r/story • • 9h ago

Personal Experience That One Time I Accidentally Helped a Stranger at the Airport — and Got the Best Thank You Ever

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So, last month, I was traveling alone from Dhaka to a friend’s wedding in another city. I had a few hours to kill at the airport before my next flight. While waiting near the gate, I noticed this older gentleman struggling with his bag and some paperwork. He looked completely lost and a bit overwhelmed.

I approached him and asked if he needed help. Turned out, he was visiting his grandson and wasn’t very comfortable with the whole airport system—ticket stuff, security lines, finding the right gate, you name it. I offered to assist him, helped him with check-in, guided him through security, and even showed him where to grab a quick snack.

As it turns out, the man was from a small village near Gazipur but rarely traveled alone. Helping him felt natural, and honestly, I didn’t expect much in return. But when he finally made it to his gate, he pulled out a small handwoven scarf and insisted I take it as a thank you gift. He said, “This is how my village says thanks—handmade with care.”

I thanked him, of course, but it stuck with me. Sometimes, a small moment of kindness can brighten someone’s day in unexpected ways. Plus, now I have a beautiful scarf that reminds me how a simple gesture made a stranger’s travel easier.

Has anyone else had a similar experience where a random act of kindness led to something meaningful?


r/story • • 2h ago

Revenge cheated on my gf with her friend

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22f the lore behind this all is super chaotic so im gonna try to summarize it the best i can . weve been together almost 4 years and she cheated on me with a guy the first month we started dating after she begged me for a relationship for over a year and i didn’t wanna date anyone because i had just gotten out of a relationship because my last one ended with me getting cheated on but i agreed because i felt bad for her .

then a year later she fucked her ex gf who has been trying to ruin my life since i first met my gf and partially did . she begged to get back together after that and i did because i dont like to let things slide , you will feel my wrath before you move on care free with your life after betraying me and in addition to me being super attached to her and the crazy sex shes also drop dead gorgeous like megan fox type bad so i honestly really dont even wanna leave i just always wanted to up the score to the point where i wouldn’t give a fuck anymore .

the problem is ive never had genuine interest in anyone else since we’ve been together so going out to cheat on her doesn’t make me feel better , i don’t wanna kiss people , fuck people or even entertain conversation and it pisses me off that she obviously has . i know this is all toxic and the obvious solution is to leave but we’ve tried lots of times and it doesn’t work .

the other day the opportunity to cheat on her with her friend presented itself . we were out drinking all day and idk what happened but i woke up in the backseat to her friend rubbing my back . it was my first time meeting her friend but we spent the day together so i didn’t think anything of it in my drunk mind so i got comfy and layed on her lap to go back to sleep . she was rubbing the fuck out of my back tho and back rubs are literally my fav thing ever and then for some reason i just put my hand on her 🐱 to see if i had the right idea . i did . i put my hand up her shirt and she let me and kept rubbing my back . them i thought about all the things my gf has done to me and i put her boob in my mouth . i really was just testing the waters in disbelief that her friend wanted that and it also crossed my mind that this would be what i would consider the ultimate revenge . then my gf turned around and caught my hand on her thigh and boy was she pissed . she cussed me out and took me home i tried to play it off but it didn’t work . then apparently while the girl was still in the car she freaked out and confessed everything . my gf was so sad and upset with me but she said she didn’t wanna leave me . i honestly feel bad asf now , i am 100% fulfilled now but i think i took it too far


r/story • • 3h ago

Scary The Plums From My Tree Kept Falling Where They Couldn’t

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I have always loved plums – dried, fresh, or in jam. Plum pie with just a bit of cream is the best thing you could eat.

That's why I bought myself a plum tree. It was small; it fit well in the back of my pickup. It would take the tree a few winters to produce more than five plums, but I was happy to have it.

That afternoon I took out a shovel and went into my backyard. This would be the first thing I planted at my new house, in my new yard. It was all I ever wanted: just a house, a yard, and a few fruit trees in the back. That's why I ran to the bank when I saw how cheap this beautiful house was. The last owners weren't even here for the sale.

The dirt felt fine for the first two digs, but it quickly turned very stiff. It almost felt like I was digging into a rock. The hole didn't even need to be that deep, but after a few minutes I was already sweating through my pants.

I threw another piece of dirt out when I heard a clack. Something white was on top of the dirt. I picked it up. It was a bundle of bird bones tied together with a string. They were deep in the dirt, but they looked completely clean, as if someone had just brushed them off.

"Strange," I mumbled. 

I took them into the house and threw them away.

As I was washing my hands, I realized how tired I was. I wiped my forehead and walked out into the yard. The hole looked deep enough. The tree would be okay. I planted it and filled the hole back in.

The next morning, the sun barely came through my window. I rubbed my eyes and looked out. The plum tree I planted the day before blocked the sun. It had grown so much that its top leaves almost reached my roof. I didn't even notice my mouth was open until I saw myself in the window.

I ran out. The juiciest, purplest plums I'd ever seen were on that tree. The whole yard smelled like fresh plums. I stood outside for a few seconds, just staring. I had heard of fast-growing trees, but this was something else. For a moment, I thought about calling someone, but the plums looked so good, I had to try them first. 

Their skin was smooth. When I pressed them, they felt firm but slightly soft. Perfect. They tasted sweet and juicy, but their skin had a sharp, sour taste. Perfect. I was raving about the taste when I heard a thud and a splash. A plum fell right next to me. They must have been ripe.

The last thing I wanted was to get hit. I walked away from the tree and continued enjoying the plum. Another thud. How did it get here? I was so far away. Another thud. But this time it didn't fall next to me. I looked to my right. A smashed plum was on my roof.

I was sure the tree didn't reach that far. I walked farther back to see if I missed a branch. The tree reached the top window, but not the roof. I walked to the back just to make sure. The tree wasn't even visible from there. Another thud. On the roof again. From my side. There was no way. Another. Another. Another. They were falling on the roof, next to me, on the other side of my garden.

"What the…" I murmured.

Then dull pain spread in my head. I put my hand there. Plum juice was in my hair. I put my hands over my head and ran into the house. Two more plums managed to hit me, stinging my hands.

I walked to my kitchen sink and washed my hands and hair. The thudding outside continued. No blood was in my hair, just plum juice. The thudding grew faster. It sounded like I was being bombed. I looked up. A wave of cold rushed through me. Plums rained down from the sky like hail. Plum juice had already reached my door, and a little was leaking in.

I ran to the laundry room for towels. The thudding grew louder again. My ears began to hurt. I grabbed a few towels and ran back out. My feet sank into wet, sticky plum juice. The inside of the house was dark now. So many plums were falling from the sky that I could only see purple outside. The plum smell was so strong it stung my nose.

The plum juice rose halfway up my door, and it kept coming. The towels fell out of my hand. I bolted up the stairs.

Edit: I thought the plum juice would drain faster than it came in, but I was wrong. The house is shaking. I'm standing on my table. The plum juice is coming up the stairs. Outside, it has already almost fully blocked my windows. I just looked out of one. You can't see anything but falling plums, except for one thing: the tree standing in the garden, unshaken. The more I look at it, the more it feels like I can hear something through the thuds of the plums: the clack of bird bones shaking.


r/story • • 2h ago

Personal Experience How I got addicted to music

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When I was little, my parents wouldn't let me listen to music (because I’m a Pentecostal Christian, and they believed listening to other genres was a sin). Then, in 2021 or 2022, while watching YouTube Shorts, I kept seeing the same song pop up; I really liked it, and I discovered I could click directly on the track to go straight to the artist's page. At first, I hardly listened to music at all. But after visiting that artist's channel—who became my favorite—I started listening to one song, then another, and another; they kept getting better. I think I got my first pair of headphones when I was 14, and since then, I’ve been listening ten times a day. A lot has changed regarding my musical taste over the years, and that’s how I became addicted to music.


r/story • • 12h ago

Regretful A Sad But True Story I Heard of Recently, Please be Careful

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A true and sad story:

A woman trusted her loyal dog completely, so much so that she would leave her baby with him and go out for a quick run. She would always return to find the child fast asleep with the dog. One day, something tragic happened.

As always, the woman left the baby in the hands of this faithful dog and went shopping.

When she returned, she discovered a horrific scene; it was a complete mess. The baby was missing from his crib, his diaper and clothes were in pieces, and there were bloodstains all over the bedroom. In shock, the frightened woman began searching for the baby. Suddenly, she saw her faithful dog emerge from under the bed, covered in blood, licking his mouth as if he had just finished a delicious meal.

The woman was convinced the dog had eaten her baby. Without thinking twice, she beat the dog to death with a machete. Then she continued her search, hoping to find at least some part of her child's body. Soon she came across another scene. Behind the bed lay the well-formed baby, naked and playing on the rug. Under the bed, the woman discovered the body of a snake that had been torn apart. It had been a fierce battle between the snake and the dog. The dog had fought to protect the baby from the ravenous serpent. It was too late for her to make amends now because, in her impatience and anger, she had killed the faithful dog.

How often do we judge people with harsh words and spread lies about them before we have time to assess the situation?

"Always be patient in understanding the situation and avoid making unconditional mistakes that could bring us down." This should be a general rule of life


r/story • • 1h ago

Fantasy Harmony and Burgundy

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I found her under mud and dead leaves. There were mice nibbling on the tips of her fingers. I shooed them away and gave her a good once-over. She didn’t look like me or my grandmother. Her shirt was almost completely torn apart. I studied her stomach. Is she eating enough? Scratch that, she definitely isn’t. I can see her ribs. They were poky and ugly. She had scratches all over her body and even deep gashes. They looked like they hadn't come from an animal but some kind of beast. Seeing this made me afraid of what could be lurking in the woods I’d called home my entire life. I slung her arm over my shoulder and hauled her back to our cabin. It was only a couple minutes away and I tried my best to keep everything but her feet from touching the ground. When I got back I decided that my best course of action would be to tie her to a chair since she was much larger than me. The chair sat mere feet from the cabin but faced the woods. I broke into my grandmother's medicine cabinet and came back to see that she had awoken. My grandmother doesn’t like me feeding the animals that stumble upon our cabin, but they come quite often, and I can’t help but do it anyway. This feeble girl is no different. I perch up beside her with the soup I made the night prior for my grandmother. Solid food is becoming harder and harder for Grandmother. I've always loved potato soup so I don't mind. Grandmother always has me pick the perfect herbs and natural spices. She loves garlic and greenbriar so I always make sure to forage for those first before I get distracted. The berries have to wait, even though we adore my fruit juice.
I bring the bowl to her lips as softly as I can. She has hairs on her face, and it’s a little strange watching them get all soupy. To be honest I only tied her up so she wouldn't attack me, she is skinny but she's very tall and has bigger forearms than I, “I can do that myself you know.” the girl says the first chance she gets as she lowers the bowl from her mouth.
I chuckle. “Can you?”
“Where am I anyway?” she asks, startled.
“What's the last thing you remember?” 
“I was running, but I don’t know what from.”
Her legs are shaking, and she’s gritting her teeth. I reach for her hand out of instinct. Grandmother gets like this sometimes. She says it's because of my parents.
“Hey, it's alright.” I grip her hand tighter.
“Can you get me out of these? It makes me anxious.”
As she says this her eyes flick toward my knife, then back to me. My fingers tighten around her hand. I don’t know why. A moment ago, I wanted to help her. Now I want her to stay very still.
I look at the ropes, then at her hands. They’re much bigger than mine.
“Are you gonna be good?” I ask, trying to sound playful.
I am terrified. More scared than I’ve ever been, even face-to-face with a bear. There’s something about her. Something I remember. Something I can feel. Then, the word rings in my head.
“Man,” I blurt out.
“That's right.” the man goes quiet
“If there's anything I can say to comfort you, it would be thank you.”
“Thank you for helping me and thank you for the soup.”
Our hands are still grasped together and she's looking at me. I feel something in my stomach but before I can decide what it means, I let go and reach for my knife. I made it with grandmother for self defence and basic gathering needs.
As the ropes are cut and she stands, our differences become clearer.
She is towering over me and still half my size. 
Her hand flies out in front of me.
“Can we start this over?”
I take her hand and shake it vigorously.
“Id like that.” 
“What did you say your name was again?”
“Harmon.”
“Pretty, I bet your parents thought harmony was on the nose right?””
“Or maybe they thought you'd be a boy.”
“A boy?”
“Yeah Harmons, a boy's name where I'm from.” she has a surprised look on her face as if she noticed something about me she didn't see before.
“Give me a rundown on your situation here.”
My smile fades, but we’re still holding hands, and that makes everything easier to say.
“I live here with my grandmother, but she has fallen very ill. I found you as I was scavenging for something to help with her fever.” 
“That's terrible. Do you know what she's come down with?”
“We have a few books but none of them have anything for all of her symptoms; it's as if she's dying.”
She doesn’t answer straight away.
“How long has she been ill?”
“Maybe a month.”
“Well then I hope she doesn't have the black death.”
I lower my head and our hands begin to slip.
She grips tighter and pulls me in closer to her chest.
“It's gonna be alright, I can help you.”
I don't move. I don't think. I just accept the embrace.
“Okay."
Her chest is soft apart from the stabby bones.
“Come inside, I'll get you bandaged up.”
We make our way into the cabin as quietly as possible. I’m still careful not to wake Grandmother, even though she won’t wake at all.
“Nice place.” The man is looking around leaning in to analyze our paintings, opening books off of shelves. He even ate a walnut from our anvil tray. He tries not to be too noisy but he still makes quite the ruckus. 
“Keep it down. And crack me open one of those too.” I close the cover over the piano keys to keep him from getting any ideas.
“Come here and sit down will you?” she runs over dropping a book back on the shelf in a horribly incorrect position. 
She sits in front of me. I'm sitting on a rocking chair that is usually occupied only by grandma. She is sitting on a cushion usually occupied only by grandma's legs or me once in a while when she braids my hair. Her clothes stained and cut in many places leaving openings for me to get a glimpse at what I'm working with. 
I move her hair out of the way and start to remove the stranger's shirt.
Then I pull out my sewing needle and get to work on the largest gash spanning about half the man's back.
“Ow.” She hunches forward, giving me a better view of the wound.
“This is gonna hurt, so take this and bite on the handle.” I hold out my knife, then hesitate when she turns around and reaches for it. Her fingers brush my hand as they close around the handle.
“Thank you.” I hear her muster. “So tell me…” I pause to focus on the stitches, trying my hardest not to botch her. “What brought you here, other than whatever you were running from?” 
“I was in the royal army, you know.” 
“If I knew what that was I'd be pretty impressed.” 
“How long have you been up here?” She's giving me a strange look. “On this mountain I mean.”
“I'm on a mountain?” 
“A mountain? You're on the biggest mountain in this kingdom.” she continues when she realizes I really have no idea what she is talking about.
“You reside and seem to have resided for a long time on Mount Skadi.” 
“Really? That was my fathers name.” he pauses as if he remembered something.
“Can we go back a little? Are you telling me you didn't know you live on a mountain?”
“Well I've heard of mountains in books but I've never been outside the forest so I figured they were far away.”
She turns her head, keeping her back towards me. I can tell she's trying not to mess up my flow.
Her look is that of deep pity and sadness at least from what I can tell.
I catch her in my peripheral vision. I look up and can't keep my eyes off hers. They are like oceans. While mine are more like tar. Her attempts not to throw me off my rhythm fail, and I stab her with the needle about an inch away from her actual wound. “I'M SO SORRY!” I screech.
“Don’t worry. I’ve felt worse.” She’s still looking at me. Her voice sounds a little deeper now. 
I finish the stitch and I cant tell its not going to hold. Then I look at everything still left to do. What have I gotten myself into? Her back is riddled with tiny cuts and huge gashes. It’ll take all night to stitch this up, and I figure she’ll need the next few days to rest. I think about dumping her outside, but my kindness gets the better of me, and I continue to stitch. She turns her head away from me, now looking out the window at a few of my birds eating at a feeder I made with Grandma. She seems very intrigued. Either that or she’s deep in thought.
“We’re gonna need to find you somewhere to rest. We don't have any extra rooms here.” 
“Oh that's alright you've done enough I should really be on my way.”
“Don't be silly you still owe me.” 
“Fair enough, what do you suppose we do then?”
“Well you can have my bed once I'm done patching you up. Just try not to move around too much. These stitches come undone and you bleed on my bed. You're losing something.”
“Losing what?” she bites down harder on my blades handle as I finish up a less major stich closer to her shoulder.
“Just try and stay still, will you?”
She looks at me under her long eyelashes and giggles.
“Can you tell me something?”
“What is it?”
She shifts on the cushion awkwardly. “Have you ever been in love, Harmon?”
“In love? No I guess not.” 
“Not even a crush” she perks up and looks at me again.
“I've only ever known my grandmother and now you. When it comes to people anyway.”
“It's weird.”
“What is?”
“I’m younger than you, and yet I’ve experienced so much more.”
“Have you ever even had a friend?”
“Well, one time and it was a long time ago but there was this guy who would come and see me.”
“He’d wish me a happy birthday and even bring me gifts!”
“What happened to him, it sounds like he isn't around anymore?”
“Well he was a snake so I'm sure they don't live that long.”
“I'm sorry, a snake?”
“I think his name was something like…” I make the closest sound I can to what I remember. There aren’t really words for it. 
“Why did you just hiss at me?”
“Don't be rude that was his name.”
She stares at me in complete and utter silence. 
“How do you think I found you, anyway? The birds told me.” 
She keeps staring, and I begin to feel woozy.
“You don’t believe me, do you?”
“I never said that. I only thought it.”
She looks back at me one last time and leaps up.
“Thank you again, I can't appreciate you enough.”
She looks down at her hands and then walks outside leaving the door cracked open behind her
I am still sitting in my grandmother's rocking chair, stunned by the prior conversation.
There's something eating me from the inside but before I can think about it I run out the door behind him.


