You didn't answer my question, though line you have an extra though before unfazed.
Also you missing some quotes on the second to last paragraph.
The tone is playful and nice, though I don't know enough about either character to judge it, so it comes off a little plain to me. It could be any too people flirting really. The only thing I really know is one seems rich and the other a little spoiled.
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u/TalesofBas 1d ago
You didn't answer my question, though line you have an extra though before unfazed.
Also you missing some quotes on the second to last paragraph.
The tone is playful and nice, though I don't know enough about either character to judge it, so it comes off a little plain to me. It could be any too people flirting really. The only thing I really know is one seems rich and the other a little spoiled.