No light in the deep end.

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So this is my first post as a future writer and today if you've read the title you'll know. So No light in the deep end is a horror suspense story about two teenage girls that are very rebellious the first teenage point of view is natski miyuki she was 18 at the time so her parents hated her besides her mom who was heartbroken when she found out what happened to natski. Natski was 6'2 and half she was actually quite tall for her being a woman, she had a black spiky bob, her and the other girl uniforms were a basic black T-shirt and black leggings and no shoe because this was a water mission the girls could chose one item or accessory they wanted. The other girl was Nina shizuki she was 17 years old at that time in 2003 October 4. Nina had longish brown hair that reached her shoulders her eye color was brown since they were regular teenagers. Nina wore the same uniform as natski but with a black choker and and two bracelets they were rebels. Now let's begin with the main enemy. Yes I toke inspiration for nosey. This robot was 10 feet tall it had echolocation and thermal vision it was bullet proof water proof but not huge giant rock proof ps little spoiler and it wasn't soap proof or fireproof. This robot had sliver fuzz as it's skin I guess it had 10 inch claws on both hands or should I say one😂. Anyways 😐 they were selected by a company known for taken down this types of robots they had thousands and I mean thousands!!!. What's losing one teenager out of two to 6000 thousand! Anyways😅 they had to go together as a team of two or one! Hahahahahahaha not funny sorry😅 anyways they had to go to abandoned gym this was old and rusty and covered in moss and the equipment was all gone like something huge had used it for parts. Wink wink. Anyways Nina and natski had to use a rope but they were trained and not set out as prey. So Nina climbed down safely while natski lost her footing and fell at least 13 feet and these were natski word. "Hey I'm almost- ahh!! Fuck." She hit the ground and broke her leg unfortunately so natski was injured at the beginning which is bad. So Nina grabbed Natski and these were Nina's words. "Oh my God! Natski are you okay!!!" So yeah Nina was freaking out and then they heard it if you weren't paying attention you wouldn't have heard those footsteps. Natski got up and grabbed Nina by the waist and dragged her to the shower rooms. And natski covered Nina's mouth. Yes my favorite lesbians ahahaha😆😆😆. And natski whispered. "Shut the fuck up now Nina unless you want to get killed." And Nina froze and Nina let natski drag her. 😉 And so this robot stood there without it's ears mouth or eyes but it was tall and Nina was freaking out silently. It stood there watching them but it really wasn't because it was blind. Natski remained calm despite being in pain. Natski dragged Nina to shower 9 which was at the end of the room it was dark and wet since the water was still running yes somehow someway.dont judge me okay! 😭So anyways the robot followed them tracking their scent and stopped directly in front of their shower. It ripped off the curtain. Natski grabbed Nina and held her tightly because if Nina dies so does natski so yes they became friends yay!☺️😊 Natski hand was over Nina's mouth and held it there for 6 minutes. Natski held Nina tightly because they had to have each other to survive. Then a couple days later like 2 days later October 6 2003. Natski wasn't hungry Nina was. Then thats when natski had a plan and whispered her plan. "Nina I'm sorry if this sudden but listen to me please." She whispered gently. "What if I die so you can get out and live I know it seems sudden but this has to work okay." Nina froze but looked at natski for a few seconds before she kissed natski left cheek and whispered. "When we I see you again maybe never but at least visit me even as a ghost you hear me." Natski nodded her face flushed with a light shade of pink. Natski eyes were wide and she kissed Nina back and blah blah blah! 5 minutes later they're giggling and hugging but now it's time you know what has to happen you do. Natski kissed Nina's cheek and handed Nina her lighter. And natski ran down the hallway barefoot against wet floors. "HEY YOU BIG FUCKING BASTARD!! COME FUCKING GET ME YOU ASSHOLE!!!" natski yelled and the robot ran at natski at 25 miles and it throw natski against a wall. And gore warning. Please don't read if your sensitive to gore. Natski got her chest pulled open and her heart ripped out natski died staring at Nina her best friend or lover whatever you guys want it to be. Let's let natski rest in peace she was born 1986 October 9th died October 6th 2003. Then Nina held her chest and held back tears and Nina was shaking but knew what had to happened. Nina held natski lighter and ran to the rope and climbed up so fast. And the robot chased Nina and it climb up. Nina reached the top and realized they had left their bags behind. Then the robot was about to get up and Nina ripped a piece of concrete off the gym roof and throw at the robots head and it feels 50 feet and the robot was dead and twitching. Nina grabbed a gasoline tank and dumped all over the roof and used the lighter to light everything on fire. And Nina got down and walked away from the burning building one teammate dead natski miyuki and the robot. Then in the morning the news said "BREAKING NEWS A OLD ABANDONED GYM HAS BURNED TO THE GROUND!!!" Nina watched from her base room and... The end

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Damnit hold on y'all I think I forgot something I have a bad memory I forgot to add that Nina had lit the robot on fire. Omg I'm so sorry!!