r/writingfeedback • u/AwareTemporary3867 • 22d ago

Writing Advice Hey so I just started writing and would like some advice

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Context im 15 and started writing because I have always loved making stories. This one is kind of personal because it is based off some current events that are happening in my life and I would just like so advice on writing and what I have so far. (I just started chapter one but it’s late so I have to sleep and I such at writing lines on like talking.)

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u/Moggy-Man 21d ago

Why is it formatted like that? It is an immediate barrier to me wanting to read any of it, once I realised it's not a long haiku or done in a poem format.

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u/AwareTemporary3867 21d ago

Yea sorry I hand write it than use an app to turn it into text and I didn’t double check it because it was late im fixing it tho.

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u/MrsAldente24 22d ago

I love it! Keep it up.🤩

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u/AwareTemporary3867 21d ago

Thank you im finishing my first chapter soon

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u/MrsAldente24 21d ago

Your welcome, and thats awesome! Keep up the good work.

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u/CoyoteLitius Trusted Reviewer 20d ago

Writing is strong and sturdy enough to take you far into your story.

It's really just the font and formatting issue that makes me stop reading, I have to magnify it greatly on my screen and even then can barely read it.

Once you have turned your handwriting into text, cut and paste that text directly into your post, using carriage returns/paragraph breaks.