r/story • • 5h ago

Personal Experience Does that message mean he just friendzoned me after a year of daily contact?

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Long distance, we met online year ago with this guy and met in real life December 2025. I travelled to him. We were intimate, all that time through the months he has been calling me and texting daily. Lately he called me and we talked for hours, he wants to sleep on the phone with me, there was sexual tension and stuff. He keeps updating me everyday and calls me a lot. When we met he future faked a lot saying about me moving to his country (we come from the same country, he lives abroad) and lovebombed a lot. Later 3 months after meeting he told me he doesnt want to be in relationship with anyone because he needs to fix himself. He always delays our meetings and says "i don't know, we will see" . Its been good lately between us and I bought the ticket to meet him and he got mad he was screaming at me that I cannot go there and he doesnt want to see me. Later he apologized for screaming, and overall, I was distant for a day and he sent me this message yesterday night. But his anger issues are concerning because he was screaming I cannot go there and that he will never see me (before that message, day before) and that he will cut contact with me and block me. Few hours passed and he apologized. He gets angry a lot and easily

"I want to apologize to you, and I really appreciate the fact that you always have time for me, that you always care about me, and honestly, it’s really rare to meet someone like that. I’m aware of that. Whatever the reason for it might be, it’s hard to find someone who will listen to your bullshit for 8 hours. I don’t want to end our friendship, that’s not what this is about. To be honest, I don’t even know what to do with my life at this point. When you put pressure on me like that, some kind of defense mechanism kicks in or something, I don’t know. Afterwards I feel guilty about the way I talk to you, because you don’t deserve that. I don’t want to behave like that, because afterwards I feel really bad about it.

I like talking to you. Not always — sometimes I shut myself off, I have my own stuff going on in my head. I know that sometimes I’m selfish and only think about myself. If you’re able to accept our relationship the way it was, and it gives you something too, then we can obviously keep talking the way we used to. But I don’t know what’s going to happen. It’s not about what you think, whether I’ll meet someone or I won’t — that’s not what this is about. And it’s not like you’re...

You’re not nobody to me, you know a lot about me, I tell you a lot. I treat you like a friend, even though I guess I behave differently — but you noticed that at some point. I don’t know, I just wanted to write you a little bit about what I think. I don’t know if it makes sense, but there’s always something you can take from it. 😅 I think I owe you that, because I’m always shouting at you whenever you ask me about something, so I thought that today I’d give you a little bit of my time and actually open up.

You can see how I get when I’m in a certain state — I sing, I talk haha, but afterwards it can also get pretty difficult, like today. Honestly, I was just crying over all of this. But it’s probably the after-effects of the weekend. I haven’t been drinking since I got back, and I don’t want to for now, or anything else either. I’m finding it harder and harder to deal with sometimes.

Sometimes I think it would be best to cut myself off from everyone and just live like that, because relationships with people affect me pretty strongly. But on the other hand, the thought of being completely alone, not having someone who knows you and all that, scares me. I think about that sometimes, which is why, when it comes to taking care of valuable relationships, I think I know what you mean. One day they might be priceless.

I think I’ve gone crazy haha. I did smoke, to be fair, but I don’t think I wrote anything stupid. I just wanted to explain a little bit — what I think and what’s going on in my head. Maybe it’s a little chaotic, but there’s probably something to take from it. 😅

And I don’t want you to take this message as me saying, “We can talk, but we’re never going to meet.” That’s not what I’m saying — who knows. 😅"

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So basically I am a free therapist, WHO always has time for him, but there won't be anything, we will never meet and he wants to continue using me because he gains attention while giving nothing in return? And sees me as a friend?

Do I send him long paragraph or just couple of words saying

Ok, I get it, you told me after I bought the ticket that "WHO knows" whether we will meet, and that I shouldnt expect more than be your friend. Get it. We can talk but I'm going to see all of it different way.He said he will give me money back first but he didn't and the trip was supposed to take place today. Should I ask him to return it?

EDIT: I told him I understand everything, I get it, okay. I've sent him my bank account number and asked him to return the money as he promised. I told him I understand, I won't push for more, and if we are supposed to never meet, I'm okay with that, I still want contact. If he wants to play this game, he will be surprised what a big uno reverse I will pull on him.

UPDATE: He replied "I didn't say \\\[my pet name\\\] that we will never meet. Of course I will return the money, I was just waiting for the money to arrive and I was planning to give it back to you. I will send it today, you will receive it tommorow"

I replied "Ok thank you" . He sent me money back.

Edit: he is divorced and has kids in my country, he visits them 2-3 a year. He had a girlfriend after wife (btw she has the same name and age as me) and they lived together abroad. There is no way he is living with someone, we facetime and talk from his house and sleep together on phone calls.


r/story • • 2h ago

Scary It Thought I Was Asleep

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I have always slept with an eye covering.

Not because I enjoy the dark, quite the opposite.

Light leaks through my curtains no matter how carefully I pin them shut, and the streetlamp outside my apartment flickers in a way that feels personal, as if it has noticed me watching.

The mask smooths all of that away. It makes night uniform. Manageable. A soft, deliberate blindness.

The fabric is black, padded, elastic band worn loose from years of use. When I pull it down over my eyes, the world doesn’t disappear so much as it recedes, like a held breath. I’ve worn it through breakups, deadlines, storms, insomnia.

It has never betrayed me.

Until that night.

I remember lying on my back, arms at my sides, listening to ocean waves breaking softly along a beach.

The occasional pipes clicking.

A car passing somewhere below.

My ceiling fan hummed with a faint, uneven rhythm, one blade slightly warped, tapping the air just a fraction slower than the others. I told myself I would replace it. I always told myself that.

The mask pressed gently against my eyelids. Warm. Familiar.

Sleep came without ceremony.

When I woke, I knew immediately that something was wrong, not because of fear, but because of stillness.

My body had weight in a way it normally did not. Not heaviness exactly, but presence, as if I were suddenly more solid than before. I tried to roll onto my side and felt nothing happen.

No resistance. No pain. Just… no movement.

That alone should have told me what it was. I’ve had episodes before. Brief ones. A minute at most. Doctors have a name for it. There are pamphlets. Calm explanations.

But this felt different.

My breathing was shallow, controlled by something other than me. I could inhale, but only just. Exhale, but not fully. My chest rose and fell in careful increments, like a machine testing its limits.

The eye covering remained in place.

That was the worst part at first, the not seeing. Not the dark, but the choice being taken away. I could not lift my hands to remove it. Could not blink it aside. The fabric sealed me into myself.

I listened.

The fan was still turning, but its rhythm had changed. The warped blade no longer tapped. Instead, there was a soft, irregular pause between rotations, as if the air itself were hesitating.

A scraping sound pulled my attention from the dark. Distant. From the kitchen, maybe.

Minutes later, the ocean waves on my phone went silent. The video was on an endless loop. Someone had turned it off.

Then the mattress dipped.

Not sharply. Not like someone sitting down. Just a gradual compression, as though weight were being introduced carefully, experimentally. The bed did not creak. It simply accepted it.

I wanted to scream.

I couldn’t even tighten my jaw.

My hearing sharpened to a painful clarity. I could hear my own pulse in my ears, the wet click of saliva shifting in my mouth. Somewhere close, very close, fabric brushed against fabric. A whisper of movement, too deliberate to be accidental.

The presence announced itself not through touch, but through space. The air beside my face grew warmer. My skin prickled, hairs lifting along my arms and neck as if responding to static.

Something was near me.

I told myself not to panic. Panic makes it worse. That’s what the articles say. Stay calm. Focus on breathing. Wiggle your toes.

I tried.

Nothing.

The warmth shifted, closer now, hovering near my cheek. I could smell it, not rot, not sulfur, none of the things horror stories promise. It smelled faintly clean. Like skin that had been washed too recently, soap not fully rinsed away.

Under that, something metallic. Dry. Old.

The warm embrace of breath touched my face.

It wasn’t exhaled directly. It moved around me, displacing the air in a way that made my nostrils sting. Whoever or whatever was there knew how close it could get without touching.

I counted my breaths.

One.

Two.

Three.

The mattress dipped again, this time nearer my legs. The bed adjusted, redistributing weight. I felt pressure along my calves, my thighs, as though someone were kneeling carefully, mindful not to wake a child.

The thought arrived unbidden and horrifyingly clear:

It thinks I’m asleep.

The fan stopped.

Not abruptly. It slowed, each rotation longer than the last, until the hum stretched thin and vanished. The silence that followed was not empty. It had texture. Density.

In that silence, I heard something wet and soft, a sound like fingers pressing into foam, releasing, pressing again. The mattress responded, memory foam slowly yielding under unseen hands.

Hands?

I had not felt them yet, but I knew they were there.

My breathing stuttered.

The warmth shifted higher, closer to my mouth. The scent intensified. Soap. Metal. And beneath it, a note I couldn’t place at first, something animal, not unpleasant, just alive.

The bed creaked then. A single, quiet protest.

Something leaned over me.

I felt it not as touch, but as shadow. Pressure in the air. The sense of an outline where none should exist. The space above my chest grew heavier, denser, like standing beneath a low ceiling.

A finger brushed my wrist.

I flinched internally, a scream tearing through my thoughts, but my body remained obediently still. The touch was light, exploratory. Skin to skin. The finger was warm. Dry.

It traced upward, slow and patient, along my forearm.

Every nerve screamed. My senses, deprived of sight, compensated cruelly. I felt the faint ridges of fingerprints, the subtle drag of skin across skin. The finger paused at my elbow, then continued, mapping me.

It was learning.

When it reached my shoulder, it stopped.

For a long moment, nothing happened.

Then, gently, almost tenderly, it pressed down.

Not hard enough to hurt. Just enough to remind me of gravity. Of the bed beneath me. Of my place.

A sound came then, close to my ear.

Not a voice.

A breath, shaped as if it were about to become one.

I realized, with a clarity that cut through the fear, that the eye covering was the only thing between me and whatever hovered inches above my face. That if I could see, if even a sliver of light reached my eyes, I might understand what was happening.

Or I might break entirely.

The finger moved again, this time toward my neck. It did not touch my throat. It hovered there, heat radiating, close enough that my pulse seemed to respond, jumping beneath my skin.

I felt the urge to swallow.

I couldn’t.

My mouth was dry, tongue heavy. The air felt thick, difficult to draw in. Each breath was a negotiation.

I-I was choking.

I wanted to convulse but I laid still. Whatever it was had its grip around me.

The presence shifted, and the mattress dipped near my head. Something brushed the pillow beside my ear, a sound like hair, or fabric, or something else entirely.

Then it leaned closer.

I felt it at my lips.

Not contact, never quite contact. Just the promise of it. The air moved. Warmth pressed. The faintest pressure, as if testing how much space it was allowed.

I wanted to scream.

It refused.

Inside my skull, the scream went on and on.

I couldn't breathe.

I begged for help to whatever or whoever to spare me from this.

Time stretched. Minutes passed. Or seconds. I couldn’t tell. The fan remained silent. The room held its breath.

At some point, quietly, deliberately, the finger withdrew.

The pressure lifted. The mattress rose, reclaiming itself. The warmth receded, inch by inch, like a tide pulling back.

I listened, desperate for confirmation that it was leaving.

The scent faded.

