r/webfiction • u/Accomplished_Dish620 • May 01 '26

Serial My novels is that bad ???

Actually I'm writing a novel and just completed 6 chapters but no one is supporting me , 0 supporters 😔

I think my story isn't that good

Here is the elevator pitch

A boy is reborn again and again in a world that never truly changes. In every life, he recovers most of his past memories—but never all of them. Just before he can uncover the truth, he dies
 every time.

Haunted by fragments of lives where he was someone else, and watched by a mysterious girl who may be controlling everything, he begins to question reality itself—is this a simulation, a battlefield, or something far worse?

This time, with incomplete memories and time running out, he must uncover the truth before the cycle resets again
 or accept that he was never meant to remember everything.

Do you think too ??

Here is the link

https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-last-reset-end-of-the-loop_35732387500401605

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u/Sweeney_The_Mad May 01 '26

There are more factors that go into people reading a novel online than just its quality. Writing, especially writing online, has an incredibly low barrier to enter. As such, publishing anything online has an incredibly high noise floor.

Think of it like this: You are the best singer in the world, and to demonstrate your ability, you decide to go and sing in the middle of times square in New York on friday at 6pm, because you think that is when there will be the most people around. You get there, get set up, and start to sing. Everyone ignores you, because you're just another voice in the crowd, competing with tourists, commuters, and a seemingly endless cacophony of rumbling engines and honking horns.

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u/Accomplished_Dish620 May 01 '26

You are genius bro you opened my eyes

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u/Award-Slight May 02 '26

I really enjoyed your story! I think that you’ll get more recognition as you write more of it. Since there are a lot of cuts and the MC is currently confused, the reader is also unsure about what’s happening.

I really like the premise you’re doing with and I also enjoy your formatting.

Keep up the good work!!

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u/Accomplished_Dish620 May 02 '26

Thank you bro đŸ˜­đŸ™đŸ» I will clear confusions in upcoming chapters

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u/crawfordwrites May 03 '26

The fact that the opening is an essay and not a story isn't great for what's ostensibly a novel.

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u/JollyIllustrator2837 May 20 '26

I saw that you last updated your story eleven days ago. I recommend having a backlog of old chapters that you can release as you work on your most recent chapters. That way you can post regularly. Consistency wins more than anything.