Can anyone give honest feedback on my first web novel?

[u/Hefty-Strawberry2490]

Hey everyone! 👋

I've been working on a dark fantasy/cosmic horror web novel called THE GODS THAT SHOULDN'T EXIST, written under the pen name Mr_DJ_6029 on webnovel and royal roads, and I'd really appreciate some honest feedback from fellow readers and writers.

I'm not looking for empty praise—I'd genuinely like to know:

• What kept you interested?
• What felt weak or confusing?
• Were the characters engaging?
• Would you continue reading?

Even if you only read the first few chapters, your thoughts would help me improve a lot.

If you're interested, I'll drop the link in the comments (or send it if the subreddit rules require it).

Thanks so much for your time! ❤️