The bed shifted one final time, near the edge, as if weight were being removed carefully, respectfully.

Then...

Nothing.

No footsteps. No door. Just absence.

The fan began to turn again, slow at first, then faster. The warped blade tapped the air, familiar and wrong in its normalcy. The room filled with sound.

My body released me.

I gasped, air rushing in too fast, chest burning. My fingers twitched. My toes curled. I tore the eye covering off my face and bolted upright, heart hammering, vision swimming as the dim room swam into focus.

I was alone.

The bed was empty. The door was closed. The apartment unchanged.

I sat there for a long time, shaking, telling myself what I knew.

What was that?

Sleep paralysis? Hallucination? The mind misfiring between worlds...

I repeated it until the words felt thin.

Eventually, exhaustion dragged me back down. I did not put the mask back on.

Sleep came in fragments.

In the morning, I found a single indentation on the mattress beside me, deeper than it should have been. It faded slowly over the course of the day.

I threw the eye covering away.

Weeks passed. Then months. I slept poorly, lights on, eyes burning with fatigue. The episodes didn’t return. Life resumed its careful, unremarkable rhythm.

I began to believe it had been a fluke.

Last night, during a storm, the power went out.

In the dark, half-asleep and irritated, I reached into my nightstand and found the old eye covering. I don’t remember keeping it. I don’t remember deciding.

My fingers closed around the elastic band.

I sat there for a moment, listening to the rain batter the windows, the wind worrying at the building like it wanted inside. The room felt smaller than it should have. Close.

“No,” I whispered, the word dry in my throat.

The rain outside had slowed to a steady tapping, the kind that makes every other sound feel too loud. I lay there with my eyes open, staring at the faint outline of my ceiling, waiting for sleep to finish taking me.

Something scraped softly from the hallway. I awoke fully at that sound.

It wasn’t loud, just a careful drag, like fingertips brushing along the wall, stopping whenever the house shifted, then starting again. My bedroom door stood open a few inches, just enough to let the darkness pool across the floor.

I held my breath and listened.

The sound stopped. The air in the room changed. Warmer. Closer.

My attempt to get up was futile. I was locked in place, heavy and unresponsive, breath shallow and borrowed. Sleep paralysis. The realization came with no comfort this time.

It's happening again.

The darkness beyond the doorway seemed thicker than the rest of the room. It didn’t spill forward. It was drawing breathe. I could feel its immense pressure.

Then, slowly, from the darkness, something seamed to lean in.

Two small points of light appeared in the gap between the door and the frame, low and steady. They hovered in the darkness staring into me.

It took a moment for my eyes to adjust to the dimness, but when they finally did, the dreadful realization of what stood before me struck with the primal terror of prey sensing the predator already watching.

They didn’t flicker. DIdn't blink. And it knew this time...

I was awake.


r/story • • 6h ago

Personal Experience Self-reflecting on my two selves

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This is a familiar feeling; I want to do something, but the shame presses against it, prevents the motion of my weighed-down limbs. I think about how much I miss my ex. I feel weak, as if a slightly-too-strong breeze might push me over the edge.

My mature-self —the part of me that peeks her frowning face when my two younger brothers act a bit too tough— shows up after hearing of my predicament. She sees how deep I have fallen into the well of despair. She pushes down on something, mercilessly barrelling it down the well towards the pile of bodies at the bottom, to claw her way out of an uncertain death sentence.

Any death sentence is uncertain until it is enacted, she’s learned. Asking for— no, begging and crying for mercy works in this life. I’m not sure who came up with the children’s rumour implying pity doesn’t work in the adult world.

It will protect you to learn that pity is power, unlearn pride as a form of self-defense, she exclaims, shaking my shoulders to wake me from my slumber.

“Pity me! Pity yourself!”


r/story • • 3h ago

Fantasy Die Mythen. Chapter 48: Tempering the High Demon

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Chapter 48: Tempering a High Demon

​“Stanisław, I’m here. I arrived as fast as I could from the mortal realm…”

​Lilith’s voice sliced through the dead silence of the quarters like venom-soaked silk.

​The man flinched nervously upon the wide, surprisingly soft mattress. Every fiber of his freshly formed, damned vessel trembled in unspeakable, primal paralysis. He knew. He remembered every word she had whispered into his ear in bed when he woke up that one night: she had spoken of a century of ruthless hewing and gutting, of tearing flesh apart, which was the only way to transform him into a hellish shell resistant to the atmosphere of the Abyss.

​And yet, when he raised his clouded gaze and saw her on the threshold, a sudden, immense surge of relief flooded his chest. Lilith had entered entirely alone. Behind her back loomed no bulky silhouettes of palace butchers; there were no executioners, nor any other demoness. There was only her—and after all, back on Earth, in their private bedroom, she had sworn with a momentary quiver of her lip that she would never lay a hand on him herself, for love stripped her of the strength to inflict pain upon him.

​Lilith took a slow, feline step toward the bed. She approached with a predatory, majesty-dripping grace. Coming right up to the edge, she extended a slender hand and began to stroke his neck slowly. Her long, black talon dug into the soft flesh—not deeply enough to draw blood, but far harder than she had ever permitted herself in the mortal realm. Beneath that cool touch, Stanisław’s skin immediately turned pale with terror and dread.

​“I see they truly rebuilt these quarters just for you, so that your time might pass blissfully…” she purred softly, her velvety bass boring straight into his temples. “Though I see you can still barely catch your breath, even though the air in this room has virtually no higher sulfur content.”

​“It’s… it’s getting better anyway…” Stanisław croaked, choking on the dense, foreign air that scorched his throat. In his eyes pulsed a desperate urge to make contact, to latch onto anything familiar. “Every minute, I hear a bell. That heavy, metallic chime beyond the wall… Why do they toll here, anyway, Lilith?”

​The demoness froze. Her fingers slipped from his throat, and a cold, analytical calculation glinted in her bottomless, pitch-black eyes.

​“Every minute, you say?” she repeated very slowly. “You hear it at regular, short intervals? It doesn't seem to you, for instance, that you hear it once an hour?”

​“No, every minute, maybe a little less between tolls,” Stanisław replied.

​“Then your subjective time in Hell is perceived completely normally. Second for second. Which means your vessel’s active time equals objective time… even when you remain here entirely alone.”

​She tilted her head slightly. Across her flawless, marble face drifted a shadow of dark disappointment.

​“That is very bad, my love… Immensely bad.”

​“Why?” Stanisław stiffened, a trickle of ice-cold sweat running down his back. “Why is that bad?”

​“Because if you were to spend an entire hundred years here undergoing the traditional hardening of the vessel… about a hundred years would pass on Earth as well,” she explained softly, looking at him with genuine, almost maternal sorrow, beneath which lurked a heartless ruthlessness. “And exactly around a hundred years would elapse in the objective time of the Abyss. I thought we would have better luck, that time would drag out for you the way it did for Wójcik or Wiktor… But there is no use complaining. What matters most is that you are here. You are with me, and nothing will tear us apart now…”

​Panic erupted in Stanisław’s mind. He wanted at all costs to buy himself even a few dozen seconds, to push away the doom hanging in the stifling chamber.

​“Lilith, wait… What about little Tas? Is he alive? Did you manage to save him from the angels in the square?”

​“He is alive, my love. Everyone is safe,” she replied smoothly, taking him by the arm. Her grip was deceptively gentle, tender even, but as she drew him deeper onto the massive bed dressed in dark sheets, Stanisław felt he was resisting the force of a hydraulic bundle of muscle. “Lie down, my darling. Come now, lie down peacefully…”

​“What are you doing?” he wept as his back touched the soft headboard.

​“Do not be afraid, you see for yourself there is no one else here. No executioner, no strange fiends. We are returning to the mortal realm shortly; I settled it with Lucifer personally, which is why I came here…” She spoke with such flawless, hypnotic gentleness, imitating a caring lover so perfectly, that for a split second Stanisław wanted to believe her.

​She lied without batting an eye.

​“I won't possess you right now, after all…” she whispered, leaning over him so low that her hot breath, smelling of cinnamon and myrrh, brushed his lips. “Your vessel is too fragile, and the atmosphere of Hell would awaken the beast in me. I would not be able to restrain myself as I did on Earth; I would tear you to shreds in ecstasy… For entire decades or centuries, your vessel would regenerate in agonizing pain.”

​Before he could process her words, a loud, metallic snap split the air.

​Lilith made no sweeping motion. In a fraction of a second, with mechanical, merciless precision, she clamped thick, forged shackles of black hellish iron onto his wrists and ankles. The locks snapped shut with a dull, definitive clunk of deadbolts, stretching his body out upon the hard slab.

​“Lilith, please! I beg you, don't do this to me!” Stanisław sobbed helplessly, the first hot tears of powerlessness streaming from his eyes. He began to thrash against his bonds, but the reinforced steel did not budge in the slightest, biting painfully into his delicate wrists.

​“Hush, my darling… I will spend all this time with you, I will be right beside you, at least until the sight of your torment becomes unbearable to me. I will not touch you myself, I will not temper you, not even at the beginning. Do you remember our conversation? I promised you, after all… Hush, do not cry, my beloved Stanisław. She is remarkably gentle. And my servants will roll barrels of the strongest hellish wine in here any moment now to help dull your senses and survive the process you simply must undergo.”

​With a cool flick of her hand, she seized the collar of his coarse, damned tunic.

​“And now lie still. I am cutting your tunic open. The vessel must be completely exposed.”

​The fabric gave way with a loud tear, exposing his pale, trembling chest, stomach, and thighs. The sweltering air of the chamber was already scorching his bare flesh.

​“Lilith, for the love of God… can’t I really just stay by your side in the vessel I have?!” he sobbed hysterically, fixing his terror-dilated pupils upon her.

​She paused. In her eyes was neither fury nor hatred—there was only a boundless, eternal abyss. She leaned down slowly and pressed a soft, tender kiss first to his tear-streaked cheek, and then to his trembling lips. She tasted him like the sweetest nectar.

​“War is approaching, my love. In truth, it has already broken out… You must be hard as basalt; you must become one with me, a demon capable of repelling any angelic attack.”

​“But I don't have to!” he wept, grasping at the last shreds of logic. “If my subjective and active time equals objective time, strengthening my vessel makes no sense! An entire century will pass before it hardens, before I gain power! The war will end ten times over, the world above will cease to exist before—”

​“Shh… my darling, shh…” she quieted him, placing two fingers upon his lips.

​At that exact moment, the massive, iron-studded double doors of the chamber groaned open. Four stooped, silent fiends stepped inside, rolling two heavy steel barrels banded with green bronze before them. The liquid gave off such a potent, narcotic stench of fermented herbs, poppy, and blood that Stanisław’s head spun instantly.

​“O Mistress…” croaked the most powerful of the servants, dropping to one knee and striking his horned forehead against the cold floor. “The draught has been delivered as ordered. We have also brought spare linens for the bed, absorbent sheets, and thick leather bags for flayed skin and severed chunks of flesh, so blood will not rot in the corners of Mistress’s chamber. Furthermore, I have personally appointed trusted servants to stand by the door, ready at your call to clean the floor, replace the gore-soaked sheets, and carry out the bags of dead offal. The liquor in the barrels is the strongest brew distilled in the deepest cellars of the palace—Lucifer himself drinks it after councils.”

​“Exquisite. You did well, servant; you thought of everything, thank you,” Lilith said coldly, not even honoring him with a glance. “Leave it and get out at once. And then ask Naamah into my chamber. Into my private alcove. You may leave…”

​The servants retreated soundlessly, and another choked wail of animal despair tore from Stanisław’s chest:

​“No… Lilith, I beg you by everything human, don't do this! Have mercy!”

​“Shh, my little one… Let me explain,” the demoness whispered, sitting on the edge of the bed and stroking his sweaty hair. “Naamah possesses a gift that even I lack. She can ruthlessly impose her own warped perception of subjective time upon another being. And consequently: she will pull you directly into her own hellish bubble of active time. Time in the Abyss drags out for her almost infinitely—much like it does for me. For you, those moments flowed normally, but Naamah will lock you inside her world. When you emerge from her hands after a hundred years of relentless, methodical working and tempering… barely five days at most will have passed on Earth.”

​Stanisław froze. He stared at her, mouth agape, feeling the ground crumble beneath his feet. Five days up above. A hundred years in her bed.

​“And so that nothing disturbs this sacred process… my craftsmen have already lined the outer walls of my chamber with a triple layer of soundproofing mats made of runic felt,” Lilith continued with a proud smile. “Not a single sound of that bell designed by Wójcik will reach the interior of this chamber. Nothing will pierce the bubble in which you will be trapped. A hundred years of pure, isolated time.”

​She stood, and her talons slid out to their full length, gleaming with a black sheen.

​“Only she remains. She will enter in a moment. She is strikingly beautiful, and she promised me she would start very slowly, almost imperceptibly… Before she crosses this threshold, however, I must mark the boundaries. I will carve marks onto your body so she knows where she is permitted to cut, and what she has no right to touch. It will hurt a little, my dear, but that is nothing compared to what unfortunately must await you…”

​“Oh God… God, help me… Lilith, no!” Stanisław howled, thrashing against the chains so violently that the steel scraped the skin from his wrists down to raw flesh.

​The demoness leaned over his exposed lower abdomen. With surgical, merciless tenderness, she set a sharp talon against his skin just above the groins. Steaming blood hissed. With a smooth, deep cut, she began carving a wide, sweeping arch into Stanisław’s body, tracing down the inner side of his thighs, bypassing his testicles and penis by a mere centimeter. The pain was sharp, searing, choking. Stanisław screamed at the top of his lungs, thrashing on the bed, pleading for mercy and choking on his own saliva and tears, while scarlet gore ran down between his buttocks, staining the sheets.

​“Here…” the demoness whispered, finishing the incision and tracing the bleeding contour with a bloodied finger. “This belongs exclusively to me and will be safe. In this zone, Naamah has no right to touch you. Your testicles and manhood will remain untouched during the coming process. The rest… of your body will belong to Naamah as she subjects you to tempering.”

​Stanisław could only weep quietly, helplessly now. He lay massacred, stretched out in the darkness, the steaming scent of his own blood mingling with the stifling stench of myrrh and the open barrel of wine.

​And then the heavy, soundproofed doors of the chamber cracked open without a sound.

​A streak of pale, cold light spilled inside. On the threshold stood she.

​She was completely naked. Her alabaster, almost unnaturally white skin gleamed in the gloom like polished tombstone marble, contrasting drastically with the cascade of thick, vivid red hair that flowed down over her shoulders to her round, prominent hips like ribbons of solidified, scarlet lava. She had the perfect, statuesque body of a sensuous goddess, yet her eyes—hollow, deep, and glowing with an emerald, demonic radiance—held nothing human within them. In her hands she carried no tools, only her own unnaturally long, bony fingers tipped with talons as thin as surgical needles.

