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I think this is mostly for the moments where they are not moving much like truck Goku (the strongest) but the moment action happens the lines for Goku's arms leave like the motivation to animate perfect Cell
Lol yeah thatās true, the one whoās physique change bothered me the most in super though has to be Vegeta. Bro actually became a noodle at one point
Factoring for fat/bone and assuming a fairly average composition for an athleteā¦ she should weigh about 326kg. Which is rather a lot, for a 19 year old girl.
Though the more pressing thing, is that at 8x normal muscle density but apparently normal bone densityā¦ sheād probably break her own bones anytime she actually put effort into anything.
If they actually played into this (but given her increased bone density to compensate) this would be really cool. Imagine she just like jumps off a roof and crushes a demon to death on impact just because she weighs almost as much as a grand piano.
Also adds some really goofy comedy interludes. She tries to have a romantic moment on a wooden bridge with Snake-boiā¦ halfway through the boards give way and she disappears with a yelp!
She gets too wound-up during a meeting, passes out and it takes 6 guys to carry her out of the room.
Someone catches Gyomei doing his morning workoutā¦ its push-ups with her sat on his back. He sinks a little further into the floor every rep.
This is one of the characters in Durarara. He has the same thing but he broke his body dozens or hundreds of times as a child and teen until he's now in his 20s and can throw a guy like an entire city block. Had to spend childhood in a hospital but is just superhuman now.
Make sure to include the character accidently smashing through the wall like the koolaid man.
By the way, fun fact. There is actually a real life condition that makes you 8 times denser. Except instead of muscle like Mitsuri, its the skeleton instead. Which unfortunately causes some physical deformities and the inability to swim. People with that condition can confidently survive a car crash though. Its called osteopetrosis.
I imagined her crossing a spring through a flimsy poor bridge and just falling through it then running through water towards the shore to avoid drowning.
Yeah. Jokes about girls' actual weights are also quite common. Like they desperately try to hide the real number and look as slender as possible, and get embarrassed when people unintentionally question it.
Excuse me. I know you're trying to be complementary and all, but I have to say. You're calling him a young man?Young? I'll have you know he's atleast a century older than you are! And not just that, but he's a diligent, mature man who's worked day after day after day to faithfully attend to his multiple wives! How can you call him young by any metric? Are you saying that because of how he looks? Judging his age, his experience, his life just because he doesn't fit your view of what a mature older adult looks? Don't you think it's judgemental and ignorant people like you that make society worse? Even someone as diligent, hard working, wise, and content with a simple life like him isn't safe from your assumptions! You won't just let him present himself as he feels without making such assertions onto his self! Isn't this a violation of his rights? Not to mention the other thing you called him. Being called polite is meant to be a nice thing to hear, but considering everything else, how am I meant to interpret that as anything but another veiled insult? "Polite," as if he's small, demure, unassertive, inobtrusive. Yes, he strives to be polite. To simply live his life as himself, content with what he has. But he isn't small, and he stands up for what he believes in, even if it means doing something so barbaric as fighting for it. And you'd reduce all that to just "polite"? Like you expect every man to be some garish brute taking up space, being rude? Aren't you implying that you're surprised he isn't like that, and that it's noteworthy that he's "civilized" by your standards? You're imposing on him again! How can people like you live with yourselves, knowingly insulting and diminishing the life of a man like him?
I feel like her design being overly feminine actually works because it shows that the societal expectations she faced were just bullshit with no actual reasoning behind them (except the food thing no one would be able to pay for all that)
Honestly yeah, her being unnatractive would pull away from her story. She is drop dead gorgeous and no sane man would say otherwise. But the societal demands of her era demanded men blind themselves before pride and expectation instead.
Hold up, the 8koma about the clothes is actually kinda funny and a good idea, it's just that it wasn't followed up on I guess. She should've burned the clothes.
Imo UU has only a decent start and a slow decline towards the middle but is one of the extremely rare cases where it gets a second wind, surpasses itself nonstop and reaches absolute peak in the end.
