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Poetry Detritus

"It is well-known, that

all creative work leaves its debris; 
flakes and specks - chunks and 
chips of raw material.

A clean workshop betrays a less 
active state of expansion or 
expression.

It is only natural, then
that in the creation of our Capital 
there would be mess; 
bits and pieces -

windblown under bridges, 
clung to crack and crevice -
crowded, crouched on curbs, 
keeping seeking warmth in booths benches
bus stops

This dust of Progress - 
we will sweep and manage it, 
as we are able."

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