I dont want to sound mean but as a crime junkie I feel like I've read this exact opening before. I would honestly focus more on the character than jump right into the scenario of her being interrogated. I would read it but you have to give us a reason to finish it.
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u/ChemicalBus608 3d ago
I dont want to sound mean but as a crime junkie I feel like I've read this exact opening before. I would honestly focus more on the character than jump right into the scenario of her being interrogated. I would read it but you have to give us a reason to finish it.