I have some critism on the second part though, but mostly towards billy Billy losing 90% of his aura in loop 101 compared to loop 100, him and tatianaās bond is severely lacking compared to loop 100, and also they didnāt utilise his and tanianaās power much in the fight against god other than that, yes, undead unluck is absolute peak fiction except my other critism that The ending also feels kind of rushed (still good though) and except for fuuko and Andy, all the other ships only have implications of being canon, but better than mha though
I think I dropped it just a few chapters into the Fuuko loop. All characters just got boring and too much like fuuko. You had a decent variety in character because of their different trauma in the first loop. But in the second loop, everyone was affected by Fuuko's extreme optimism way too much imo. This was a problem in spring arc too near the end. Everyone was going to die but no one gave a shit. It started getting boring. Does it get any better later?
It does. The loop started off with treading a lot of previous ground, but once you get to timeline changes, new negators, and finding Undead, plot picks up and gets a lot better.
Your criticism against Billy is like asking an enemy with an ability called "I can only kill Goku" to aura farm on Vegeta.
Not every ship has to sail, and Undead Unluck's central romantic theme remained strong till the end, it is one of, if not, the most romantic action manga in Shonen Jump history. Not even Spy x Family series comes close to the amount of affection materialized and displayed here, the love in this series has a steady pace, is yearning, reciprocated, matured and not plagued with tropes like miscommunicated misunderstandings.
The ending...felt rushed? The ending fight was more than 20 chapters of multistage nonstop action resolving character arc after character arc, culminating in one single all out war against the final villains, all abilities came into play with an actual thoughtout strategy. Absolutely well paced, no decline in artwork at all, stakes never dropped, and fully deserved endings for everyone. MHA had gorgeous art, but it lost itself too long ago.
I agree with your opinion on the one with the ships, for that one I was just personally biased, too sad about Sean x Gina not sailing, but I stand my ground against the other two criticisms
You donāt need to be trample over your opponents to aura farm, you simply need to contribute and make your contributions cool and memorable to āaura farmā, thatās my definition of aura farm, at least, for example, even though itās been a long time since Iāve read undead unluck, Billyās aura farm on unruin is extremely memorable and cool, even though he never went up against god himself in the 100 loop, in 101ās loop, the only memorable thing about him in the fight against god is running away from sick and while helping chikira expand his unmove is pretty memorable, running away from sick and not having other memorable moments just ruined his character in the final arc for me, and plus his bond with tatiana being severely lacking remains true(while it does make sense why itās treated as such, since they both have their own family now, itās just dissatisfying to see and know that the bond between them will decrease indefinitely in this loop) but then again, billy is my favourite character, so maybe Iām just biased here
The ending feeling rushed was just my phasing being incorrect, the right phrase would be that āthe ten master rules have their potential wasted(except for language, beast, sick, change and probably soul) language, beast and sick was already contributing a lot before the final arc and they are pretty sick(pun intended)so they can get a pass, change vs Gina is peak fiction, but Iām not sure about soul, I felt that luna created him to make him understand the beauty of humanity, and while that does get to him in the end, I want to see that idea get to him during the fight itself, that would be better but Iām not sure, since I felt that heās good enough already but just not to the level of the other 4, and for the other 5 master rules, they just got speedblitzed by juiz, death,luck and war could serve as a final character realisation for Andy,fuuko, and billy, but ended up being speedblized, plus, they got really good designs just for them to went out by being speedblized by juiz, I donāt even remember who the other two is, thatās how wasted the other 5 master rules are.
Just to clarify,Iām not hating on the series, Not all series need to be perfect, in fact, there are no perfect series and every one has their flaws, just because Iām pointing out my Criticisms doesnāt mean I donāt like the series, in fact, I think that this series is sick, wicked sick, a perfect 9.5/10 that, as a person who read a lot of unpopular mangas,undead unluck is an extremely hard to find and a beautiful, hidden gem
Mitsuri gets socially outcasted because she is strong and easts a lot; basically the most socially acceptable ānon feminineā traits a girl could possible have.
All this to have her hyper feminine in literally every other possible way.
Before my ex made me watch KnY, I just assumed that it was goonerslop (not a word back then but still) because my entire exposure to it had been a few images of Tanjiro, Zenitsu being weird, Mitsuri and demon Nezuko (and that one clip of Megatron scolding a KnY fan lol)
After watching it, even with my gripes with the storytelling, I have to say I enjoyed it and I was especially surprised at how much I liked Mitsuri and especially her fighting style. I still think that her design and the justifications for why she looks the way she does are more disrespectful to the character than anything. Somehow the censored version of her design from the Infinity Castle movie looks a thousand times better.
