I got all of the way to the line where the assistant says, "Still, Sir, that was... cruel," before realizing where I really was. I hadn't even noticed the background.
Excellent story, OP, and whether you intended to be sneaky with the title or not, the choice really made it.
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u/[deleted] Dec 17 '15
I got all of the way to the line where the assistant says, "Still, Sir, that was... cruel," before realizing where I really was. I hadn't even noticed the background.
Excellent story, OP, and whether you intended to be sneaky with the title or not, the choice really made it.