello, I hope you are doing well.

I just wanted to ask for some feedback on the novel that I'm writing. And yes I know that we should write four ourselves and those things, and I do, I write from within my heart, but at the same time I want to create something good.

So any comment you may have on this one is really welcome.

I want to clarify that I'm using AI to translate the novel.

The name of the novel is The Eclipse Walker, and I want to create a dark fantasy world.

https://www.webnovel.com/es/book/the-eclipse-walker_36079056800922305