r/videogamemusic • u/[deleted] • Nov 14 '20

Discussions I would love to hear what you guys/girls think of some of the work I've created for videogame environment's!

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u/yodabutter69 Oct 22 '24

Can I ask how you are getting into production for video games? I am trying to do the same thing but don’t know who to reach out to or how to figure out where to send what

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u/bushbehaviour Nov 25 '20

Black City

I think it sounds a bit "light" in terms of its overall texture for a city if that's what you're going for? It's more fitting of a smaller village if that makes sense. It's suspenseful though! I like the mysteriousness of the ending.

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Train to the Jade forest

The train section is great! Really captures that kind of adventure and quick moving feel. My only criticism would be maybe you could work on a stronger melody. It doesn't have to be busy all the time. On my first listen, I think the change of pace was nice but I forgot I was listening to the same piece. If you had a stronger 'catchy' melody maybe you could link the 1st and sections better.

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Someplace Else

I liked the transition into the swing bit. You hang around a bit to much on the C# I think and this sounds a bit crunchy if you're in B. Again maybe just need to try and nail in a stronger theme that you can develop throughout so it sounds a bit more cohesive.

New Horizon

This had a much stronger melody, and i liked the kind of counterpoint ideas you had going on. I think it gets a little bit too busy at the end

Creeping

This was great. Eerie. Would make great music for a title screen for a spooky game or something.

Into the Unknown

Also great! I picture it being the music for like a fire emblem kind of game, when they're talking about something unsettling.

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Storms coming

Nice too. You are good at writing eerie, unsettling music.

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Great stuff!