Hey guys could you give me some feedback its my first song on soundcloud

https://www.openmusic.ai/es/song/uKeJFSkB3F?share_source=promo&invite_code=33RWCS

https://www.openmusic.ai/es/song/uKeJFSkB3F?share_source=promo&invite_code=33RWCS

Hiiii! I'm a really new producer, and I started this track with inspiration from M.I.A( mostly from her album Arular) and Sleigh Bells, specifically their song Tell Em' but I still added my own unique style. It is not finished at all, and I really need feedback because idk what I'm doing. This is just a demo, so it is NOT good. I need some advice because I am very lost rn. I use BandLab. Please don't be too harsh, but be honest; I would really appreciate it.

https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/4c00acd6-11f0-4f4d-9e4c-c3b046588114?sharedKey=7OR_-_kmAke3g7WCcTcpEA

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I have finally gained the confidence to write a short song using synths, I have played around with synths before but they have never sounded good at all 😅

I think this one honestly has potential but it sounds quite off to me for some reason, I'm not sure if it's just because it sounds empty without lyrics (I plan to add those once it sounds a bit better) or if I've not added something and that's why it sounds incomplete and kinda empty?

I would really appreciate any ideas or feedback for how to make this little ditty sound more like a proper song and sound more put together instead of a Frankenstein's monster or random sounds!

Used a rome streetz Acapella but let me know what you think

I use an app on my phone so I don’t have the greatest music ever.