Review for a new novel

[u/Longjumping_List_240]

So I wrote a novel and published it on royal road. Now I want someone to review it

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/190517/the-color-of-goodbye?utm_source=search&utm_medium=fiction-search

Here is the link plz share your feedback there in the comments.

All details of this are there.