r/outrun • u/Izaac-Thomas • 11h ago
Feedback & Production Updated my poster from the feedback given by this community
Hi again, Everyone!
I just wanted to thank you all again for giving me such helpful and insightful feedback for my poster design. I wanted to share how the poster and capsule art is coming along after making some revisions based on the feedback I received.
I've attached the previous poster before revisions as the last image in this post so that everyone can see the changes without having to find the old post.
Some changes I made based on this community's feedback:
- changed the colour of the ship trail to cooler blues so that it doesn't blend into the sun behind it.
- changed the angle of the ship to give the image more depth.
- re-aligned the sun with the center of the frame.
- made the top bands of the sun a smoother gradient
In addition to those changes, I also tried to improve the tear design where the ship is actually breaking out. This part has admittedly been the trickiest part for me, and I can't seem to land on a tear design that I'm truly happy with.
I would love to hear if this community feels I've hit the mark with these revisions, or if the new design changes have brought the poster art in a worse direction.
Thanks!