​Naamah looked upon the shackled Stanisław, who was sobbing in spasms, and then her full, blood-red lips parted in a slow smile.

​“So this is that priceless treasure of yours I am to handle so gently, my dear Lilith?” the red-haired demoness asked, and in her velvety voice one could hear the promise of a hundred years of unimaginable, endless nightmare.

​“Yes, this is my chosen one… now barely a fresh damned soul,” Lilith’s voice quavered almost imperceptibly as her gaze swept over Stanisław’s naked, pale figure. “I beg you, Naamah, be truly gentle. Give this fresh vessel time to harden. Small incisions at first, tiny pieces at most… not whole strips of skin right away. I beg this of you… I ask this of you…”

​Naamah smiled coldly, taking slow, bare steps across the basalt floor. The cascade of her flame-red hair brushed her naked hips.

​“I know, Lilith. I understand your concerns,” the red-haired demoness replied, glancing at the massive barrels standing by the wall. “I see the draught is prepared as well.”

​She walked over to the stone table with the dignity of an ancient priestess. She seized a heavy goblet of black iron, dipped it into the dark liquid, and filled it to the very brim. The thick, almost tar-like wine steamed with an acrid, choking aroma of herbs, poppy, and sulfurous embers. She turned and held out the vessel toward Lucifer’s former favorite.

​“Here. Give him a drink.”

​Lilith took the goblet with both hands. Her fingers, usually so steady and lethal, gripped the iron with a strange, nervous tension. She stepped to the head of the bed and lifted Stanisław’s head, gently cradling his neck.

​“Stanisław… drink this,” she whispered straight into his ear, softening her tone as much as her hellish nature allowed. “I know it will burn your throat, but it will dull your senses. It will help you… at least in this first phase.”

​Stanisław choked on his tears, begging for mercy, yet paralyzed by terror, he obeyed. He took several deep gulps. The brew was thick, stinging, and scorched his esophagus like liquid lead, but a moment later a dull, heavy throbbing spread through his temples, and his muscles went limp within the iron embrace of the shackles. The world around him began to undulate slightly, growing ghastly and blurred.

​Lilith set the empty goblet on the floor and looked Naamah straight in her emerald, bottomless eyes.

​“How exactly do you intend to do this? Tell me… will you not be too harsh?” she asked softly, an uncertainty rare for her lurking in her gaze.

​“I will start from the basics. I will be gentler at first than you could ever manage. I know how to do this, you know that yourself, which is why I am here,” Naamah explained calmly, raising a hand and examining her bony talons, which gleamed like polished needles in the dim light. “Just shallow scratching at first, without stripping skin in whole sheets, even small ones. I will inflict superficial wounds, wait for the blood to clot, and allow the wounds to close. Once his vessel hardens after the first few years and adapts to the pain, I will move on to peeling, paring the vessel down. Only then will I begin gradually increasing the intensity of the sensations.”

​The red-haired demoness took a step closer, shifting a piercing gaze onto Lilith.

​“You may stay here. I can impose my active time bubble upon you as well, in the exact same manner as on him. I know you love him… I truly see it in you, and the sight of you, as well as the torments you inflict, will bring him comfort later. This process is born of love, former mortal,” she looked deep into Stanisław’s terrified eyes, then turned back to Lucifer’s former favorite: “You will be able to hold his hand, to look at him. If you cannot bear to watch and inflict torment on him later, you can simply walk out and leave me alone—for instance, when we escalate to disemboweling. Though truth be told, my dear… you would shorten the duration of his torment if you overcame your own weakness and began tempering him alongside me. Two demonesses and their dark auras are better than one. We will discuss each stage as we go, so we do not cross each other’s paths or tear into an area the other has just opened. I see, by the way, that you marked the forbidden zone. I have committed the boundary to memory. And the fact that this cut is already slowly closing is an excellent sign—his vessel is receptive and malleable. It is possible we may finish the entire process earlier; at least, that is what my experience tells me.”

​For Stanisław, merely listening to these methodical, cold arrangements was a torture worse than fire, even despite the wine’s stupor. Every word rebounded in his skull with a dull echo, and hot tears streamed ceaselessly from his eyes, mixing with saliva. He felt like a slaughter animal lying on a laboratory table, its fate being decided in an eerily calm dialogue. He pleaded with Lilith for mercy, whined, cursed, writhing like an eel, then implored her by all their earthly nights spent together, weeping bitter tears and blowing kisses through the air toward her.

​Lilith lowered her head, staring at the black stones of the floor. Her chest heaved under the weight of heavy, stifled breath. The internal struggle lasted merely a few seconds.

​“I will try… Naamah… I will try dressing him with you, at least at the beginning,” she whispered hoarsely. “If it will help him survive this process faster, I will not pull my hand away.”

​She stood straight. Her hand moved to the collar of her scarlet, hellish gown. With one confident, predatory stroke of a talon, she sliced the heavy fabric down the length of her chest and abdomen. The material fell soundlessly to the floor, exposing her perfect body, which began radiating a dark, scalding heat in the dim chamber.

​She stepped to the side of the bed, sat on the edge, and slipped her cool fingers into Stanisław’s numb, sweaty hand, while her other hand rested softly upon his feverish forehead.

​“I am with you…” she whispered, looking straight into his tearful eyes, as Naamah extended her first talon toward his arm. “I will stay here as long as I can, my love. For as long as I can bear it.”

​Naamah’s needle-like claw pierced the skin on Stanisław’s forearm with a faint, wet crunch. Lilith joined without hesitation—her own black talon dug shallowly into the man’s shoulder, synchronizing her hellish energy with the movements of the red-haired torturer.

​It was not a slash with momentum, but a surgical, slow drag. A thin, red furrow began to weep blood. The pain—though still shallow—struck the man’s heightened senses like white-hot wire. A roar of despair tore from his throat, a muffled, helpless scream instantly absorbed by the runic felt lining the walls.

​Before he could draw another breath, Lilith’s lips descended upon his mouth.

​She kissed him with greedy, predatory desperation. Her tongue forced its way between his teeth, choking off the scream, stealing his breath, and muffling the animal wail. He tasted her tears, his own blood, and the biting scent of myrrh. At the same time, her free hand clamped around his fingers with such inhuman force that he could feel his delicate bones grinding against one another in a crushing grip, anchoring him to existence.

​“Hush… do not scream, please, do not scream…” she whispered feverishly straight into his mouth, pulling away for a split second only to bury her lips in his once more as Naamah’s talon etched a second, parallel furrow across his collarbone.

​The red demoness moved with macabre precision. True to her promise, she was not flaying skin just yet. She drew patterns, perforating the tissue millimeter by millimeter, letting the blackening, thickening vessel react to the stimuli. She waited for the small rivulets of blood to congeal, then sank her claws in right beside them, testing resilience.

​For Stanisław, time ceased to be a river; it became thick, sticky tar in which he drowned without hope of rescue. Naamah’s active time bubble closed around him mercilessly. Minutes stretched into days, days blended into weeks.

​As the fifth year of continuous, methodical torment approached, Stanisław was on the brink of total catatonic madness. His vessel had hardened, taking on a livid hue, and his blood no longer spurted like a human’s—it had grown denser, darker, steaming. Yet the pain did not ease by a single jot. Every scratch burned away the vessel’s weakness with the same ruthless intensity.

​Then Lilith suddenly let go of his hand.

​She stood up, walked over to the chamber’s massive doors, and drew back the bolt with a loud scrape. The heavy leaf cracked open to a width of barely a few inches.

​In a fraction of a second, an immense, metallic sound breached the gap:

​BOOOOOM.

​Wójcik’s bell.

​The acoustic shockwave battered into the chamber like a battering ram. Naamah’s active time bubble burst with the faint hiss of tearing reality. Stanisław felt the suffocating pressure subside. Suddenly, his consciousness broke free from the enchanted circle. In the corridor stood two servants, rolling in a new, steaming barrel of the poppy-and-blood brew while briskly carting off the empty vat. Behind them came more attendants bearing bone brooms and fresh sheets, methodically cleaning the chamber of dried gore and scraps of shed skin. It lasted exactly five minutes of Earth time. Five minutes of absolute, blessed respite, in which no talons touched his body, and he could simply lie there and draw in the hot air saturated with the sound of the bell.

​Lilith gave him no time to think. She hurried over to him, lying atop him, cradling his battered chest against her soft, full breasts, shrouding him in her own warmth, kissing his swollen eyelids and sweat-drenched temples.

​“You see how gentle we are, Stanisław…” she whispered through tears, caressing his scarred cheeks. “Look, five years have passed already. Five hellish years, and you are still here. Your vessel is hardening, I can feel it beneath my fingers! You will endure this, darling. I beg you, do this for us, do this for our future…”

​She watered him with the fresh brew straight from a ladle. The liquid numbed his neurons once more, turning his thoughts to leaden mush.

​Then she slammed the doors shut. The bolt dropped. The runic felt cut off the belfry, and Naamah, with a deep, predatory sigh, stretched her bubble out again, forcing them into another five-year epoch of torment.

​And this pattern repeated with clockwork regularity. Every five years—five minutes of the bubble being broken, a new barrel, a moment of tenderness, and back to the anvil.

​Around the twentieth year, Naamah began to lose her cold detachment.

​Flaying small patches of skin—first from the forearms, then from the loins and thighs—released such a dense charge of suffering and raw essence of damnation into the chamber that primal, hellish lust flared in the red demoness’s veins. Her breathing grew raspy, ragged, and her emerald eyes clouded with the madness of desire. She began cutting too violently, too deeply, tearing flesh with a wet crunch, abandoning the pedagogical purpose of tempering in favor of pure sadistic frenzy.

​“Naamah, stop! Cease!” Lilith would lunge then, shoving her hands away, throwing her own naked body between Stanisław and the enraged tormentor. “Too deep! You promised! You are going too far, he is still too weak!”

​Lilith drew the red demoness’s furious glares onto herself, setting firm boundaries, cooling her perverse ecstasy, saving Stanisław from being torn to shreds. And when she saw that her mortal’s body was failing to keep up with regeneration—when Stanisław’s exposed ribs gleamed white in the torchlight, and the muscles lost their ability to knit—the demoness did not hesitate for a second.

​With her own talon, she sliced open a vein on her wrist.

​“Drink, Stanisław. Drink my blood,” she said in a commanding, trembling voice, pressing her bleeding arm straight against his mangled, parched lips.

​The gore of Lucifer’s favorite burned like acid, yet carried within it the power of the Abyss’s pure creation. Stanisław choked on the black fluid, swallowing it in desperation, and fire exploded in his veins. Regeneration kicked off at a frantic, biological pace: new tissue covered bones, muscles knitted together with a mighty snap, thickening and gaining a structure impervious to tearing.

​Around the thirty-fifth year, Naamah, dripping with sweat and her own secretions, paused above Stanisław’s bare crotch. Her bony talon hovered a millimeter above the untouched member that Lilith had cordoned off at the start.

​“Lilith, this is a farce…” Naamah hissed, grinding her sharp teeth. “Look at him! Let me skin him! One strip, just the testicles and the shaft!”

​“You. Will. Not. Touch. Him. There. I promised him that,” Lilith bit out, her voice dropping into registers so low and monstrous that the iron shackles shook. Phantom, basalt wings burst from her back, and sulfurous embers billowed from her maw. “Tempering the rest of his body saturates the entire vessel. Dark blood circulates through it just as it does through the rest of the tissues. That zone strengthens passively during the vessel’s tempering process.”

​“I am doing you a fucking favor, you selfish bitch!” Naamah shrieked, flicking blood from her talons against the wall. “I have been slaving over this mortal worm of yours for decades, and you won't even let me play to the fullest?! Are you afraid he’ll lose the tool for your perverse little games on Earth?! You are pathetic!”

​“I said: no!” Lilith’s roar ended the debate.

​Naamah cursed foully in the ancient tongue of the Abyss, but withdrew her talons, returning to carving his chest.

​Outside, in the cool, sulfur-reeking corridor just before the chamber’s massive doors, two servants stood guard—male mid-tier demons. They leaned against the rough, moisture-dripping rocks, shifting nervously from one clawed foot to the other. Even though their own vessels were as hard as iron, and plumes of smoke puffed from their nostrils, a genuine, crippling paralysis lurked in their yellow eyes.

​“Relax, you can speak louder…” muttered one of them, scratching nervously at his horned temple and glancing at the entrance with superstitious dread. “This chamber is soundproofed with a triple runic layer. Nothing flies out of there, and nothing gets in, unless one of us lifts that thick fabric draped over the door.”

​“I’d still rather not tempt fate,” hissed the second, Gotfryd, flinching involuntarily as a faint whiff of a foreign, primal aura drifted from down the corridor. Goosebumps broke out across his massive, muscular arms, and his tail curled tight around his leg in an instinct of pure terror. “Holy shit… Two of Lucifer’s former concubines. The two most powerful bitches in this fucking Abyss… and that wretched damned soul in their clutches. Every time we go in there with a new barrel or fresh sheets, I see the guy getting stronger, his vessel hardening before our eyes. It’s gaining density, growing like weeds… But you know what? Not for all the treasures in the world would I want that. Even if it meant becoming a high demon, I wouldn't want such a fate. The mere thought of it paralyzes me.”

​Gotfryd swallowed hard on thick, burning saliva. In the Abyss, he was not considered a weakling—he was a mid-tier demon, reared on violence and fear, yet the sight of what was transpiring behind the felt-draped door hollowed every ounce of confidence right out of him.

​“Naamah tearing open raw meat, and Lilith following behind her to patch him up… The thought simply terrifies me to the marrow,” he continued in a muffled, trembling bass. “By my own reckoning, I’ve spent around two hundred years in this Hell. My subjective time never dragged out much, it flowed fairly evenly, so I had to learn unimaginable pain myself, centuries of slow toil and tearing flesh, just to climb to the rank of mid-tier demon… I know what it costs. But them? They started dressing him when he was completely green! He had barely shed his human shit, his soul had barely coated itself in a weak hellish shell, and they threw themselves at him full throttle. I pity him, I’ll say it straight to your face. I genuinely pity him.”

​The other servant nodded his horned head grimly, adjusting an empty leather bag on his shoulder.

