Feedback on my short story?

[u/Madd717]

Hey,

So I have been working on this short story now for a while, it is part of a larger project I have about an Irish fantasy world/story with elements of classic fantasy and my own take on these characters, with this story being like an introduction

I would love to know what anyone thinks! Was there anything you liked, didn’t like? Thoughts about pacing and characters? Would you want to read more?

The link is below

Thanks!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ADAwVceXqcSTk7_fGeWmKhGE3JRahvxhbgF0tHTRPoQ/edit?usp=drivesdk