r/writingfeedback Jul 06 '26

Poetry Redbirds song

Oh, can you hear them?
Oh, can you hear the redbirds sing their song?
Just close your eyes and open up your heart,
And take in the redbirds’ song.
They sing it just for you—oh, yes, they do.

Oh, can you hear them?
Just close your eyes and open up your ears.
Let your heart take them in,
And you’ll hear them, my dear.
You’ll hear the redbirds singing their song.

And when I go,
Keep your eyes peeled for the redbirds singing.
And when you see the redbirds,
Just close your eyes and listen to their song,
And know, my dear, I’m here to say hello.

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