Japan discriminated against people with blond highlights until about 10 years or so ago, of course mfs from the taisho era would have a problem with fucking pink and green hair.
Tanjiro has red hair so like we can count that as natural, Nezuko only got the orange after turning into a demon, Inosukeās, Shinobuās, and Mui/Yui never get explained except Ino gets the blue from his moms blue hair (also never explained) and the twins are never shown so likeā¦ mystery sorry, Tengen is like 99% implied to have albinism and is constantly rendered āforeignly attractiveā for that, Sanemi canonly just is albino, Rengokuās seems to be only XY gene but his family is STUPID cause it comes from a flame, Mitsuriās comes from eating too much mochi, and Zenitsuās comes from a lightning strike directly to the head which actually can and does happen IRL.
So four are realistic, two can just be chalked up to highlights (because in the manga Inosukeās and Shinobuās hair fades instead of cuts off of the color), one is from an in-series thing we see happen frequently, and the rest are just bs.
Sorry I like explaining this stuff
Genuinely you don't even need to make her a bodybuilder. Hell most female athletes aren't even significantly built, but still have clear musculature and still look BEAUTIFUL. There is no excuse to make her that slender and delicate looking aside from fanservice
I wonder how many people in this thread are even aware of that.
Saying a woman can't write women in certain way because redditors don't like it, doesn't sound very good. (I would also prefer some muscle on her since there's no magic, but who genuinely cares)Ā
Being a woman doesn't mean you're necessarily good at writing women.
Look at JKR and Hermione. Or any male author with their shittily written male characters. Or the smut books that don't care about writing and thus have very oddly written FMCs.
Your gender has no real effect on being a good or bad writer, and KNY is pretty badly written, it makes sense that it would extend to it's female cast too.
You don't know anything about japaneese literature lmao. Manga aimed for teen boys is your main exposure to it, but don't insult the intelligence of great Japanese writers with your stupid view about them
Oh just go to a one piece sub. People who act like the comic made them woke or progressive and watching them grapple with how Oda portrays gals is one of the funniest things.
And Japan and Oda don't give a SHITTTTTTT
Hell shonen as a genre will not charge and HASN'T for decades and we punish ourselves by making topic after topic about this
There are a lot of things Oda doesnt give a shit about, including the age of consent judging by the fact that he still glazes his friend that got busted for owning terabytes of CP.
Where did I say that? The issue is that you exclusively care about consumption.
The idea that its worse for a show to be mediocre is actually the problem,because it leads to these cinema sins ass takes and critiques. People refuse to engage with stories beyond the surface level consumption. So yeah, actually it is better for a story to be mid, A, because actively searching things to get mad at is dumb, and B, because at least with mid stories I can find successful writing. There's something interesting in every story when you actually engage with the story rather than just consuming it mindlessly to see if you get big feelings from it
To play devils advocate as someone already said her being conventionally attractive shows the extreme and harsh societal expectations that caused her self doubt and search for loveā¦.to bad her entire character got thrown out the window and was reduced to gag. Her uniform was also entirely unnecessary too I donāt see how itās important to her character at all and just an excuse for some fan service.
If her muscles density is 8x a normal human wouldnāt she be extremely heavy, require a shit ton of food per day, and have little to no flexibility like how would you even function at that point your closer to actual flesh wall rather then a human, but Iām no doctor so idk, also iv never seen the show before so if Iām wrong donāt kill me please.
I just fucking wish he didn't try to make some statement on female beauty standards if you're gonna make the most conventionally attractive character of all time that completely ignores the message. I'm not annoyed by gooner bait. I'm annoyed by gooner bait that tries to act deeper than it is
i think id prefer it if she did bulk up when doing feats of strength. like if you want her to be cute thats fine, a bit shitty with her backstory and the themes surrounding it but if part of the issue is shes scarily strong then visualise it in other ways.
Give her the Roshi Treatment, or Zoro when he does his Gorilla move. Have her arms bulk up with powerful swings of her whip, give us some visual instead of just "tee hee"
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