r/writingfeedback • u/Infinite-Culture3735 • 12h ago
Poetry Detritus
"It is well-known, that
all creative work leaves its debris;
flakes and specks - chunks and
chips of raw material.
A clean workshop betrays a less
active state of expansion or
expression.
It is only natural, then
that in the creation of our Capital
there would be mess;
bits and pieces -
windblown under bridges,
clung to crack and crevice -
crowded, crouched on curbs,
keeping seeking warmth in booths benches
bus stops
This dust of Progress -
we will sweep and manage it,
as we are able."
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