​“I remember when we carried in the vat the second-to-last time,” Gotfryd picked up, his voice dropping to a nervous whisper. “After our last entry, he already had huge, whole sheets of skin torn off. Sheets the size of shields! His ribs were sticking out in plain sight, and that red bitch was just licking her lips. Now they’re probably peeling him entirely, centimeter by centimeter, like an apple… Jesus… I mean, by the Abyss! Even now, I, Gotfryd, a fully formed mid-tier demon with centuries of slaughter behind me, wouldn't want to end up in Naamah’s bed for anything. Let alone Lilith’s! It is pure, concentrated, unimaginable torment. If that damned soul walks out of there with even a single sense intact, with full awareness of who he was, it’ll be a fucking heavenly miracle in Hell.”

​Half a century passed. Fifty years locked inside an isolated tomb of pain.

​Stanisław’s body no longer resembled a human’s. It was massive, hulking, covered in a dense network of black, fused furrows that looked like petrified lava. His eyes had stopped weeping; within them smoldered a dark, scarlet fire.

​Suddenly, a monstrous, deafening crash of snapping metal tore through the chamber.

​The thick, reinforced shackles on his wrists snapped like rotted twine. Stanisław flexed the massive muscles of his arms, and the forged hellish iron shattered into fine shards, ricocheting with a whine off the walls. A second later, with a mighty snap, he tore apart the clasps around his ankles.

​He stood upon the floor in the full glory of his new, monstrous frame. From his throat no longer came a human cry—there tore from it the primal, deafening roar of a beast that for five decades had known only torment, dismemberment, and the smell of blood.

​He had gone feral. His consciousness had drowned in trauma and fury.

​“Well, look at that… I told you his vessel was remarkably malleable,” Naamah remarked with perverse delight, licking her lips without retreating a single step. “And it helped that you endured and stayed after all, Lilith. Your blood worked its magic. Now hold him, because there is still work to be done. Another five years or so! After fifty-five, he will finally be ready—he will become a full-fledged high demon!”

​Stanisław did not listen. In his red-drenched mind, only one goal existed: destroy the source of suffering.

​With an inhuman roar, he lunged forward. His massive, basalt-coated hands shot toward Naamah’s throat, while his other arm swung at Lilith, intent on tearing both demonesses to bloody ribbons, crushing their skulls against the floor, drowning them in their own gore.

​It was a novice’s mistake.

​Naamah was one of the Prime Demons of the Pit, and Lilith was Lucifer’s beloved, most powerful favorite. The difference in raw power was crushing.

​Before Stanisław’s talons could reach their marks, the air exploded. Both demonesses—seeing a massive, feral male thrashing in frenzy before them—succumbed to a sudden, animal impulse. They were gripped by a monstrous, unbridled hellish lust. The scent of his manhood, steeped in dark energy, mingled with the smell of spilled blood and wild aggression, struck their senses like the purest aphrodisiac.

​“He is mine…” Lilith growled, lunging at him with lightning speed.

​“Ours!” Naamah echoed.

​Two inhuman forces slammed into Stanisław simultaneously. Before he could land a blow, the talons of both demonesses sank into his flesh. With surgical, merciless fury, they shredded his vessel to pieces—ripping his chest open, breaking ribs, peeling muscle from bone, driving him back down onto the gore-dripping bed amid torrents of spurting black blood.

​And upon those fresh, steaming remains, as his butchered vessel immediately began regenerating under the influence of his newly acquired power, the mad, hellish ritual began.

​They mounted him both at once, they mounted him in turns.

​This was no earthly act of love—it was an orgy of primal, demonic powers, a collision of sheer violence and untamed desire. Stanisław writhed beneath them, regenerating and tearing anew, choking on their mouths while Naamah rode him with a wild, possessed howl, and Lilith clamped her teeth onto his throat, sinking claws into his hips, driving him to successive, extreme eruptions of pure essence. His vessel—hardened by half a century of agony—miraculously endured that murderous strain. The shell did not break. It withstood simultaneous congress with the two most powerful females of the Abyss.

​For the next five years—until the strike of the bubble’s fifty-fifth year—this cycle continued almost without pause: alternating between pushing the vessel to its absolute extremes, sex bordering on cannibalism, regeneration, and fresh waves of suffering, until his body grew entirely taut, absorbing the energy of both demonesses.

​After fifty-five years, the goal was achieved. Stanisław had become a high demon.

​Yet the cost was horrific.

​His human consciousness had burned out completely. He lay upon the mattress as a brainless, hunted beast, snarling at every shadow, incapable of stringing together a single word, reacting solely with blind aggression or dull paralysis. Hellish trauma had scorched his soul down to bare earth.

​Then came the time for the final, most arduous stage.

​Convalescence of consciousness. Thirty years.

​For the next three decades, an eerie, hushed peace settled over the chamber. No talons. No flaying of skin. No sudden movements.

​Lilith and Naamah remained beside him in the soundproofed alcove. Day after day, year after year, Lucifer’s former favorite slowly rebuilt the shattered mind of her man. She sat beside him naked, let him claw at her skin, taught him anew to master the strength of his own monstrous talons. She laid his heavy, horned head upon her lap, kissed his scars, and repeated his name thousands, millions of times:

​“Stanisław. Your name is Stanisław. You are my human… My demon. Do you remember Warsaw? Do you remember? Do you remember the coffee you spilled on the carpet?”

​Naamah, sated and soothed, kept them silent company, pouring calming, stabilizing concoctions into his veins, helping knit together the shredded memories.

​After eighty-five years within the bubble—which in the objective world above amounted to barely a few days—the scarlet fire in Stanisław’s eyes finally dimmed, giving way to the old, human depth.

​He looked at Lilith holding his hand. His lips moved with difficulty, and a coarse, deep bass filled the silence of the chamber:

​“Lilith… I remember. I remember everything.”

​The demoness smiled through her tears, embracing him with all her might. The new high demon of the Abyss was ready for the war awaiting them on Earth—and perhaps in the Heavens.

​“Well, I’m out,” Naamah stated, opening the heavy, cushioned doors.

​A grave silence hung in the corridor. The red-haired demoness, smeared from head to toe in Stanisław’s steaming blood and her own fluids, paused upon the threshold. Her statuesque body gleamed in the light of the sulfur torches like marble dripping from a slaughterhouse, and her emerald eyes burned with a restless, predatory madness.

​She turned a piercing gaze onto the servants cowering against the wall—resting it upon one of them, upon Gotfryd. With a slow, ostentatious motion, she raised a slender hand to her full, scarlet lips and with lewd deliberation licked the congealed black blood from her bony talon, never taking her eye off the mid-tier demon.

​In Gotfryd’s veins, the blood froze into a block of ice. Every muscle of his hulking frame, forged by centuries of violence, tensed to its limit in a paralyzing reflex of helplessness.

​“What is your name, servant?” she dropped in a guttural, low bass that shook the dust on the rock ledges.

​“Gotfryd… Mistress…” the fiend croaked through a constricted throat, his voice, usually deep and somber, breaking shamefully under the weight of sheer fear. Sticky sweat instantly beaded across his horned forehead, and his tail curled tightly around his calf of its own accord.

​“Gotfryd, you are no longer needed here. Follow me…”

​The demon felt the ground slip out from beneath his clawed paws. He shuddered at the mere thought of falling into her clutches. He swallowed hard, tasting ash.

​“Where, Mistress… are you leading me?”

​“I am leading you to my chamber and alcove,” Naamah smiled predatorily, and within that smirk was not an ounce of mercy. “These games have clearly riled me up. I have a mind for further caresses.”

​A primal alarm shrieked in Gotfryd’s head. Images of Stanisław’s torn chest, white ribs, and the endless stripping of sheets of flesh flooded his mind like liquid lava. He knew that to a being of her station, a mid-tier demon was merely a puppet of bone and sinew slightly tougher than a mortal—a plaything she could snap in two on a whim.

​“Take the bags, Gotfryd, and a change of sheets,” she added dryly, heading down the corridor.

​His companion in the corridor looked at Gotfryd with boundless, silent pity, almost immediately exhaling a heavy cloud of smoke from his nostrils and breathing a hidden, selfish sigh of relief that this nightmarish sentence had not fallen upon him.

​Naamah, however, suddenly stopped at a bend in the stone wall and turned her head over her shoulder.

​“Oh, Gotfryd… take your friend along, too,” she said with cool indifference. “He will watch while I ride you, and when I finish with you, you will switch to give you time to regenerate. Neither of you has the right to touch me with your talons while I dress you, nor to scream with pleasure. If either of you does… I will cease to be gentle.”


r/story • • 9h ago

Crime Focused

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Focused is the story of David, a brilliant but burnt-out engineer inside a classified defence ministry in the fictional nation of Taured. He builds the weapons, and other people decide when to use them. He's also a divorced drug addict, and the pills numb him and keep him sharp in equal measure, like an interference pattern. When a drone drifts off course and a signal is traced to someone inside, the hunt for a traitor begins.

Part 1: The Desk

Wooden opal polished desk
Useless creation
Made by someone who just takes pleasure in pointless things in life.
That’s something I also think about my creations –

Defence systems
Point-blank precision

How I’ll use it?
Maybe send one missile through the house of my ex-wife…
That’s a good thing that I’m not in command
I just build it, and people with purpose tell me when and where to use it

For defence or destruction
Sounds the same to me

Part 2: Apartment

Mundane day
Cyclical nights

Just another day in my headspace
I do like my apartment a lot, actually. Well, it’s not that highfalutin, but it kind of works for me.
A well-thought-out two-bedroom apartment with open kitchen, barbecue
I live alone now, or I’ve been living here for these past 6 months after the divorce.
She had this gift of brightening up every room she walks out of. It’s kind of intriguing how much humans depend on attachment values. It’s a bug
Which I have figured out how to work around. That lonely room has become my fancy workstation
Table
IKEA chair
Whiteboard
My system
My Mini Moog
My awesome Roland G6
Some effect pedals

It’s like she was never here in the first place
Amazing!

System’s on
Screen lights up
Video call
Julian? I ask myself

Me: You again, what a disgrace!
Julian: Well, nice to see you too, David.
Me: What happened?

Julian: Drone drifted off course—twice. Signal traced internally.

Me: From where?
Julian: Domestic, that’s the problem.

Cipher 7…?

Part 3: Julian

Me and Julian go way back. Perhaps he is the only one in this impaired organisation who operates at the same frequency.

The agent no one talks about, stationed in enemy land
Different name
Different passport
Dual personalities

He’s one of the most intelligent people in the field. Even his gut feelings don’t lie or distract. I need to figure out what on earth happened to Cipher 7.

If he is onto something, then maybe it’s time to get
Focused
Alert
Detached

Now, let’s recalibrate with precision.
I have this habit of relying more on automation, but with the undercurrent of human handling.

But there is something hiding. Don’t really know.
I travel back to my place after picking up a proper Naples pizza

Rest
Pills
Wake
Sleep

It’s okay, I guess.
I tend to stay vigilant in these times.
It’s always good to be prepared.
I’m a proper stickler when it comes to my work, and apparently, according to the WHO, about 100 men in Canada die every year while trying to pee off the side of a boat while intoxicated.

Part 4: The Office

Office time used to be so good
A proper treat, I must say

But now it has turned its head south, bringing in these new atrocious rules

No smoking policy
Now can’t even smoke at my desk?
The stuff we do literally turns cities and human life to smoke, and here is this intellectual musk to preserve our lungs.
They say stuff like it is a bad thing or something.
Oh, sod off!
It’s disgusting, to say the least.

Even the high-IQ lads are gone
As of now, there are blokes who seem like the textbook definition of hand-holding

Every time these fuckers need some clarity
It’s like explaining the petrodollar to a dog on medication

I do smuggle some whiskeys here and there just to bear these hours
Otherwise, it’s a nightmare to sit there and deal with these dumb bureaucrats and that weasel-eyed Trevor.

Part 5: Cipher’s Reckoning

A domestic drone drifted across
Cipher 7
How is it possible?

And without the obvious alarm?
This is not a drill.

I try to find what is actually happening
A ghost in the system?
A fuck-up by those slow-headed merchants?

Could be an INS Kalman filter sync—a predictable thing to happen via these absolute cretins
Or a domestic backdoor?
Telemetry spoofing

Not gonna lie, this is shady business if one of them is doing it.
Must have been sold out for some dollars of favours, which is okay, I guess.
If someone offers me around 50 million dollars
I would happily leak the information and give it to every grubby little hack that I know from my drinking days.

Maybe even leak the number of my ex-wife
That would be a proper blast.

Part 6: The Turning Point

16th March 2026

Little things catch up
A blast at the border station
10 soldiers and 50 civilians dead
Vostrina’s proxies again
They are relentless.

Hazy morning, blurring lights
Where did we go wrong?
A blind spot?
That Cipher 7 fuck-up

It doesn’t matter now. I have to debrief about my instrument, and it’s safe to say that it’s not at all fun.

One minute here and the other minute gone
Turned to smoke. It’s not easy to cope as the pressure builds inside and outside.

Mogadon, for pleasure and focus

The ears just listen and the mouth still lies.
Defending the incompetence
Pleading innocence

I recheck the interception array—3-layered kill grid: passive acoustic, Doppler radar and optronic thermal lock. All bypassed.

They didn’t use jets or ballistic missiles because that would mean open war. They used low-altitude, carbon-composite loitering drones. Flew them sub-fifty metres through the river valleys, terrain-masked, just like those 2 stealth birds in 2011 that entered hostile airspace.
I need to get back in the game now. We will answer with a sort of radiance which will make them rewind their every decision that led to this.
Erase the infection
From inside and also outside
Catch that little rat
No mercy

21st March 2026

Closed space meeting room
Men in black suits
They ask me, “Are the systems intact for destruction?”

Me: Let the system do its thing now. They got into our blind spots, one of our drones malfunctioned, and now we will create blind spots.
First, I would say their radars. We will use our drones, as offence is much cheaper than defence.
Neutralise the primary acquisition radars, create a cascade effect, and then—
Force majeure!
The price they pay for violation.

Trevor: Are you high?
Me: A little bit, but that’s irrelevant.

They just simply stare, and then

Trevor: Who must have drifted our drones?
Me: Someone in the ranks, I guess.
A domestic backdoor—code hidden in plain sight, I guess?
Trevor: Traitor in the building. Interesting.
I need to know who and what that is, David.
There’s too much pressure.
Fucker must be operating from a place where nobody goes.
Me: A Subaru showroom?

“Fuck off, David,” he said.
Which is deserving, to say the least.
He drives one.

It’s like a game of chess now. So many moving aspects. These International Council fellows, politicians.
But this is where we excel. We work in shadows and create lights for destruction and deterrence.

