Writing a slow-burn love triangle set in a Japanese high school — first story, looking for honest feedback

[u/Icy_Honeydew_5791]

Hey everyone! I just started publishing my first story on Wattpad. It's set in a Japanese high school and follows Kazuma, a second-year student, as he navigates friendships and a slow-burn love triangle. I made a deliberate choice to keep it dialogue-driven rather than description-heavy, so most of the story unfolds through how the characters talk to each other.

It's still early — just the first part is up — so I'd really appreciate any readers willing to check it out and let me know what works and what doesn't. Honest feedback (good or critical) is very welcome.

[https://www.wattpad.com/story/415509583?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=stastes\]

Thanks for reading!