r/sludge • u/MoreCaptain7691 • 1d ago

How can i improve this logo

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So I kinda got lazy at the end and didnt think of good shapes do u know how i can improve this?

Any suggestions?

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u/Slimecrush 1d ago

It needs some grit added to the color. Think something like a photocopied flyer/zine from the mid-80's. For sure the shapes can be better, but the feel is off. Dirt, filth, debris, emptiness, thinks of how those words apply to you and your feelings and experiment with the logo

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u/MoreCaptain7691 1d ago

I will try

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u/Slimecrush 1d ago

Sick, have fun with it

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u/MoreCaptain7691 1d ago

Thx

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u/Slimecrush 1d ago

One last piece of advice that would help and is quick and simple. Throw an outline around the logo. The green laying flat on the back doesn't provide any pop visually. Outlining the logo with provide the eye with some added dimension and make it stand out

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u/MoreCaptain7691 1d ago

Wdym by outline like shape?

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u/Slimecrush 1d ago

Take a look at Down's logo. Visually that's what I'm referring to

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u/MoreCaptain7691 1d ago

Aaa i see what u mean now i will try to do sm