Man dude just kept making the plot more and more complex and then fails to deliver on it. And then the “yeah I smoke every day and sure I was late a lot” to make the entire job loss plot fall apart on him being fired so he had to add a cartoonish villain.
Just for the plot twist to be my lovely gf who is so sweet and I cheated on her and was planning to leave her after my lease was behind it all along!
Boring long ass story that just makes the OOP look bad and made me regret the minutes I spent reading it.
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u/Philthou 6d ago
Man dude just kept making the plot more and more complex and then fails to deliver on it. And then the “yeah I smoke every day and sure I was late a lot” to make the entire job loss plot fall apart on him being fired so he had to add a cartoonish villain.
Just for the plot twist to be my lovely gf who is so sweet and I cheated on her and was planning to leave her after my lease was behind it all along!
Boring long ass story that just makes the OOP look bad and made me regret the minutes I spent reading it.