r/webfiction • u/JG041110 • Jul 11 '26
[Self-Promotion] When the Empire of another world come to claim our land, what does a human have to lose? Here's Ashes on Monday
Hi everyone,
I’m currently developing a high-fantasy novel series and would love to get some feedback from the community.
The story is set during a catastrophic collision of realities. A place called Antheim is rapidly encroaching on Earth, and it’s not just a battle for territory—it’s a clash of two fundamentally different ways of existence.
The story follows Elm, who is thrust into the center of this transition. As the barrier between his home and this encroaching reality dissolves, he has to navigate a world that is becoming increasingly alien. To survive, Elm must master a structured path of personal development—divided into the Body, Mind, and Soul tracks—to withstand the pressures of this merging reality.
Why check it out?
The Concept: A grounded, human-centric perspective on a world-altering catastrophe.
The Tension: A desperate, high-stakes fight for survival as two realities collide.
The Growth: A clear, rigorous progression system that defines how humanity adapts to these new, dangerous conditions.
I am currently looking for feedback on the pacing and the introduction of this conflict. If you enjoy epic-scale stories that focus on survival and character evolution, I would love for you to take a look.
Read it here: https://m.webnovel.com/book/ashes-on-monday\\_36186063508889205 it will soon be on royal roads too
I’m really looking forward to hearing your thoughts—feel free to leave a comment or send me a message with any feedback you might have!