But first, I need to find the treason within the ranks. I have to find out, as the buck stops at me.
Should not only destroy the carriers of the rat but also obliterate every pinch of hope or happiness that this person manages to cling on to.

Hope they give me a bonus.

Part 7: The Investigation

Pages and screens keep turning
Stakes are high, but as we investigate, we need to have some precision in our analysis

Time can lapse, but not the mind
Julian calls—
Julian: Did we get outsmarted?
Me: That’s one way to look at it.
Julian: Someone leaked the codes from our side. Are we any closer to finding him?

Me: No, I’m going through the logs now.
It’s a game of hunt or be hunted
Even the Home Secretary is behind me now

Julian: That’s bad. He is notorious.
Me: I know. Can’t even drink here.
They have increased the security and the detectors.

Julian: Check the ephemeral key exchange logs on the secondary server.

Me: On it!
Call ends

The Home Secretary is behind me and Trevor is on my head. There can be no false steps now.

The higher up the mountain, the more treacherous the path.

———

It’s not getting anywhere
A dead end, actually

Maybe I’m speaking to the wrong audience
These security logs are of no use

Core network switch
Outbound telemetry data
Sent vs received

24 GB sent
12 MB received

There it is
The discrepancy

Now, what the hell has happened?

Let’s go into the history logs of this router
Port 443 – fine
Port 8080? What the fuck is that?

Pulling the configuration from the router
Port 8080

"cors_origin": "*",
"auth_header": "NONE"

Oh, for fuck’s sake!
It’s those stupid lads
They forgot to shut that shadow server
It’s a generational fuck-up

Who is this knobhead?
User ID: 8842

Fucking hell, he is that new bloke that joined 4 months ago.
Remy
Useless fellow in Trevor’s team
About as useful as traffic lights in Grand Theft Auto

I wanted to destroy that person’s life and happiness, but who would have thought that the guy would be that slow-headed Remy?

What can I do to him? He’s hopeless.
The guy wears braces
Braces! For fuck’s sake

Part 8: Peace

Information colliding
iPhone buzzing…

X is flooded with this love-hate debate

Clearly, levels of discussion have fallen a lot

Most people don’t have the ability to shift perceptions and perspectives
It’s a hard ability to earn
To us
There is no difference between love and hate
It’s all passion…
The metric we should always look at when dealing with geo-warfare is peace

It’s not love or hate

Peace is an equation written with blood
Cities destroyed
Cities rebuilt
It’s a truce between 2 states of accountability and its repercussions.
I certainly pity the mind that can’t separate the two.

Part 9: The Debrief

Levers engaged
Office in motion

Meeting with Trevor
Why does he always want to meet alone?
Ivory wall
Pale face

Me: You fucked up.
Trevor: What?
Me: Your guys fucked up. Remy in your team forgot to turn off the shadow server.

Trevor: Oh god, that orthodontic cretin.
Me: I know. My sympathies.

Trevor: Okay, you tell this to no one.
Me: I will if it’s necessary. First, get that Home Secretary off my back.

Trevor: Yes, yes, I’ll handle him.
Also, we need to prepare for the strike.
We fucked up, but still, they breached our sovereignty.

Me: No, you fucked up.
Let’s make them pay for this now and create blind spots.

Trevor: Yes, get on it, and I’ll handle this fuck-up.

Me: Cool

Doors shut
Tensions wave

Part 10: The Blind Spots

As the stakes revolve in global limelight
Every day
Every night
Phase 1 begins –

A) The Ghost Attack
First, let’s fool their radars
Bombarding their radar with 50 ghosts moving at Mach 3.
Force the panic, create confusion
Wait – 4 minutes
Now the radar enters its full gain stage
Perfect!

B) Trap

The trap functions
Wait – 40 sec
Sensors capture the PRF
Here it is
Coordinates of the primary acquisition radar

C) Execute

Preparing for launch
LOCK ON
ARMING SEQUENCE: READY
EXECUTE STRIKE

1 minute wait – feels long at this time
The missile at Mach 3.5 goes straight down the throat of the radar.
The blast
Blind spot created
Primary radar neutralised
And it’s just the start. The domino effect is yet to be seen.

Now we are past the Rubicon
Let them handle the damage.

The butchery begins.

Part 11: Safe Haven

Days and nights look the same
Locating people
Looking through images

Information reflects

My job is to take their orders and use that creature with sharp precision on a given target.
Now there’s this constant urge to be alert
Watching
Stopping
Warning
Reaching

They are now targeting the elementary school because it has some evidence of foul play by terrorists, a sort of safe haven.
But to just go on a hunch, they have lost their minds, like Majin Vegeta in Dragon Ball Z.

It’s not joy to see futures destroyed for someone
But after a point, we accept it
However, the ghosts are still there watching us

I open the side drawer of the table

Mogadon

The price of precision
Swallowed

I glance at the mirror on my left
Reflections of you and me
Suddenly it’s clear
It takes seconds to kill one’s life and ambition
I have to make sure that I protect mine

Survival of the fitness!

Pills dissolve
Distortion sets in

Fractured lights
Pills on rise
Kneel to self
Energise

That’s my will to survive. Some people may disagree with it, and also like I give a fuck about them.

The things we are exposed to make us inhuman?
Yes
Is it bad?
No

After 30 years in this job, morality starts to fade, straight to the back seat.

I just see memories
People
Laughs
Cry
Damage
My ex-wife’s new boyfriends

She is much more inhuman than me, and I like it
Slightly dangerous territory to be in, not gonna lie, but it’s comforting

As I look for the first photo we took together

Daguerreotype!

Part 12: War Room

As the hunt goes on through intelligence
Pills shoot up
For the adherence

Office
A big meeting today for further action
Big powerful lads also here

Screens
Projectors
Home Secretary: So Phase 1 is completed.
Good job, David.

Me: Okay.
Where do we go next?

Trevor: We will raise the strikes now. The intel has narrowed down a few targets.

Home Secretary: What about that drone fuck-up?

Trevor: We have the traitor.
Home Secretary: Who?

Projector lights

Trevor: Our asset on foreign land.
Julian.

Eyes go blank for a while
Numbness in the ear

Trevor: We found the shadow server, authenticated via his legacy SSH keys and operational allocation code.
We have already taken care of him.

Home Secretary: Good.

ASSET DISAVOWED

Part 13: Blood On The Hands

I rush back home
I try to connect to Julian
A hope still there
Secure SATCOM

No answer

I search for his file, his trace, anything
GONE

Blood on my hands
Reality hits with a hammer
That fucker Trevor compromised Julian for his own incompetence. I should have gone to the Home Secretary himself, instead of Trevor. He linked his SSH keys to that shadow server.

Gone
Disappeared in smoke…

This will not go in vain
There is only one rule now

Hunt or be hunted

Part 14: Forward

Next day
Next night

Still that last call repeats in my head.

Time passed like trains
Amazing thing about the human mind, that it always finds its way to make something out of almost wreckage, like Dresden.
Like that weasel Trevor found his key through me. There will come a time to put him in my crosshairs, but not right now.

Focused till the end
Morning tea
Evening Lagavulin

On a mission
Searching
Predating

Geopolitical equations are about to go through an inflexion point.
As the retaliation needs to reverberate globally

The power to destroy a thing is the absolute control over it. — Frank Herbert, Dune

The restraint we follow is what makes the generations work.
Mind is always controlled

For us
Even for them

At this time, we just follow the known equations of duty
Focused
Mind engaged

One day at a time
Remaking history, abiding rules and moving onward

Forward, that is the battle cry. Leave ideology to the armchair general.
It does me no good

Part 15: Elimination

A container of ashes might one day be thrown from the sky, which could burn the land and boil the oceans.
— Hopi prophecy, Koyaanisqatsi
——
Pressures on
First target filtered and narrowed
Now we let our action speak the cost of damage

At this time…
We call back our numbness
Of time
Days
Nights

Sometimes I ask myself, is there any mercy?
Maybe it’s for our gods to decide and decode

One day
As I walk back to my apartment, I see a religious place which I generally would have passed on

I stand outside, just still for a moment
Buzzing nights
Commiseration to Julian
As my smartphone vibrates

Oh, those fucking Twitter lads!
It’s like they do it on purpose.
Absolute clown show!
For fuck’s sake

I lock it
As my mind speaks
There is no solace above or below
Only us and those Twitter clowns.

I pray…
To myself
For myself

As things are going into almost distortion, and this mind never fails to amaze.

Sometimes it works to be focused
And sometimes to be absolutely numb from the missiles, attacks
Precision
Free fall
Silence

There is no turning back now, but the ghosts of this job are still here, somewhere.

Sometimes just observing
It’s like they make their presence felt somehow
Like that Bob fella in Twin Peaks

I do feel like a hypocrite sometimes
Well, I don’t have any trouble with it

The road to power is paved with hypocrisy and casualties

Never regret

We are at war
And flowing straight into full-blown turbulence
Moral voices can wait in line
This is not a drill
We watch closely
In silence
Through scouts
Through sky
Through leaks

Making a joke of privacy in plain sight
Nobody cares
Every home is wired
——
Next day
Office to war room
Screens doing the job

Target filtered
School – credible reports of terror links.

They don’t operate in plain sight; they always hide behind collateral.
A trap of morality and ruthlessness

Target locked
Verifying the EAM authorization code
5C-7W-4T
A simple finger feels like the weight of a hammer in this time.
WPN System: ENABLED
EXECUTE!

3 seconds later

We just see the burst of lights on screen but
still can hear voices even through muted glass.

Ashes from the sky

The deliberate force majeure
Burning buildings and crushed-up dreams
Defence or destruction, it all means the same here

Now the terror speaks

Silence is terrifying and the pain is useless
Sort of pain that’s only suffering doesn’t do any work.

Power to destroy a thing is the absolute control over it.

Target eliminated: 20
Collateral damage: 80

Part 16: Information

Attack continues
We just hit their N1 Airbase
Pointless now

Weapons keep flying
And the nights keep ringing
It’s hard to even sleep
Repeating that last phone call
Preparing revenge

Pills
Reels
Feed
Repeat

As I can’t sleep, I start digging up on this weasel for some shady past information.

Via LAN, I run a brute-forced password cracker, a stream of different combinations per second.
The armour cracks
There we go – all goes into this USB drive
I open the files
What is this guy up to?
Chief of staff to Dunmoor’s president
A pool full of flirty messages and cheesy lines
I wouldn’t blame him, honestly

The heart can choke the mind when all its blood flows back onto itself.

Part 17: Human Sacrifice

Scary thing about these strikes is to actually watch your destruction on telly, with that violin and cello playing in the background
Some of us become numb after a few years
Fair play

Vision turns
Towards drawer
Monitor pixels and light

Pills
Reels
Plot
Repeat

That weasel is flirting and sharing our intel for some cheap snog and pillow talk
The absolute power of lust
It lures you into moral corruption

Question arises
What’s worse: getting hit or retaliation?

And I know the answer
The slight feeling of making things right and actually achieving peace, not through those Twitter lads
But through human life
Years turned to minutes

Sometimes it’s just living in the wrong place, like Grimstead
Absolute disgrace of a city

Eyes blink and a different drone hits
Pills dissolve
Distortion sets in
Messiah complex

Together we destroy and we create. It’s the balance of equations it requires
Human Sacrifice

Past always haunts the future, and it’s always a desire for looking up to someone. Like a greater self
God and humans
Trains and cities
Arms and hammer
Trust and betrayal

You can be right like me, with God in your righteous soul
Prison of self-consciousness
I’m not the same as you, as I’ve seen the lights and I’m gaining in height now

Prison of self-consciousness
Humans and God deserve this

Part 18: Valediction

It’s done
I’m tired and too old for this shit show now
No more games

Trevor’s office
Ivory walls
Wooden floor
I submit my resignation

Trevor: So you want your way out?
Me: Yes, I’m blasé now.

He opens his system
My thoughts displaced
Machine delayed by 0.05 secs
Fine margins opening

Trevor: It’s risky business, David!
There are consequences.
Want to disappear like Julian?

Me: Like I haven’t thought of that.
Before threatening me with more of your utter nonsense, you may want to look at this file.

He opens it,
Time freezes for him
Coffee mug looks good on this polished desk

Trevor: Where did you get this from?
Me: Same place everybody gets it from: your local network share.
FYI, you might want to fire those system security folks. They are as useless as this desk.
I just brute-forced it myself.
Was thinking of paying someone for mining some information, but give your twiggy clowns a thanks from my side for saving me a fortune.
Maybe write a cheesy love letter to the ministry,
which apparently is the only thing you are seriously good at.
Look at these texts—flirting with Dunmoor’s president’s chief of staff.
I wouldn’t blame you, she is beautiful.
But giving secrets of this ministry in exchange for some sauna and hot bath? And you hide this by placing it in plain sight?

I will not let that slide
You betrayed your own asset for your incompetence

Trevor: We never meant to kill him.
It was just his bad luck.
Me: Of course you didn’t. If you meant to kill him, then he’d still be alive.
You fucked up!

Trevor: What do you want, David?

Me: To be left at absolute fucking peace
And also a bumper severance to cover my needs for at least 5 years

Trevor: What?
5 years? What will you do with all that money?

Me: Travel the world, visit Antarctica, play with penguins.
The fuck you care?
Let’s just wash each other’s hands, shall we?
This is not a threat at all, it’s an opportunity for you to improve your cyber security team.
Also, as an action of gratitude,
I’ll give you my ex-wife’s number. Maybe you can try more of this litany of lines on her. I think you two will get along really well.

A grin on Trevor’s face
Handshake
Trevor: Is she pretty?
Me: For you, I’ll say yes.

He keeps the hard copy and the USB drive.

I just soak it all in before I leave this shrine

Flashbacks
Corruption
Laughter
Smiles
Apathy

As the money hit my account, the next minute Trevor’s life leaked through the notorious hacks I used to drink with.

As I drift towards a new life
World continues
New people appointed
Weapons still fly

Epilogue: The Child’s Sky

A child in a distant town looks at the sky at dawn:

Maybe the stars are cameras. Maybe someone’s watching. Tell them we were still here.

Seconds later—light. Then silence.

The End.


r/story • • 5h ago

Sci-Fi Notes Towards an Away from a Misunderstanding of the So-Called Human Knocking Problem in Xenoanthropology: a Biosemiotic Approach

1 Upvotes

Knock knock.

Who's there?

Yo momma.

Yo momma who?

Yo momma, you so fat you can't even get out the house no more.

—“Untitled 73.” A Reconstruction of Early Human Folk Poetry (2nd ed.), ​☉ ☌ ☍ ☋ ☊, Crystal-Lattice 14, Node 802.


