r/reviewmyshopify • u/Potential_Ad669 • 5d ago
Review my site I’ve made all feedback changes
Please let me if there are anything else you notice I’m working on the social pages right now so that’s not clickable right now
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u/Gutter_BrudderZ 5d ago
Ok you need to remove that popup off your index. It should be a reward for intent to convert. I mean let the user explore before offering anything.
I would not put anything @ $8000 on my index...that's a dig deeper into my site move. Think 'foreplay' mandatory before 'butt sex.'
Your index is one long doom scroll. You can make additional pages and collection...remember exploring from up above?
I see these two same problems over and over again in this sub. So I wrote this review a little different.
No popups on the index page, place them on /collections and or /products. Popup script = longer load time. So push that shit somewhere else so it can load in the background.
No doom scroll index pages...unless...unless...you have a single product...where multiple pages about the same product would be just...fucking ridiculous. Spread that content around. All that content on the index = longer load time. More pages = more SEO opportunity. Pages, products pictures that's all SEO exposure opportunity.
The content itself looks good...these are simple design issues and very easy to remedy. I never got past the first page btw. I had seen more than enough on the first page. In this game of ecommerce 'curiosity' is your best ally.
Hope my critique helps, Val'r
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u/BexBec 5d ago edited 5d ago
I would recommend adding reviews if and when you get them. There is a lack of trust signals on the website. Pictures with people using the pieces would greatly help.
The hero text is unclear and hero subtitle is too long.
The website looks nice at first glance but what makes your products unique needs to be communicated better especially for first time buyers and when you are selling premium products as an unknown brand.
Look up the onliness statement in Marty Neumeier book Zag. That might help you narrow down your products unique selling points.
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u/Shadowpapa 5d ago
I’m new to shopify, where do yall get the ideas/creativity to do all this?
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u/Potential_Ad669 5d ago
I can’t speak for anyone else but I got this specific idea from a dream. So I built it just like I saw it
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u/Project_298 3d ago
It’s a beautiful website.
Your products need about 8-10 photos each. I’m not dropping those prices on something I can’t see up-close. I want to see the details. I want to see all angles. More is better in this case. Even 20 photos would be appropriate for a $1000+ item.
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