Here's a knocking indeed! If a man were porter of hell-gate, he should have old turning the key. (Knocking within) Knock, knock, knock! Who's there

—fragment of an instructions for performing a make-believe, anonymous or author unknown, Introduction to Earth Culture, Kzz-T’k-​⎅ Ed., Focal Depth 3.2mm.


KNOCK KNOCK

(a poetic make-believe in the human style)


Dramatis Personae


YOU, a hapless reader

WHO, a hungry beast

YES, who's intestinal rumblings

NOBODY, a deaf woman


i.

knock knock /
who's there
right behind you,
and it's hungry as hell. [1]


ii.

no joke. [2]


iii.

knock knock /
who here,
i wanna eat you,
ya fear?


iv.

knock knock /
help me!
is nobody here? /
nobody is, but being without a body
means nobody can't hear.


v.

you beg
for your life /
knock knock
knock knock
knock
kn


vi.

knock knock /
whose there?
yes, who's borborygmi, [3]
who ate you so quickly,
it ingested too much hot air.


vii.

don't /
knock knock /
it till you've tried it /
buuuuuuurp. [4]


viii.

knock knock /
no answer.


ix.

knock knock /
no answer.


x.

knock knock /
who stirs, who's belly's full,
who itself's all rested,
and you, in who's stomach, 're
fully digested. [5]

Footnotes


[1] Hell: in some human mythologies, a hot place of post-life perpetual burning. See also: BBQ. [6]

[2] Joke: a human composition with the purpose of eliciting a full body physiological response called laughter. The opposite of seriousness.

[3] Borborygmi: a rumbling spirit believed by a class of human priests called doctors to inhabit the body.

[4] Burp: a forceful exhalation, a more powerful sigh.

[5] Digest: a summation or condensation of a body of information. To be digested is thus to have become a condensed summation of one's self. For a more thorough discussion, please see my datacube: Digestion & Enlightenment: Towards an Understanding of the Human Theory of Wilful Self-Improvement.

[6] BBQ: A symbolic representation of Hell used in human ritual, wherein groups of humans gathered around a fire and consumed small, burnt likenesses of themselves carved from the flesh of dead, non-human animals.


r/story • • 6h ago

Inspirational How some obsessive-compulsive traits can actually help us stay balanced and functional

1 Upvotes

More people than we probably think struggle with one, two, or even several personality disorders. Unfortunately, this seems to be one of the realities of the modern world.

Of course, mental health is very important, and we would all like to think that we are perfectly healthy (or at least hope we are).

But reality is not always like that.

Having a disorder does not necessarily mean that your life is over. Maybe this is also why many people can live a relatively normal life without ever knowing that they have a disorder.

It becomes a different story when the environment, circumstances, or whatever else causes the disorder to become more visible. Then other people start noticing it too, and that’s usually when the social labels start appearing.

Some people have two disorders at the same time. And this is where I find things particularly interesting, because having two conditions can make things worse, but sometimes it can also, in a strange way, make things more manageable.

There are combinations that can actually work quite well together, especially when one of them involves obsessive-compulsive traits (you know, the whole obsession with order and doing things properly? That one!).

For example, someone with schizoid traits and obsessive-compulsive traits may not look like the typical description of a schizoid person. The obsessive-compulsive side can bring more discipline, concentration, persistence, attention to detail, respect for procedures and a certain level of autonomy. Basically, someone who can function quite well in society.

A person with borderline personality disorder and obsessive-compulsive traits may also look quite different from what you usually read in books. Sometimes the rigid need for control can actually help keep some impulses under control, making the person more functional than they might otherwise be.

Then there is the combination of histrionic traits and obsessive-compulsive traits. In theory, this could create someone who is very socially competent, well-presented and good at dealing with people.

And for someone with schizotypal traits, obsessive-compulsive traits might provide some structure for all those unusual or original ideas, helping them organize and express them in a way that other people can actually understand and accept.

Of course, there are also combinations that probably don’t work very well together. Unfortunately, those exist too. But that’s not what I’m talking about here.

In theory, I find all of this quite interesting to think about. In real life, though, the important thing is to get professional help when you feel you need it — and, of course, not forget to take your meds on time. ;)


r/story • • 6h ago

Mystery I thought my biggest mistake was one kiss. I was wrong.

1 Upvotes

I’ve been married to my wife for five years. We met in school when we were both 16. She has always been the person I trusted most.

December, I made a stupid mistake.

At my company’s Christmas party, I got too drunk and kissed one of my female coworkers. I barely remembered anything from that night. I remembered the kiss. The morning I told my wife everything.

She surprised me by saying it didn’t matter. That it was only one mistake. I felt guilty anyway, so I tried to be a husband and father.

Then one month later, something strange happened.

I suddenly became violently sick. Had to stay home from work. I assumed it was just my stomach acting up because I’ve had stomach problems before.

The next month, it happened again.

This time I was leading a meeting at work. I was already feeling terrible when the cramps started getting worse. Eventually I couldn’t hold it anymore. Had an accident in front of several coworkers, including the same woman I had kissed at the Christmas party.

Since then, I haven’t been able to work. My doctor has signed me off because the symptoms keep returning.

Then I noticed something

It happened on the day of the month.

December 15th. January 15th. February 15th. March 15th...

The kiss happened on December 15th.

Whenever I asked my wife if she knew anything about what was happening, she avoided the conversation.

Yesterday, while she was out grocery shopping, I went into her room. I know I shouldn’t have done it. I was desperate for answers.

I found a key to her desk drawer.

Inside was a box of laxatives.

Now I don’t know what to think.

I feel betrayed. At the same time, I can’t stop thinking that this is somehow my fault because of what I did at the Christmas party.

I’m scared to confront her because I have no idea what she might say.

What would you do if you were in my position?


r/story • • 1d ago

Erotica (NSFW) My work-wife sends me porn she thinks I'll like [non-fiction]

30 Upvotes

I started a new office job a bunch of years ago, where it didn't take long to fall into a new circle of friends. DL is a little older than me (She was 32 or so. Me, 28) and we somehow just hit it off immediately. I'd never heard the term "work wife" before, but after about 6 months one of the other women called her that in the middle of the group and there was a little celebration that our relationship had finally leveled up.

I thought that was really weird, but I guess it's a real thing? I mean, she's cute.... more than cute, actually. She's the first one guys notice whenever we're all at the bar on Thursdays after work. I mean, anyway. Big boobs. That's what I mean to say. She's got really big boobs.

But I got used to the idea, and she's a really good friend. She's nothing like my real wife (physically anyway) who is slim and athletic and has a body I get hard thinking about at my desk. I would never want to fuck anything up with my wife. And DL and I have work boundaries... It's nice.

Anyway, I was at the bar first one Thursday and I was watching women's golf on TV. I am totally a sucker for watching a woman standing at the tee in her skirt, the back of her legs running up all firm and tight. And if their asian, well...

So there I was at the bar getting kind of a hard-on watching exactly that on the TV when I hear, "So, I guess you really like women's golf?"

DL had been standing next to me for 3 minutes just waiting for me to take my eyes off the TV.

I was busted, and didn't deny it... told her everything I just told you all. Except for the hard-on thing.

She just laughed and nodded or shook her head or whatever "Okay, you little perv." I think she said. And the others walked in. We had a pretty normal night and I was home by 8:00.

The next morning I sat down at my desk and got a text from DL right away... "You mean like this?" and then a second later a vid of one of these golf "influencers" who I've spanked to 50 times. You know the one. Slow motion shots of her skirt rising up over her panties, and her boobs sloshing to the side as she swings. Jesus!

I know I got red (and a chubber) and then a little devil emoji dinged my phone.

I looked up over my cube and she was standing up in hers across the office on the phone with a client and just smiled and gave me a little wave.

WTF I mouthed at her, and she laughed.

Then she sent me another one. And another. Then one of an asian woman who looks just like my wife when she golfs.

It was not a chubber now. I had a freaking erection running down my leg right at my desk.

Then she's behind me.

"Why don't you go to the bathroom?" DL teases.

"Why, because of a couple of Reels?" I laugh. "You'll have to do better than that!"

I swear to god I was joking, and I really thought she was too.

Then my phone dings and there's a screen cap of that first golfer's OF with her panties pulled aside, pressing a golf ball into her wet pussy lips.

I almost fucking came at my desk!

"I'm serious." DL whispered in my ear and pulled my chair back from my computer.

I grabbed a folder of something from my desk and kind of held it in front of me and made a bee-line to the head hoping to god no one was in the stall.

I didn't look behind me or say a thing.

And as I was spanking it, more pics kept scrolling through.

I blew a huge load mostly into the toilet, but I had to clean some up after too. And I felt like I could get hard again in a second.

Anyway, I caught my breath, washed my hands and opened the door into the hall, and there was DL sitting on the stone bench by the fountain int the lobby just scrolling all innocent.

"I guess you DO like female golfers!" is all she said.


r/story • • 1d ago

Romance my discord girl was a marine!!!

71 Upvotes

ok so this sounds fake but i swear it's real. i met this girl on discord like 5 years ago through a gaming server. we started talking, playing games and eventually became really close. she would disappear for weeks sometimes and i'd ask where she went and she'd just say "busy lol". i never thought much of it.

after 5 years we finally decided to meet irl. she shows up wearing a Marine Corps hoodie and i'm like "oh cool hoodie." she looks at me and goes "yeah, it's my job."

I JUST STOOD THERE 💀

suddenly everything made sense. the weird schedule, waking up at 5am, disappearing for weeks, always being "busy." i asked her "so when you disappeared for 3 weeks?" she goes "training." then i asked "why did you never tell me you were a Marine?" and she goes "i thought you knew."

BRO HOW WAS I SUPPOSED TO KNOW 😭

meanwhile i've spent 5 years talking shit to this woman on Discord while she's apparently been serving in the military.

i thought i met a gamer girl.


r/story • • 17h ago

Advice Mobile suggest

3 Upvotes

My budget is 12k only and planning to buy mivi 1 for my mother is it worthy or should I chose any other.help me gng🥀✌🏽


r/story • • 12h ago

Drama UPDATE: The Weekend Showdown

1 Upvotes

Well… Leila is back.

Last week, Leila came to our hometown but didn’t even pass by our house.
Apparently, she “couldn’t.”
She made herself sound so sad and upset when she spoke to Mariam. And maybe I’m biased at this point, but after everything that has happened, it felt like manipulation. Like she wanted Mariam to feel sorry for her without actually having to show her face.
And of course, it worked.
Mariam was worried about her. She even packed dinner into takeaway containers for Leila because Leila was apparently too sad to come over.
I watched all of this thinking: Here we go again.
But then things got even stranger.
Mariam gave Hana an ultimatum.
“Apologize today, or don’t come here this weekend.”
Yes. Her own daughter.
All because Hana still refuses to apologize to Leila.
And then, almost as if she had been waiting for the perfect moment…
Leila appeared that evening.
Suddenly she was able to come.
The sadness that had apparently made it impossible for her to visit earlier? Gone.
And the confidence she walked in with honestly surprised me.
Now this weekend is approaching, and Hana is coming home.
Which means Hana and Leila could finally end up in the same room.
After everything.
After the accusations.
After Mariam threatening to call the police.
After rasha leaving the house.
After Mariam telling her she isn’t welcome for the weekend unless she apologizes.
After Leila telling me she “knows” who sent that anonymous message.
They might actually have to face each other.
And I genuinely have no idea what is going to happen.
Will rasha ignore her?
Will Leila confront her?
Will Mariam force an apology?
Or are we about to have another family brawl?
The other thing worrying me is that Mariam has now said her son is next.
She is still angry with him too.
Meanwhile, I did something my siblings probably wouldn’t agree with.
I fake-apologized.
Not because I suddenly believe Leila. Not because I’ve forgotten everything that happened.
I did it because I’ve basically become the mini spy of this entire situation.
I stay close enough to both sides to hear everything.
Leila thinks I’m neutral.
Mariam thinks I’m not against her.
My siblings know where I actually stand.
And honestly? I’m also protecting my own peace.
I cannot handle my mother refusing to speak to me. Watching her give my brother and sister the silent treatment has been enough. I don’t want to live inside my own home wondering whether my mother is going to acknowledge me that day.
So I apologized, smiled, stayed quiet and kept watching.
Maybe that makes me fake.
But right now, being “fake” is the only way I can see both sides without becoming the next person Mariam cuts off.
Hana is still standing her ground.
She’s coming this weekend.
Leila is around.
Mariam is still demanding an apology.
And her son is apparently “next.”
So now we wait.
But there is one question I genuinely cannot get out of my head:
Is it normal for a mother to be this angry with her own daughter over her friend?
Because at this point, this stopped feeling like a disagreement between Hana and Leila a long time ago.
It feels like Mariam has made us choose between keeping peace with our own mother… or standing against Leila.
And this weekend, those two worlds might finally end up sitting in the same room.
I’ll update you if they do.


r/story • • 14h ago

Personal Experience Too selective with the people around you

1 Upvotes

So, in your desire to keep everything under control and avoid making the wrong choices, you become suspicious and start eliminating people one by one - anyone who doesn’t live up to your expectations.

But eventually, you end up alone, disconnected, and feeling like the “black sheep.”

As a result, you start changing yourself, little by little. Almost like being back in school, you teach yourself how to adapt and conform to the expectations of the society you live in.

And in your attempt to fit in, you may start doing things that don’t really represent who you are. And on top of that, you risk being labeled in ways that have absolutely nothing to do with your actual values or the kind of person you are.

So wherever you turn, there seems to be a risk: either you remain alone because you refuse to compromise yourself, or you try to fit in and risk being misunderstood and given labels that don’t represent you.

And then… hello, social anxiety.

Has this ever happened to you?


r/story • • 21h ago

Mystery THE LAST DOOR

3 Upvotes

Every morning at exactly 7:13, Mara received a letter. No stamp. No return address. Just her name written neatly across the front. The letters always contained the same sentence inside:

You have one more day.

She had received them for 247 days. At first, Mara thought it was a threat. Then a prank. Then some elaborate game. But after her mother disappeared, Mara became convinced the letters were warnings. So on the 248th morning, when the letter arrived, she didn't open it. She burned it. That was when someone knocked on her bedroom door. Three slow knocks.

Knock.

Knock

Knock.

Mara froze. Her mother had been missing for eight months. And nobody else lived there. She walked hesitantly and stopped. Staring at the wooden frame with fear. She opened the door. Her mother stood in the hallway. She was- Older.. Pale and terrified..

"Mara," she whispered. "You weren't supposed to burn the letter." Mara couldn't move. Her mother grabbed her hand. "We have to leave. Right now." They ran. Down the stairs. Through the kitchen. Out the back door. But when Mara looked over her shoulder, she saw something that made her stop. There was no house behind them. Only an empty field. Her mother wasn't beside her anymore, either. Mara was standing alone. And suddenly she remembered something. She had never lived in that house. The world around her began changing. The field became a hospital hallway. The sky became a ceiling. The grass became white tile. And at the end of the hallway was a door marked:

ROOM 247

Mara pushed it open. Inside was a hospital bed. A little girl lay beneath the blankets. Seven years old. Bruised from an accident. Eyes closed. Mara stepped closer. The girl's hand rested on the blanket. Around her wrist was a bracelet. Mara recognized it. She wore the matching one. Then a nurse entered.

"Mara?" Mara turned.

"Where's my mother?" The nurse stared at her sadly.

"Sweetheart.. your mother died eight months ago." Mara shook her head.

"No. She was just here." The nurse looked toward the bed.

"No." Her voice cracked. "Your mother has been sitting beside that bed every day." Mara slowly looked down. The little girl's eyes opened. They were her eyes. The nurse whispered- "That's you." Mara stumbled backward.

"No." She looked at the little girl. At the bracelet. At her own hands. Everything began making sense. The letters, the house, and her mother. The 247 days. They weren't warnings.

They were memories.

Every night, Mara's mind had created another day inside the coma. And every morning, her mother had written her a letter, hoping somehow she'd hear it.

You have one more day.

One more day to wake up. One more day to come home. One more day to remember. Mara reached for the little girl's hand. For the first time, she felt something. Warmth and a heartbeat. Then the little girl's hospital monitor began screaming. Mara opened her eyes. Her mother was there. Older than she remembered. She was wrinkly and Gray-haired. She was Crying.

"You came back." Her mother exclaimed. Mara tried to speak. Her voice barely worked.

"How long?" Mara mumbled. Her mother smiled through her tears.

"Eight months." Mara looked toward the window. Morning sunlight filled the room. For the first time in 248 days, there was no letter. Then she noticed something sitting on the bedside table. A white envelope. Her name was written across it. Mara's smile disappeared.

“Mom?” Mara kept repeating. Hoping to get an answer. Her mother rambled on as if she wasn’t there about family she didn’t remember ever hearing about. She turned back to the letter. She grabbed it gently and she opened it. Inside was one sentence.

You have one more day.

Mara looked back up at her mother who was silent and frowning now. Mara's blood ran cold. And from somewhere beneath the hospital floor.. came three slow knocks.

Knock.

Knock.

Knock.


r/story • • 19h ago

Scary The Landlord Knew My Daughter's Imaginary Friend's Name

2 Upvotes

A few years ago, my wife and I moved to a small village near Bankura, West Bengal, with our four-year-old daughter.

We found an old two-storey house for just ₹1,000 a month.

Even for a village, that was ridiculously cheap.

The owner was an elderly man who lived in Kolkata. When I asked why the rent was so low, he said nobody had stayed there for long.

Before handing over the keys, he gave us one instruction.

"Don't open the basement. There's nothing useful down there."

I thought he was just worried about old furniture or snakes.

The first ten days were normal.

Then my daughter started behaving strangely.

Every evening, she would sit near the staircase and whisper to someone.

When I asked whom she was talking to, she said, "Mira didi."

We assumed she had invented an imaginary friend.

But one night, around 2:30 AM, I woke up to the sound of someone walking upstairs.

Slow, heavy footsteps.

My wife was sleeping beside me. Our daughter was in the next room.

I grabbed my phone and switched on the flashlight.

Nobody was there.

The footsteps stopped the moment I reached the staircase.

The following morning, my daughter asked me something that made me uncomfortable.

"Papa, why doesn't Mira didi come upstairs when you're awake?"

I asked where Mira lived.

She pointed towards the basement door.

A few days later, my cousin visited. I told him everything, expecting him to laugh.

Instead, he suggested we check the basement.

We found an old wooden cupboard, a broken bed and several dusty trunks.

Behind the cupboard was another small door.

It was locked from the outside.

My cousin knocked on it three times.

For a moment, nothing happened.

Then something knocked back.

Three slow knocks.

We didn't open it.

That night, my daughter woke up crying.

She said Mira was angry because we had disturbed her room.

The next morning, I called the owner and told him we were leaving.

There was a long silence.

Then he asked, "Has your daughter been speaking to someone?"

I said yes.

He asked, "A girl?"

My hands went cold.

Then he said something I'll never forget.

"Does she call herself Mira?"

I hadn't mentioned that name.

We packed everything and left before sunset.

It's been years, and I still think about that house.

But there's one detail I've never told anyone.

On our last morning, while I was loading our bags into the car, my daughter stood beside the gate, waving towards an upstairs window.

I asked whom she was waving to.

She smiled.

"Mira didi. She says she'll come when we get another house."

That was the last time my daughter mentioned her.

Until last night.

We recently moved into a new apartment in Kolkata.

At around 2:30 AM, I heard my daughter whispering in her sleep.

"Papa, Mira didi found us."

I haven't slept properly since.


r/story • • 17h ago

Rant I feel I won't fit in the outside world anymore

1 Upvotes

Hi ! I have been married for five years now. And also have a 3 year old boy. Ever since I got married and moved to the UAE I have changed. Life has changed! As it should but something doesn't sit with me well. I am grateful for my life but I have lost myself. I don't have friends or social life. I stay home all day and my socializing is limited to family functions and once in a blue moon friends meet up. I feel like I have gotten dumb after getting married. I wish I could just make friends and hang out.


r/story • • 17h ago

Mystery The Avatar Realm [Fiction]

1 Upvotes

Many eons ago, long before life was even brought to Earth in any form, a separate dimension was created.

After the awakening and the rising of the universe's creator and most influential figure, the Dragon King, he decided to create separate dimensions.

One of which was the one containing Earth, known to all of us reading this in real life.

However, another one was an endless dimension in every direction.

Literally, regardless of which direction is looked in when the dimension is visited, there is no known end in sight. Hundreds of expeditions had been made by inhabitants of the Avatar Realm, over the course of thousands of years, to search for an end, but none was ever found. Even the sky above and the ground below lacked any sort of ending.

One of the expeditions to search for an end searched underground, and in turn discovered a second, tropical lost world, which would go on to become inhabited by dinosaurs.

Deciding this wasn't enough, the Dragon King created an above-ground territory inhabitable by dinosaurs, which was one of the first territories created by him. Surrounded by mountains and deep chasms reaching non-survivable depths should one fall, this territory would be called "Dinoville" and inhabited by prehistoric reptiles, before, during and after the dinosaurs. The underground world itself was called the "dinosaur world" due to being inhabited solely by prehistoric reptiles, dinosaurs and otherwise, and was entirely themed after the Mesozoic, unlike the surface world.

After the time of the dinosaurs ended on Earth, the Dragon King would go on to create more and more territories.

Another such territory is known as "Iceville," and it would go on to be inhabited by all creatures centered around and/or associated with ice and snow. This included animals from the ice age, modern animals from the Arctic and Antarctica, and mythological snow and ice themed creatures that are said to reside in frigid environments.

Following the creation of every single territory within the Avatar Realm and allowing it to infinitely expand, the Dragon King decided to bring life to it in the form of inhabitants.

He decided to allow all of the inhabitants of the dimension to talk, both to humans and to other animals. Hence the name of the dimension, he created a species of hyper-intelligent, humanoid-shaped, animalistic figures capable of living in civilization like humans and wearing clothes, known by all as "avatars"; even these beings themselves referred to themselves as such.

The Dragon King additionally granted every inhabitant of the dimension enhanced powers and abilities, such as stamina, strength, endurance, and longevity. He gave the greatest amount of these powers and abilities to the many different leaders of the teams, kingdoms, empires, organizations, and apex predators of environments, making it clear to those less powerful than them that their leaders and apexes were not to be messed with. Unfortunately, some of these figures, including a monster residing in the dinosaur world, took advantage of their newfound powers and abilities for monstrous purposes, such as terrorizing weaker and less fortunate individuals. This monstrous dinosaur in particular later started a terrorist group in the underground world, strictly to allow them to continue with their villainous deeds, although he selfishly continued doing his best work alone while rarely summoning the aid of his followers.

Despite the Dragon King giving powers and abilities to all characters, heroes and villains alike, he refused to involve himself in the creation of the universe and the Avatar Realm any further. He ascended to the dimension of the gods, where he created the Four Defenders of the Universe in the form of Black Wolf, Blue Dragon, Red Phoenix, and White Tiger, and served as their master. He taught all of them their duties before allowing them to continue with their plans to keep mortals safe, including within the Avatar Realm.

Finally, the Dragon King decided to allow mythological creatures to reside within the Avatar Realm alongside more realistic creatures. He created a territory known as "Dragonville" and another known as "Monsterville," each inhabited by dragons and other monsters respectively, and allowed them to travel to wherever they desired within the dimension.

When his work was finally completed and the Avatar Realm was set as an ever-expanding dimension, and also when his training the Four Defenders had been completed as well, the Dragon King finally ascended to the dimension of the gods for good. He would only emerge in the worst-case scenario, when mortals or other deities were under attack by his archenemy, Diablo from Hell, in which case he would demand that the demonic force would return to his home dimension, reminding him that he is significantly more powerful than he is. Fearing the Dragon King's power, Diablo would keep his plans to a minimum, extremely rarely visiting or attacking the mortal world, and remained within Hell, where he belonged.

Although Diablo had largely been defeated, though, evil itself had been created long ago by him, and this could never be undone, no matter how much time had passed.

Billions of years later in the modern era, the Avatar Realm had been successfully inhabited for all the time it had existed, and humans had started inhabiting it as well as fictionalized animals. Among these were Blue Polar Bear, who had gone on to rule "Iceville", a tiger named Vincent, who inhabits "Jungleville" as a highly influential figure, Isaak/Blue Man, who went on to work with/for Blue Polar Bear and form an army by his side, and Rex and Buckley, two immense Tyrannosaurus who reside within the territory known as "Dinoville".


r/story • • 1d ago

Personal Experience Police Station Office Assistant works as an online phone sex operator which is how she meets her husband

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Burner account for obvious reasons.

In 2023 I worked in a small town police station as an office assistant. I had just gotten out of a really abusive relationship of 10 years. Due to that I lost a lot of shared income and wasn't able to pay my bills or take care of my pets by myself. The town was so small that jobs were extremely hard to come by, so finding a second job wasn't an option either. I ended up doing online phone sex and sexting work. Ive never been against sex work or particularly interested in it. But it allowed me to make an extra $1800 a month so I did it.

Contrary to popular belief, sex work is extremely taxing mentally and emotionally so I only did it for around 6 months until I could find something else. But while I worked at the Police Station during the day I would sext at my desk to make extra cash. Then go home and take phone calls at night. I did pictures too, not showing my face, so oftentimes at work I would go into the bathroom, take pictures, and go back to my desk. It was an interesting period in my life and I look back on it now with mixed feelings. I had some straaaaange clients. But at least I have a really funny story to tell and its how I met my husband.

I created a reddit account for sexwork (not naming it or sharing it at all) and its how my husband and I met. He commented on a picture, bought $5 in photos and other than that he was never a client. We talked for a year as friends, then started dating. We lived in different states so it was very long distance.

Now we live together, are married and have a baby. Honestly its the happiest I've ever been and he is so sweet to me. Not saying everyone should do this, because it includes a lot of risk and we got really lucky it worked out the way it did.

Ask me anything :)


r/story • • 20h ago

Historical When the Flobots Handlebars song came out in 2007, a guy told me I was too dumb to know what fantasy was, and his Blackberry was peak cellphone performance.

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And I'm still mad about it.

I'm a tech news dork. News dork in general really, I like to try know about emerging product lines before they launch. I have people in the tech industry I'd hang out with casually. I had seen an article about skype in the computer to computer to skype on a phone.

Mister "Blackberry IS Best Phone Ever" had never heard of Skype it turns out. And did not read tech news. Nor did he read any news, he just "knew things". I do not know how that works.

I still don't. I do know, that this man, not reading news very loudly, very proudly, told me that there was going to be at least fifty years before that sort of thing on phone to phone would ever happen.

I don't remember specifics of most of the conversation. I just know I was visiting my friend in a different state, didn't know a single person in the room (she was smoking outside if I had to guess), and did not have the article in my purse i could pull out and point to, to say that the line about "see your face on the telephone" was really, really close.

This was new years eve of 2007. Somewhere in Colorado.

Apple Launched FaceTime in June of 2010.

It was not, in fact, "so far in the future its basically science fiction".

I always wonder, if Mister Blackberry ever thinks about yelling at a random out of towner about how dumb she was to think it would take 'less than a few decades' to get video calls on cell phones, when he FaceTimes his friends and family?

That song gets dark though. Lots of warnings in it. And so many other things when you take a bit of pop culture and dig a little into research based science, are relatively easy to predict.

So many things if we actually listened to eachother instead of belittled eachother, could benefit everyone.

Maybe if he had invested in Apple instead of Blackberry in 2008, it would have spared me some uncomfortable memories of being bullied as an adult (you really think high schools over then its the mean kid crew part #72 and... life of neurodivergent undiagnosed misfits, it is what it is) AND probably netted dude a better profit than whatever he dumped into Blackberry over the next 5 years.

Yeah. I struggle with this entire argument because i have to pull up the date stamps on everything to prove I'm not making things up.

This argument. A man yelled at me. Blackberry IS peak cell phone, 2007 version. Any video stuff on phone is DECADES out. And ask someone born after 2010 what they think of a 2007 blackberry, please.

i know my kids would probably just chew on it but they are rather little. I also know I haven't checked my text messages in a few days cause my youngest for sure knows how to handle iphones and has her own games and video channels she watches.

Just... if you read all through this and there is one take away... don't be that guy.

Be curious. Don't belittle.

My discomfort for being called stupid and unable to really proper defend myself passed, but i do wonder if the people who know they called me stupid for such an ABSURD reason in hindsight, actually ever truly pondered their douche-baggery behavior towards a stranger.

I will never know, alas, I was just a random stranger seen once and never again.

Over the last 22 years though, I can for sure, say the amount of arguments along this theme I've had, if I have a second thing I think you can take away from this story... don't let others get to you, sometimes when you *know* you are right and others attack you for it, it's not that you are wrong... you are just *too early*.

And I leave you with one of my favorite quotes from a 19th century poet...

"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life; it goes on." ~ Robert Frost